I Have a Wilding Knife

Without telling you how good your writing is, let me ask you how much the book has to do with jungle knives. The title of your book, "I Have a Jungling Knife", is not to mention the main plot, but at least it is a main item. The jungle knife written in the early stage did not have a strong sense of existence, and it disappeared in the later stage. What you wrote might as well be titled "I Come to Another World to Create a Path". The protagonist's main plot is to do this, and then give him a talent, gain deduction ability, or purify and absorb resentment. We came here looking for the hunting knife, but it turned out that the hunting knife was missing, and we didn't see much use for it. We couldn't even pick up the golden finger. You still blame us for talking about you. I didn't read it carefully. I thought your writing was good at first, but then it became more and more biased. Who can say that about you?

Among all the big guys who say this book is not good, can you recommend one that you think will work for me, a newbie, and let me take a look? Let me see what you say is good, oh! By the way, don't recommend trivial stories. The plot should be clear and logical. The main character and supporting characters should have online IQs. Kill decisively but not brainlessly. Don't become a bitch when you meet a girl. The benefits flow best. Let me, a 13-year-old novelist, take a look at the books that the big guys usually read.

As an old bookworm, let me express my opinion I don't know if you really understand it or if you pretend to understand it, you are all blowing rainbow farts here. Anyway, I have read more than a hundred chapters and I still don't understand what is written? The whole story is written around the protagonist. The supporting characters are all tool men with no IQ, they are a mess and don't tell the right story.

It did not write about the awesomeness of the jungle knife. Instead, it was inexplicably hunted down like a lost dog from the beginning. This is very frustrating.

What the author wrote is poisonous. In that deserted village, the protagonist has a second-level jungle knife on his body, but the protagonist pats the shoulders of the three "ghosts" (temporarily called them), which should cause damage to the "ghosts". The author also said in the previous chapter that the second-level jungle knife causes magic damage to "enemies" or ghosts within a certain range! (Everyone who plays moba should know this) No matter whether the "wild monster" attacks you or not, it will cause indiscriminate damage as long as it is within the range.

No one says anything, I'll come to the sofa! The author has done a great job! It's a pity that this month's investment has been used up.

The description of the anecdote is very good, but the character description is too poor. At first, I thought he was a knight, with principles, bottom line, and IQ! Later I discovered that logic is messed up, principles are non-existent, and IQ is based on comparison! I saw him abandon the book after entering the palace. It was really unsightly! Why is there such a thing as the main god space in the Bronze Gate? Just ask if someone comes! Kill the worthless aliens! Why are you letting people in? You're looking for weirdos everywhere and now they're coming to your door, why don't you go and cut them down? Let's not talk about Hong Yi for now. The woman who repaired the Jiu Zhang Machine slashed your face with a knife. How could you still be talking and laughing! Return to heaven and earth? After entering the palace, I couldn't help but hurry up and see the stone tablet! Don't even know what you are doing? He also helped others deal with troubles, but they still wanted to kill him, and even looked at the stone tablets and asked for help! Why is our time travel guy starting to fear the imperial power, or is he demonstrating the author's IQ in this idiot-like way?

I feel like the author is probably a bit of a licker, always making the protagonist behave uncharacteristically and have psychological activities.

The rest of this book is very good, but any random enemy can pull the protagonist into a fantasy world, which is disgusting to read.

The classic stream-of-consciousness writing method, where you write whatever comes to mind, there is no main line, the plot is confusing, and it will never come back to its full circle. A book that most people can understand!