Cultivating Immortality in a Bizarre World

The character design is terrible. Before being reincarnated into another world, he was a Taoist priest with many skills. He didn't understand the situation, his skills hadn't been restored, and while being entangled by ghosts, he recklessly attacked one person without even knowing if he could defeat them. His intelligence is worse than a child's.

This is an experienced author; I've read several of their older books, and I couldn't finish any of them. This author, well, the plot is quite good, and the writing style is decent. However, halfway through, the writing suddenly becomes disjointed, the plot jumps around, making you wonder if some chapters are missing. Hopefully, this book will be an improvement. I also hope the author will review their manuscript more carefully.

Author, what's wrong with your writing these past few chapters? Suddenly some nemesis pops up and pulls the protagonist into the mirror world. One minute you're saying the life-protecting lamp wasn't lit, the next you're saying "thankfully there's the power of the life-protecting lamp" and "the life-protecting lamp is almost burned out"?? What are you even writing in these chapters?!

Hopefully this one will be better. To be honest, this author is the only one who writes decent traditional cultivation novels. Other so-called traditional Xianxia novels, while supposedly ethereal and otherworldly, are really just pretentious and their power systems are too far-fetched.

The protagonist steals Xiao Wu and all the female characters, uses Xiao Wu to deceive Tang San, forces Tang San to commit suicide, has Ning Rongrong kill Oscar with knife wounds, and has Zhu Zhuqing stab Dai Mubai to death. Ah Yin kills Tang Hao, Liu Erlong kills the Grandmaster. Come and see! Just click in to watch. Hunting protagonists starting from Douluo Continent

It's a blatant lie. Over 100 chapters rely entirely on Mirror Ghosts and potions to boost mental power. Physical strength is enhanced by the Shadow Ashes of the Shadow World... Cultivation, cultivation, you don't even know how to cultivate? What kind of cultivation is this? I read so much hoping to see cultivation techniques and the fusion of different worlds and realms.

I even suspect the author didn't graduate from middle school. The Mirror Ghost kills people by reflecting light off the water, so when the protagonist turns on the light, the water stops reflecting light... WTF?! Seriously, take a good look at what reflection is, man! Turning on the light makes it stronger, which just means stronger reflection, right?!

What impressed me most was watching your "Six Dynasties Immortals" series back then. Why did it feel like the later parts got worse and worse?

I can't help but complain. What a load of rubbish! After level 5, the protagonist becomes Grols again, starting from scratch. The disconnect is indescribable. I was reading a novel, but it felt like I was reading the original work before level 5 and the sequel after level 5. It's a complete rip-off to rip people off and pad the numbers. There's no coherent plot. It's utter nonsense. They didn't even reflect on their poor performance. They deserve it!

My advice to those who come later: if you really can't get through the earlier parts, you can start reading directly from Riselwald's volume. You don't need to worry about the plot not connecting, because these are essentially two books, one a prequel and the other the main story. It's just that this prequel only has a few hundred chapters 😅.