The Strange Immortal: Starting as a Traveling Merchant

In a dark cultivation world, the protagonist must be even darker than the people in that world to attract viewers. A protagonist who clings to their own principles and acts according to the rules of their past life is not a compelling character. Few people would be willing to watch a constantly frustrating storyline.

There's a problem. The author's titles all mention traveling merchants, and there's a clear inclination towards that theme, so why does the author keep writing about disjointed plots? Why not focus on how trading helps the author quickly improve their abilities? Only by becoming stronger can they live more peacefully and find more parts. Also, the plot is too rushed and feels oppressive.

The mention of multiple female protagonists in the book's highlights was enough to make me want to give up on it.

Anyway, the author probably won't come back to read it. The author is capable, ambitious, and has ideas. The work has a vast and complex setting and a large cast of characters. Although it imitates the settings of other authors in many ways, it is still interesting overall. However, the setting of this work is too vast and complex, to the point where the author couldn't control it.

What kind of merchant? It should be the shop assistant. You have to pay for your own things, but the system uses the host's things, recycles and translates them, and then resells them back to the host. The operating system is the merchant, and the host is just an employee.

Idiom chain game. ·Nbsp;  (yìxiǎngtiānkāi)

The idea of ​​collecting fragments to create a cheat system plus an overpowered AI cheat system is basically a death sentence. The plot development is tedious and drawn-out, completely ruining the reader's enjoyment from the perspective of an omniscient reader. The characters are too numerous and disorganized. Time to start a new book.

The author's world-building is complex but lacks detail. It's set up as a melting pot, but the melting pot remains only at the setting level. What about the local customs and daily life beneath the melting pot? The problem is that the author, given the already complex world-building, wants the protagonist to enter the world from a high position, burdened with complicated settings, and involved in…

I feel like most people come here to see travel merchants trading with others, but yours is more like a case of false advertising.

I only realized towards the end that you're still stuck in the first major realm even after 700-800 chapters. How much are you planning to write? And it's all so calculating! 😓