I Have a Wilding Knife

Regardless of the quality of your writing, I just want to ask you, what does your book have to do with the jungle item? Your title is "I Have a Jungle Item," which, even if it's not central to the main plot, should at least be a major item. The jungle item's presence is weak in the early stages, and then it disappears later.

To all these experts who criticize this book, could you recommend something you think is good for this newbie? Let me see what you consider good. Oh, and please, no light novels. The plot should be logically clear, the main and supporting characters should be intelligent, and the characters should be decisive but not mindless. Don't become a simp just because you meet a girl. A story focused on self-interest is best. Let this 13-year-old newbie see what kind of books you experts usually read.

As a long-time bookworm, let me share my thoughts. I don't know if you guys really understood it or are just pretending, but you're all praising it to the skies. Anyway, I read over a hundred chapters and still couldn't understand what it was about. The entire story revolves around the protagonist, while the supporting characters are just mindless tools, a mess, and completely nonsensical.

The description failed to highlight the jungle item's strengths; instead, it portrayed the character as a stray dog, inexplicably hunted down from the very beginning. This was quite frustrating.

There's a problematic part in the author's writing. In that deserted village scene, the protagonist has a level 2 jungle item, but he still pats the shoulders of those three "ghosts" (let's call them that for now). Shouldn't that cause damage to the "ghosts"?

Nobody's saying anything, so I'm the first to comment! Author, please feature this post! Too bad this month's investment is all used up.

The descriptions of the strange tales are good, but the character descriptions are terrible. At first, I thought he was a chivalrous hero with principles, a bottom line, and intelligence! Later, I discovered the logic was chaotic, the principles were nonexistent, and the intelligence was just a matter of who was worse! I abandoned the book after he entered the palace; it was simply unbearable!

I feel the author might be a simp, constantly making the protagonist do things and have thoughts that don't fit his character.

The book is great in every other way, except that any random enemy can drag the protagonist into an illusion; it's incredibly disgusting to read.

A classic stream-of-consciousness style book, written as thoughts come to mind, with no main plot, a chaotic storyline, and no coherent narrative. It's a book that's not easily understood by the average reader!