I Rewrote My Family’s History

Let me tell you my opinion. The initial results were good, but the subsequent subscriptions dropped seriously. I think it is because of the subject matter of the book. It was amazing and immersive at first glance. The first time I read it, I saw the latest chapter, and the renewal was always on. Because there were too few plots in one day, I didn't read much. I believe many people are the same. The writing is really good. I also know that the author writes part-time. I admire it very much. It is a work after work. The student party can only continue to subscribe and support.

How can a superb book not contain idioms? I'll do whatever I want first, and then follow with the author adding more details.

Poor storytelling performance? I took a look. It was released on 5.20 And has been updated until 7.30. That is to say, it has been almost 70 days. You have only updated almost 90 chapters. You can't even update twice a day. What's more, you are a small account and you didn't have much popularity at the beginning. You only have more than 100 chapters now, and you want to be famous? Why? It might be better to have a master recommend a book to you. Besides, if you haven't read this book, it only has more than 100 chapters. Even if you think the book is good after reading the comments section, you will probably put it on the bookshelf for a while and wait until you read it. If you write more books, after two or three hundred chapters, will it be better than your White Deer Plain? To put it bluntly, your expectations are too high. You can't guarantee updates if you open both devices. Are you not mentally prepared for this result?

Bailuyuan Republic of China is very well written, especially when you switch to mythology and skip the taboos later on, otherwise the book may be gone. The author has such a good historical background that he can continue writing fairy tales or historical novels. There is no need to stick to the Republic of China.

It's so powerful, it reads so silky, so delicate, I was born to write books. The setting is also very interesting, especially the combination of the past and the present. It has a feeling of being suddenly out of the world and a hundred years at a glance. It is so awesome. It is a high-quality book.

How can a qualified book circle do not have idioms for solitaire, douchebags I will do it first Step by step

To be honest, after reading the author's recent chapters, I feel that the author's biggest problem is that he is angry with himself and is stuck in a corner and unable to get out. The beginning of this book made me cry several times. I voted for it if I had a monthly ticket, and I fully subscribed. However, the recent content is not very good. The author has made many fundamental mistakes. I will briefly mention them here and hope that everyone will correct me. First, the author has no clear goal of what kind of story he wants to write. It has a god-like beginning, but does not write a complete story. It is written according to Shuangwen, and he becomes his own grandfather, and finally changes himself and changes the entire era. Written according to traditional literature, the struggle and sinking of ordinary little people in the big era at that time, the darkness and light of human nature, and the love between father and son, if written well, will be even more shocking. However, when reading the whole article, the feeling is not that of being naughty, but of being angry. The protagonist's thoughts and characterization are always different from his actions, giving people the feeling of an angry person being controlled by shackles. Second, the character changes are sudden and unfounded. I still can't understand how the relationship between the protagonist's wife and the two came about. Why did the protagonist's father change so quickly after he got rich? How could a person who loves his son like his life suddenly want to harm the Fox Fairy just because he wants him to cure his lameness? Third, being too obsessed with the character's position instead of focusing on the character itself gives people the feeling of a stereotyped character. In the end, the plot was written to death and there was no tension. The shocking words the protagonist said after attending the former young master's wedding were no longer there. The protagonist has also become a young master.

My first experience of spending money to pursue a novel was ruined by the author. There are two books before and after this book is on the shelves. Before it is on the shelf, it has a very warm story and philosophical language. After it is on the shelf, I either kill this or that. The only part of this book worth reading is the part before it is on the shelf.

The defense is broken, the defense is really broken. I haven't finished the book yet, and I can't stand it anymore, so I got up and wrote my thoughts after reading it. Jpg Looking at this book, I inevitably think of me reading Lu Xun's "Morning Blossoms Gathered at Dusk". It's like a scar. Picking up the flowers in the morning and evening is a scab, not painful, but the cruelty of the past is vaguely visible. This book is more like a knife mark of flesh and blood accompanied by blood scab, and it does not hurt. Because it is numb, only when you touch the scar can you feel the scar that was suppressed to the point of numbness under feudalism. The protagonist's life changes because of the fox fairy. The fox fairy taught him knowledge and taught him to see the world in another way. All this is novel and painful. The class gap is so high that it cannot be crossed. The more you open your eyes and look, the more painful it becomes. The last years of the Qing Dynasty were really a sad era when I think about it. The impact of the old and the new, the corrupt court, and a life that is more humble than grass. Just like the words written in the book, This piece of food grew up soaked in the blood of the people at the bottom. The land is eating people. The perspective of most of the works I come into contact with is from the perspective of a person. They have a sound mind and their own thoughts. No matter what their status is, there is always a hazy boundary between them and the world. They can understand and feel it, but they are always arrogant. This book is different. To put it bluntly, can the tenant call someone? The protagonist is one of the lower class people who has been assimilated into society. From his perspective, I can see those things in life that I know but don't want to think about. I can see Xu Cong's growth. See the transformation of his thoughts. From the beginning of obedience to feudal etiquette, to later my own thinking about class nature. He went from being a noun, a tool, to becoming a person. I hope he can do something, at least in this book, he can do something. Don't be like history, it is too cruel, the freedom piled up with the flesh and blood of countless people is too shocking.

Author, I have been following another book written by you. It was also because of that book that I invested in this book. I didn't expect you to become a eunuch. The first time you do something like this, you will have a second time. I will treat the books you write in the future with caution.