Biographies of the Sword Immortals of Shu Mountain

San Mao Zhenjun and Zhang Ziyang are the real Taoist masters in history, and they are also officially recognized gods. Their eyebrows are not as good as the novelist said. They are just like Hongjun in the list of gods. It is bullshit. It is too outrageous to praise him as the number one golden immortal in eternity.

The protagonist is like a stupid pig. He went to a place to practice his trump cards. He couldn't sit still and went out for a walk and was beaten. After learning from the pain, he decided to practice his trump cards completely. Halfway through the training, his father was accepted by Emei as his apprentice. He was so angry that he ran out and was beaten again. People say that eating one sting will make you wiser. The protagonist eats one sting and eats another sting again. He is really a greedy cat.

If you don't know how to write plots about women, then there should be fewer plots. To be honest, readers nowadays don't have to have women to keep their expectations high. I felt so embarrassed when I read it. At the beginning, he and Jiang Xue went up and down to kill him, regardless of whether the protagonist was absorbing the water vapor intentionally or not, and then just laughed away the grudge. If the protagonist had not escaped, his death would have been in vain. This part is a bit poisonous. Also, your reaction to the female-female interaction protagonist is too awkward. Other plots are pretty good. I suggest you write less plots about women.

After the protagonist cultivates immortality, the protagonist's enemy takes his father into the house. The protagonist is automatically inferior to the enemy. At the same time, he has to bear the reputation of being unfilial when dealing with the enemy. It's really wonderful! ! ! And the heroine! The first time I met the heroine, the heroine almost killed the hero, and then insulted the hero's master. Under such circumstances, she could still fall in love, which is really amazing!

The protagonist practiced escape skills and accidentally collected water vapor while on the road. One female character just struck out with a sword, endangering her life. After the protagonist apologizes, the female character starts insulting the teacher again. The final review of the female character is good.

The description of the female character is too bad, because a vapor will kill someone, and a perverse personality will not act like this First of all, the character has a bad look, and secondly, the protagonist's subsequent description of licking her and the author's defense really made some readers feel disgusted Secondly, it is not that there are no good women in the Shushan world. Instead of being a 🐶 for Jiang, it is better to find someone else It is better for the Shushan plot to focus on cultivating immortals. It is better to write about the detachment of immortality and the spirit of a young man than to lick women.

Everyone, please abandon the book. I believe I will be disgusted by it again in the future.

Everything else is fine, but suddenly a father comes to practice immortality with the protagonist. He becomes the leader of Lianshan for no reason because of the protagonist. This is too poisonous. The description of women is very embarrassing, but it is harmless. There is no problem in advancing the plot, but the appearance of this father is really poisonous.

After all, everyone has different ideas and opinions, and everyone has a different perspective on dynasties. But I don't understand why people at the bottom of the Song Dynasty are better off than those in the Han and Tang Dynasties.

I saw something was wrong in Chapter 18, so I came out to ask if I could read it later.