Immortality Begins with the Myriad Phenomena Origin Stance

The book is alright, but the problem now is that it just writes about the setting without any examples. It keeps writing about how powerful the protagonist is and how strong the skills he creates are, but in the end, it's just about how powerful he is.

Now I know why this book did so poorly. It's half-hearted, half-satisfying, always holding back its true strength. After each battle, the narrator says, "This isn't your true strength," or "It's only one-tenth of your total strength." You might as well just show your full strength! It's purely disgusting. It hides cultivation levels and techniques, and it's also about easily changing one's bones.

Having read 43 chapters and still finding the protagonist is only 6 years old, I finally gave up on continuing. Honestly, I personally don't like reading about young protagonists. I thought the story would quickly transition to adulthood, but it seems I was naive.

I suggest referring to "The Lord of Xuanhuang." If you want to create a celestial realm, you inevitably need to cultivate native experts; otherwise, it feels awkward and unsettling to have only the protagonist in the entire world. Furthermore, cultivating experts should be beneficial to the protagonist; otherwise, it feels wasteful to cultivate experts simply for the sake of world advancement.

To surpass the limits of heaven and earth under their oppressive influence is what truly justifies your character. The more I read the recent chapters, the more I feel you've strayed from the main plot. The so-called problems with the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, the so-called "life poison," are essentially just pure water turning into polluted water.

Writing like this would be pointless; the stronger the protagonist, the stronger the enemy.

It's tasteless to watch, but a pity to throw away. The later plot is really old-fashioned and melodramatic. I'm tired of it. Moreover, the protagonist's speed of getting overpowered can't keep up with the author's speed of creating a nested doll. It's terrifying.

The advantage is that the beginning and release are somewhat original, but then... Nothing. The plot is extremely clichéd; anyone with even a little experience with martial arts, fantasy, or cultivation novels can guess what will happen next at a glance.

It's been written like a typical fantasy martial arts leveling-up story. Looking back, the pacing is too slow; it hasn't even begun, lacking the grandeur of dominating the world, spreading the Dharma, gathering the wisdom of all beings for one's own use, and viewing everything in existence as tools and resources—the kind of unparalleled spirit and the corresponding heart required.

Chapter 241 introduces the concept of infinite flow and clones; judging from these two points, the rest of the book is subpar! The author seems to lack the energy, no wonder the title was changed. No wonder it became a free book for a limited time!