After Thirteen Years of Cultivation, I Finally Inherited the Legacy of the True Lord Erlang

It was alright, I watched it all in one go, but the phrases "breath of mountains and rivers," "breath of great rivers," and "breath of mountains and rivers" sounded really awkward. "Mountains and rivers" simply means mountains and rivers; it could have been more balanced, like "great river" versus "high mountain," etc. I suggest changing it to something like "breath of mountains" or "breath of rivers," that would sound much better.

Why are there so many old men as the main characters in novels now? Is it because there are more old men reading books?

Let me explain why I don't want to read it anymore. The female lead is so ridiculously written! A noblewoman gets saved by a common soldier and falls in love with him?! You could have just not written a female lead at all!

The protagonist returned home injured, right? They should have arranged for him to become a minor military officer in the village or county, leading troops or training able-bodied men, and later become a general guarding a region or leading troops into battle. I've never seen this kind of writing before.

They start by poisoning the enemy, and then they don't even eliminate the threat during the duel. They even talk about playing the long game, but don't they know the protagonist's current situation? Shouldn't they need time to develop? You're not even a martial arts master yet, so where does your confidence to act so recklessly come from? Fishing for big fish? Aren't you afraid of capsizing?

The writing style and plot are fine, but the cultivation experience is very difficult to read. Despite bearing the title of Erlang Shen, he was essentially a shut-in who relied on drugs and precious materials to build up his cultivation. His trained hawks and hounds were merely for show, and he did little to search the mountains or eliminate demons; it was all man-made disaster.

Awkwardness is my only assessment of this book; it's just average.

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Is this martial arts master really that good? He hasn't achieved anything after 13 years. Will his second or subsequent works just become ordinary? If so, it's better not to watch them at all.

You've been rambling on and on, and you're still not done after 10 chapters on building a solid foundation in martial arts? I don't even dare to think about whether you'll be able to break through to chapter 20 in the future.