This Poor Daoist Shall Face a Tribulation

The Seven Chapters of the Mysterious Lord's Secret Scripture (Volume 1) This volume mainly concerns the achievements of the Yellow Emperor and his astonishing... Sigh's inventions and medical skills, including even the resurrection of the dead. Technique. Immortal Sand Resurrection Building A single burst of fire can burn everything; but if everything perishes, what remains of the fire?

Authors shouldn't write about female protagonists. There can be other women, but avoid romantic storylines. I'm afraid you won't be able to handle it. In my over ten years of experience, most novels are abandoned because of the female lead.

Readers beware! The author started changing writers after "Nine Bends of the Yellow River," and the later "Investiture of the Gods" was only briefly mentioned in a few chapters. The author also seemed to have lost his mind, so it's likely he sold his account.

Whether you're selling accounts or hiring ghostwriters, could you please find someone with a similar writing style? At least "Nine Bends Yellow River Battle" was a fanfiction of Investiture of the Gods, but what comes after? A naive prehistoric world? The Three Leaders, who were supposed to be a powerful, time-bending, and seemingly inverted universe, suddenly became a third-rate prehistoric saint? Are you kidding me?

Having seen over two hundred pages, I can confidently tell you that this book has been rewritten. The difference between the beginning and the end is like the difference between a PhD in Chinese Language and Literature and a junior high school dropout.

It seems that some authors get criticized by readers not because the readers are of low quality, or because there's a communication barrier between authors and readers. Rather, it's because sometimes, when faced with authors who go back on their word yet have plausible excuses, offer numerous reasons but fail to update, or even simply give up when something goes wrong, or directly confront…

The change of characters is utter garbage. The story is completely different before and after. Before, everyone was scheming to get on the list, all smiles and joy. Now they're all full of bitterness and resentment, their character development is completely ruined. The Tongtian Cult Leader has become an idiot again, and they've messed up Shen Gongbao's race.

Holy crap! Seriously, I'm speechless. Are you really that sensitive? Someone casually comments that the writing isn't good and you get all worked up? You give up? You just abandon the story altogether? Are we, the readers who pay to follow the story, supposed to suffer like this? Did you write this novel just for the few people who criticize you?

There was clearly more encouragement than criticism. Yet the author tries to portray himself as so aggrieved, claiming there were many trolls. All I see are praise and encouragement. Is the author simply a scumbag male rapist trying to abandon the story and blame the readers? Is he even a man? Does he understand what responsibility means?

Liu Qiao: Investiture of the Gods, save me a spot! Investiture of the Gods: Boss, quickly withdraw your supernatural powers!