The Strange Immortal: Starting as a Traveling Merchant

In a dark spiritual world, the protagonist must be darker than the people in this world to be attractive. Rather than still holding firm to one's own bottom line and acting according to the rules of one's previous life. Not many people would be willing to continue watching the frustrating plot.

There is a problem. The title of the author's book is a traveling businessman, and he also has a tendency in this direction. Why do he keep writing some messy plots, and do not rely on transactions to quickly improve his abilities. Only when he is strong can he live a more stable life and find more accessories. And there are always a lot of messy plots, which are too tightly written and very depressing.

After reading the highlights of this book, many of the heroines were immediately persuaded to quit.

The author probably won't come back to read it anyway. The author has the ability, the spirit, and the ideas. The setting of the work is huge and complex. There are many characters present. Although there are many places that imitate other writers' settings, it is still interesting overall. However, the setting of this work is too large and complicated, which is beyond the author's control. They are greedy for perfection and do not take care of the expressive ability of their own stories, but pursue too complex world views and settings. As a result, all the characters in it fell into a kind of Shuijingbaqi realm: I predicted your next move; I predicted your second move; I predicted your second move, and I predicted your second move. Such a story with too many flips is actually not interesting at all. The famous writer Love Diving Squid once said from the characters Meng Qi and Gu Xiaosang in the work that the conspiracy reversal design can only have three layers at most. This is both a mystery story in the plot and a way for Squid to tell the play through the characters' mouths. It means that if Stronger than Squid wants to keep the story interesting, it will only design three layers of reversals at most. For example, when it comes to arrangements, it's OK when you get to Song Wuduan's level. If someone can arrange Song Wuduan's work "unknowingly" on the next level, it's boring. It is enough that the Tingen incident was arranged by Ince. You may say that Yin Si was arranged by Ya Zao, Ya Zao was Bai Zao's arrangement, and Bai Zao was arranged by "God"... But no, Ya Zao was just "laissez-faire" to Yi Zao. Similarly, the setting of abilities is also the same. Although there are many other shores that can be traced back in one life, Cuttlefish arranges that most of them are doing reduction and emptying, and they do very few actions (the demon emperor even only did one action of letting the demon saint replace him). The main games focus on Sanqing, Jinhuang and Mofo. There are only two in the long night. It's the same with my girlfriends, every path has great flaws, and there's still a lot that can't be done unless you go back to the old days. And in this book, every great master is a chess player, and everyone wants to make two moves. It gets very messy. You may say, "Great power is You can be detailed in settings, and you need to know how to "subtract" when writing novels Of course, you understand that these contents are the author's inspiration, and it would be a pity to abandon any of them. But knowing how to "give up" is a basic skill as an author.

What businessman? It should be the clerk in the store. He has to spend money to buy his own things. The system uses the host's things and then recycles them, translates them, and resells them to the host. This wave of operating systems are businessmen, and the host is a wage earner.

Idiom Solitaire Tower. Whimsical

Collecting the fragments to form a cheat + a powerful smart cheat can basically be a death sentence. The foreshadowing of the events is so long and smelly. Readers from God's perspective are so happy that it's all gone. There are so many and complicated characters. Let's start a new book.

The author's construction of the worldview is complex but not delicate enough. The setting is a melting pot, but the melting pot only remains at the setting level. What are the local customs and customs under the melting pot? Details of life? The problem is that the author has to set up a complicated world view and let the protagonist enter the world in a high position, carry a complicated setting, and be involved in a big event at the beginning. Obviously the author's writing power and experience are not to this level. The result is a large setting + a pure tool protagonist + a superficial character plot. I have been following it to the latest chapter. I can only say that it is a pity. It feels like it is a waste of food and a pity to abandon it.

I feel that most people come to see traveling merchants trading with others, but you are almost selling mutton with a pig's head. .

I didn't realize until later that you had seven or eight hundred chapters and were still in the first big realm. How many do you plan to write, and it's also very calculated😓