This World Is on the Brink of Collapse

How to say it? Every character portrayed by the author is pure, but I personally feel that purity is a bit too much. Human nature should be complex and contradictory. It is not simply good or evil, pure black or flawless white. It should be a colorful picture decorated with various different colors. There may be some colors that are particularly prominent, or even account for the majority, but no matter what, there will be other colors in some corners, or occupy their place among the main colors.

The author used to write dark literature, which resulted in a lot of people who like reading dark literature. After reading this book, they were extremely disparaged, creating the illusion that the book seemed ugly. In addition, the author updated the book, and it took only a few chapters to be fully subscribed, so the book has never been popular. But in fact, this book ranks in the top five in the science fiction popularity category of Qidian.

After dancing and chasing, let's talk about your thoughts. First, consumable characters. No matter the good villains or even the male protagonist, there is no charm at all. What I have a slight impression of is that 11, the Five Demon Kings, X, the later system and the Time and Space Dominator are just a few of them that have some unique features, but their features are extremely limited and have basically no charm at all, and the others are not worth mentioning. The author likes to write people as clowns, and then paint the enemies to death and conquer women. It is simple and crude to the extreme, and the sexual flavor is almost overflowing. Second, there is a lack of ups and downs in rhythm. Xiaobai's writing also pays attention to a rhythm, starting from the beginning, turning around, and foreshadowing. The author's mastery of this rhythm is obviously insufficient. A huge and awesome enemy often appears out of nowhere, and then the protagonist uses two props, and then suddenly kills the enemy out of nowhere the next day. The main focus is an abruptness. As a novel with combat as the core clue, everything from the foreshadowing before the boss appears, to the sense of oppression brought to the protagonist after the appearance, to the frustration of the protagonist, his efforts to upgrade, and then the defeat of the boss, are all indispensable. But in this book, a boss suddenly pops up and speaks harsh words. The male protagonist escapes through the system, then opens two boxes, downloads several copies in seconds, and curses all at once. What is this? This is... The performance of the five demon kings in the parasitic dungeon, and X's first appearance, these are the only two scenes that I think were well written. But I don't know why the author likes to use the subsequent plot to write the villain as a clown. Does he think this will make readers happy or what? Third, the clichéd setting. "Thieves of Time and Space" draws on infinite horror, and the settings of "protagonist, time and space, children of planes, and the upper world" are even more vulgar. The vest system is the highlight, reminding me of the black ball in "Killing City". But it incorporated too many messy things, including all kinds of cheesy special effects guns, and Ultraman, which really made me laugh. I thought it was a science fiction system, but it turned out to be an online game system. I feel that the author has no imagination... Fourth, expanded combat power. I'm not sure if this is a shortcoming, but I don't like it because it makes many things that were precious at the beginning of the story lose value quickly. Take Eleven for example. When I first watched it, I thought this girl was very cute, very strong, and decisive in killing. However, she would only bicker and chat like an ordinary girl in front of the male protagonist, and she was afraid of exposing her weak side. But as the male protagonist gets stronger and stronger, in the Heiying copy, he can easily crush the enemy who almost killed Eleven. In the later chess game with the master of time and space, she even became something like a hostage used to threaten the male protagonist. I became less and less interested in Eleven. I felt that she was quite dispensable. I don't like this kind of plot, just like I don't like the author writing the Five Demon Kings and X as clowns. I feel that the author is destroying interesting characters one by one and turning them into appendages of the protagonist. But as the core protagonist, I didn't feel the charm of personality. He was just a giant chuunibyou who survived the infinitely expanding fictional combat power of the novel world.

Hello, I am your fan. I feel really uncomfortable when I see some people making fun of you. In my heart, you are a kind person who keeps working hard for your goals. I will always support you, so can you kowtow to me? I hope you will not be ignorant of praise. (Dog head)

My liver is gone. I originally wanted to hold it in until 5.20, But I couldn't hold it in anymore. 23333 The confidence of playing games with spicy sticks in his mouth is so cool! Right doge It turned out that I wanted to draw it as a curly hair! But I'm so good! (Don't ask, it means you don't know how to draw. Everyone is the same)

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Obviously your writing is very good, but this book has the potential to become a god halfway through. Why does it always end in an anticlimactic way? Why is the plot always rushed? The last book can be understood as a sign of poor performance. During its glory days, this book became less and less updated after thousands of monthly votes, and then it gradually became quiet. Why don't you cherish your own work?

A book is not directed at one person. As a cultural work, it exports its worldview and even values ​​to the outside world. Therefore he should have upward values. If you like ruthlessness, you can find those who cater to your values. But I think everyone should at least realize that this is not right, that it is not right to be cold-blooded, and that this is not cool behavior. We should pursue a higher pursuit, and online novels should also have a higher pursuit. To put it simply, some literary masterpieces criticize the evil of human nature, but if they are promoting this evil, then they should be included in the banned books. If everyone pursues this evil, then our social system will collapse, and human civilization will be a joke.

After reading about 100 chapters, I found it quite good to read the novel, but the fairy grass is too much, and the plot progression is a bit stiff. The eleventh part is particularly obvious.

Do you know why you are not popular even though your writing style is very good and your imagination is wide-ranging? Because you are rebellious! I used to write about dark things and ask questions (although I also like to read them), but now it is short and weak, and you can still accept it if you are not a full-time author. But if you want to be popular, show some fighting spirit, young man!