This World Is on the Brink of Collapse

How to put it? Every character the author portrays is very pure, but I personally feel that they are a bit too pure. Human nature should be complex and contradictory, not simply good or evil, pure black or flawless white. It should be a colorful picture, with various colors adorning it. Some colors may stand out, even occupying the majority, but no matter what, there will always be other colors in some corners or occupying their place among the main colors.

The author previously wrote dark fiction, which led many readers who enjoy that genre to highly criticize this book, creating the illusion that it was difficult to read. Coupled with the author's inconsistent updates (only a few chapters even with full subscriptions), the book remained lukewarm in popularity. However, in reality, this book ranked in the top five of the science fiction popularity category on Qidian.com.

I finished watching it, skipping around, and here are my thoughts. First, the characters are essentially wasted resources. Whether good or evil, even the male protagonist, none of them possess any charm whatsoever. The few I vaguely recall are 11, the Five Demon Kings, X, and later the System and the Time-Space Ruler—these are the only characters with any real distinctiveness, but even those are…

Hello, I'm your fan. I really feel uncomfortable seeing some people making fun of you. In my heart, you are a kind person who works hard towards your goals, and I will always support you. So, could you please kowtow to me? I hope you won't be ungrateful. (Doge)

I'm done with this. I was planning to wait until May 20th to post it, but I couldn't hold back anymore lol. The confident way he plays games while munching on spicy snacks is so cool! Right? Doge I originally wanted to draw him with curly hair! But I'm too bad at it! (Don't ask, I just can't draw, everyone looks the same)

Let's take a look at the author.

You clearly write very well; this book even had the potential to become a masterpiece halfway through, so why do you always start strong but end weakly? Why does the plot always feel rushed? Your previous book could be attributed to poor performance, but this book, which had thousands of monthly votes at its peak, gradually faded into obscurity after you updated less and less. Why don't you cherish your work?

A book isn't just for one person; as a cultural work, it projects a worldview and even values. Therefore, it should have positive values. If you like cold-bloodedness and ruthlessness, you can find content that caters to your values. But I think everyone should at least recognize that this is wrong; cold-bloodedness and ruthlessness are wrong, and it's not cool.

I've read about 100 chapters. It's pretty good as a light novel, but calling it a masterpiece would be an exaggeration. The plot progression is a bit stiff, especially the part around the National Day holiday.

Do you know why you're not famous despite your excellent writing and imaginative ideas? Because you're rebellious! You used to write dark and mischievous stories (although I enjoyed reading them), but now yours are short and weak. It's understandable since you're not a full-time author. But if you want to become a big star, show some fighting spirit, young man!