Cultivating Immortality in a Bizarre World

The character design is too bad. Before being reincarnated into another world, he was a Taoist priest with many abilities. He didn't understand any situation and his abilities were not restored. When he was entangled by ghosts, he took risks to deal with a person. And when he didn't know whether he could deal with it, his IQ was lower than that of a child.

I am an old author. I have read several old books written by the author, but I couldn't follow them until half of them. What can I say about this author? The plot settings are quite good, and the writing style is also okay. But in the middle of writing, the writing suddenly became incoherent, and the plot moved here and there, making people wonder if there were a few chapters missing in the middle. Hopefully this will be better than before. I also hope that the author will review his manuscript more often.

Author, why are you writing these chapters so messy? Suddenly, a shady person pops up and pulls the protagonist into the mirror world. He just said that the life-saving lamp was not lit, and then he said "Fortunately, there is the power of the life-saving lamp" and "The life-saving lamp is about to burn out"? ? ? What are you writing about in these chapters? ? !

I hope this book is better. To be honest, this author is the only one who writes better about traditional immortality. Other so-called traditional immortals say they are immortal, but in fact they can be summed up in two words: pretentious, and the power system is too unreliable.

The protagonist robs Xiao Wu and all the female characters, uses Xiao Wu to deceive Tang San, forces Tang San to commit suicide, has Ning Rongrong cut Oscar to death, and has Zhu Zhuqing stab Dai Mubai to death. A Yin kills Tang Hao, Liu Erlong kills the master, come and take a look, just click in to watch. Start hunting the protagonist from Douluo

Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat. More than 100 chapters rely on mirror ghosts and magic potions to enhance mental strength. Rely on the shadow ashes of the shadow world to improve your health. . . . Don't you want to cultivate immortality? There is no immortal who practices hair trimming. Unfortunately, I have watched so much and wanted to see the fusion plot of Immortal Hand Break and Alien World. In the end, it all depends on the Holy Emblem of the Sun given by a native, combined with a few spells and Fu Zhuan. This is the way to cultivate immortality with wool.

I even doubted that the author had not graduated from junior high school. The mirror ghost killed people by reflecting light on the water, so the protagonist turned on the light and the water stopped reflecting... Wtf? ? ? Get rid of you and understand what reflection is, reflecting light, brother! If you turn on the light more, doesn't it mean the reflection is stronger? ? ?

What impressed me most was when I read your Legend of the Immortals of the Six Dynasties. Why did I feel that the later ones got worse as time went by?

A suggestion for latecomers, if you really can't stand it, you can read it directly from the volume of Risewal. You don't have to worry about not being able to keep up with the plot, because these are essentially two books, one prequel and one main story. It's just that this prequel has hundreds of chapters 😅. I guess he just couldn't bear to re-open a new book to continue free chapters, and he didn't want to overhaul it, so he just started from scratch and designed a plot where the protagonist runs away, and even the name of the protagonist was changed. But to be honest, starting from this volume, I have finally regained my previous style. If you had started like this, you would not be so aggressive at all. Not to mention becoming a god, if you regain your momentum during the steam period, it will not be a problem to directly become a level five minor god. I personally suggest that you talk to the editor about a limited exemption, and then explain it to everyone to start reading directly from the chapter on Escape from the Golden Cicada. I think your grades will be much better. Of course these are my personal suggestions.

Some suggestions for the author: Seeing now, I feel that the author has not grasped the selling points of the work: The first is the display and collision of the Taoist system in the other world; The second is using the naturalness and rationality of the Taoist to purify the filth of the otherworld; The third is that the protagonist should be able to establish a force with Taoist characteristics; Seeing now, the work does not force the protagonist to grow and develop. The protagonist should have his own "sense of mission" in the otherworld, otherwise the writing will always be watery. The author's previous book with a similar theme was very good in its setting of ascending to another world and exploring the fairy world. The author is good at writing incense flow, so he should give full play to his expertise in this area. Even if it is built into a Wanjie system with the previous books, it will be fine. I feel that the author is not very good at describing the details of other worlds, and the reading flavor is not enough. I have almost ordered all of them. The author should pay more attention to his suggestions. If possible, can you give me a reply? Everyone can also come up with ideas downstairs.