After Thirteen Years of Cultivation, I Finally Inherited the Legacy of the True Lord Erlang

It's okay. I watched it all at once, but it's really embarrassing to watch Breath of Mountains, Breath of Rivers, and Breath of Mountains and Rivers. Mountains and rivers means mountains and rivers. It can be a little more confrontational, like rivers versus mountains. I suggest changing it to something similar to Breath of Mountains and Breath of Rivers, which sounds better.

Why are so many of the protagonists in novels nowadays being Lao Deng? Is it because more Lao Deng are reading books?

Tell me why you don't want to read it. The writing of this bad heroine is too nonsensical. The daughter of a wealthy family was saved by a big-headed soldier like you and fell in love with you! ! ! ! ! You don't have to write about the heroine

Didn't the protagonist go home injured? The protagonist should be arranged to be a small military attache in the village or county, leading troops or training young warriors, etc. Later, he will become a general who guards one side or leads troops to fight. This writing method is also good. I have never seen this writing method.

He used poison at the beginning, but didn't eliminate the root cause in the competition. He also talked about taking the long term to catch the big fish. Don't you know what the protagonist's situation is now? Doesn't it take some time to develop now? How do you get the confidence to be a prostitute when you are not even a martial artist? Are you still catching big fish and not afraid of capsizing?

There's nothing wrong with the writing, plot, etc. It's just that the cultivation experience was painful to watch. With the name Erlang Zhenjun, he is actually just sitting at home and relying on taking drugs and treasure materials to build up his cultivation. Training hawks and dogs is just a decoration. Searching mountains and slaying demons has basically no effect. It is all a man-made disaster. In addition, it is okay to start as a seventh-level casual official without delaying the reincarnation of the true king. Later, it is very difficult to go from the sixth-level general to an official directly. When you become a general, you have to open a martial arts school. It seems that you have to intervene in everything.

Embarrassing is my only evaluation of this book, it belongs to the general category

It is an internal investment work, but due to the recommendation mechanism, it may be signed for 30,000 words. Investors, please be patient and provide some follow-up data if you can!

Is this martial artist awesome? It hasn't been done in 13 years. It's unlikely that the second one or the following ones will become a mass product. If that's the case, it's better not to watch it.

The long-winded Che Lulu said back and forth that Chapter 10 of making up for the foundation of martial arts is not over yet. You don't even dare to think about whether it will be enough to break through Chapter 20 in the future.