Witch: Void Cards

Many people say that the author's writing is not very good. I feel that this is more about brain waves. I feel that it is very perfect. There is no point in saying that I feel that the plot is starting to fragment as I read it. The author's writing technique is very special and different from many others, but it is definitely not a bad one. Many people say that the plot is a bit incomprehensible, and they feel that it jumps here and there. This kind of slightly jumping writing style is quite picky for readers. This may be the reason why the author is still a first-class writer 🤭 Internet articles are still more popular with easy-to-understand narrative techniques and straightforward storylines. For example, those novels that use fragmented methods to deal with storylines in the literary world are definitely criticized when placed on online platforms. As readers, when we read the author's literary works and feel the author's spiritual expression, we must learn to tolerate things that are outside our own reading habits, not just criticize those things that we cannot adapt to. The author's way of writing is definitely weird in the current Internet writing environment, and the writing is full of a lot of black humor. The author's own jumping thinking is reflected in the protagonist. The readers feel that the protagonist is stupid. Is this kind of stupidity not the freedom that the protagonist can achieve in this dark world? ps: I am a nine-year old bookworm who believes that men wearing women's clothing does not affect the reading experience. Newbies who have never experienced the baptism of transformation literature should read a few more books and get used to it hahaha 🤭

The biggest problem with this book is that every character in the book has an IQ lower than that of a person with a disability. They do things basically without logic and are all stereotyped NPCs. 1. Let me give you an example. That Simon is obviously just a country landowner with a temper bigger than that of a king. He asks for a job but threatens a person who is powerless to resist, and then goes to death to offend the protagonist. What are you talking about the side effects of the red cloak? This is how it was in the Middle Ages. Does it make sense? It makes sense, but the grade of this book is low, because the protagonist is fighting wits and courage against a weakling. Simon, as the so-called son of destiny, does not even have any advantages. The character is shaped like a clown. This is a problem with the author's writing power Whenever Simon leaves the protagonist and suddenly realizes something is wrong, or secretly tests the protagonist's approximate abilities, the image can be more three-dimensional. 2. Secondly, the conflicts in the plot are too childish. The protagonist is hated by everyone, the supporting characters are not strict with their speech, and each leader is more mentally retarded than the other. This is a fantasy medieval world, where human life is as small as grass. Therefore, normal people should pay more attention to their speech in this environment, because there are real witches here and they cannot be offended. Those who troll people when they see them will die early. On the contrary, only in a legal society can there be trolls, because there is no price for trolling people. There are assassins, witches, heretics, and even a beggar here who may have the ability to reshape the map, which will make people do things so as not to offend others. 3. Secondly, at the beginning, one knight led one professional, and a dozen professionals dared to attack the town. As a result, the protagonist killed 200 dark professionals in one breath, and then the dark organization dared to resist? Equivalent to 1/3 of the elite within the organization, they disappeared overnight. There were no survivors, no information, and they just evaporated. It would be scary for everyone. In the mid-term, all branches of the Imperial Intelligence Department were wiped out again, and I still felt that the protagonist was just a mere witch, right? Red Moon ended early, and no one paid attention to the reason It was set up to have a fortune teller to look at destiny, but the empire actually had no talent reserves of its own, and had to ask charlatans to screen them one by one Go to fight against the Church of Abundance, one by one, just like playing a dungeon, the leader will not ask for help, peace or change families, right, just a bishop and The witch is at 55, right? The empire uses all the elites in the kingdom as cannon fodder. This is the plot that this kind of person can imagine. On the first day of the war with the Church of Abundance, 7,000 professionals were lost, and then the morale was still so high. They are all your own private soldiers. Do you really think you can command them? They ran out of money on the first night 4. There is the Earth Church, but as a result, it did not develop efficient staple food. There are diviners, but the rich and powerful need to find charlatans, and there is the industrial revolution, but it turns out that they can't reduce the dimensionality to attack. Beggars like the Witch Church have airships that travel through time and space. But the kingdom and the empire still rely on cavalry to fight, right? There are professions Or, as a result, Baron Salin, Counts and even the highest-ranking Dukes can only rely on the protagonist to save their lives. Except for the Bishop, who is Sequence 4, the other high-ranking officials are ordinary people, absolutely Drive low and go high, laugh to death, the early level is low, and it is as absurd as a fairy tale. Writing about the kingdom's campaign in the mid-term is like playing house, the skill is completely exposed

I've read most of it, so to say how well it's written, I think it's probably okay. The setting of using spiritual pumping skills to kill people is still okay, but the story is too awkward. The protagonist has no goals and beliefs of his own, and his brain - the key is the brain - is just a symbol representing the "protagonist", and is used by everyone. If it is for power, just kill; if it is for normal life, it is not difficult to control a territory behind the scenes. After all, there is still no brain. How far can a protagonist without his own thoughts and only rely on supporting characters to promote the plot? I hope I can have a little more self-respect in the future, and my butt determines my brain, instead of being like... A giant baby like now?

The writing is quite good, but why are you still being treated like a dog to that knight and being ordered around after more than ninety chapters? Does the protagonist have any psychological problems?

The daily detoxification service is well-deserved and has really given me a lot of experience. By the way, author, why don't you vote for female videos? 😥

The early stage is quite good. If the protagonist is not smart, at least he is not stupid. In the later stage, the protagonist is really stupid. Then Simon... Harms the protagonist. Simon... Explains himself or is caught by the protagonist, and then the protagonist realizes that this person wants to harm him. Who has bad intentions towards the protagonist and wants to kill the protagonist... It all has to be reminded by people around him. The supporting role does not reduce his intelligence. The protagonist is. He is mentally retarded. He doesn't care about things around him and does not prepare himself for the future. When he is being plotted, he will be plotted in vain on the pretext that he wants to draw a card. After being plotted, he pretends that nothing happened. He knows that he is being plotted again but still insists on grabbing evidence before taking action. The person who plotted against the protagonist must confess himself or be seen by the protagonist before taking action... I have killed so many high-level professionals, the master The protagonist doesn't even know what level his own strength is, and he still feels like a stupid b. He feels that he is weak, and then he is plotted and manipulated by someone weaker than the protagonist. He feels that the protagonist is higher than the servants and everything else is inferior. He is either working or on the way to work. Signing an equality contract is actually working in a different way. I really can't stand it anymore. I was taken by the master. The role is so stupid There is nothing wrong with male-to-female transformation. It is just that some people comment that male-to-female transformation is toxic. Some people don't know what to comment after reading it. They follow the trend and say that male-to-female transformation is toxic (of course there is also a setting that is really disgusting about male-to-female transformation). In fact, I think male-to-female transformation has no writing ideas... That is what matters. For example: I like to read stories without female protagonists, but if they are well written, I support them with all my hands.

I see that occasionally people are obsessed with the matter of male-to-female change. In fact, this is my neglect. I didn't expect that someone would be so disgusted. I wrote a magic story and said these things. It is true that I ignored it, so now I am asking for your opinions. Please leave a message from all book friends. If you think it should be changed to women wearing women's clothing, please rate 0. If you think it should remain the same, please rate 1. I will decide whether to modify it after reviewing your opinions. Actually, I think this thing is what it was in the previous life, and in the next life... Forget it, it mainly depends on whether book friends are disgusted with it. If they are actually disgusted with this, then change it. To be honest, this is a little uncomfortable if you think about it carefully, but it is not ambiguous. I have always written with her as a girl 😭[fn= 12]😭 If you who have supported this book to this day feel that it can be maintained, then maintain it 😁😁😁 Finally, thank you for your support. If there are still people who have not left after get off work late today, I will continue today's coding after dinner. I will look at the results at around midnight, and then. . . I hope I won't stay up late 🙂 Finally, I wish everyone who supports this book a happy day and everything goes well

The writing is messy, and the heroine has been living under someone else's roof. You can tell that the author is a woman, because a male author would write it like this: The transgender heroine starts by killing Simon Knight with a golden finger or something else, then pursues the mysterious power of the world, then fights monsters and upgrades, and finally becomes a god. So it is easy to see the styles of novels written by male and female authors. The male author writes novels mainly for pleasure and pleasure, and mainly writes about the pursuit of the power of the mysterious world. The female author is always petty when writing novels. She always gets into troubles in the palace and house, and gets entangled with all kinds of bad people.

I wanted to complain about it, but I felt that apprenticeship was not very good, so I booked some chapters and became an apprentice before I complained about it. After reading the previous part, I felt a bit poisonous. First: Abuse the Lord. It's understandable that the protagonist is weak and bullied in the early stage. After all, he lacks ability, but he can't always be bullied, right? The rabbit bites people when it is anxious. The protagonist acts like a good old lady, constantly doing things for those who bully her, a bit like "Stockholm Syndrome". Second: Bad contrast. This contrast means that the protagonist is described in the article to give people a feeling of "oh, so awesome", but the things the protagonist does are not worthy of this feeling. That is, the protagonist did not do anything consistent with this description, but was used like a tool. Third: Strange characterization. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are a bit strange. The strangeness of the protagonist has been mentioned above, and the strangeness of the supporting characters is as follows. I just don't understand why a knight lord would have so much trust in a person of unknown origin who relies solely on words. Of course, this can also be explained by extraordinary power, but it is still a bit strange. Moreover, the main problem with the supporting characters is that they have not found their own positioning. To put it bluntly, they are stupid. In a situation where there is a huge disparity in strength, it would be strange to provoke something that is obviously beyond your ability to handle, and you may need the help of the protagonist to solve it. The protagonist really looks like a tool man. Fourth: Foreshadowing. Although the author said in the first chapter that the protagonist's behavior is controlled by the evil god, everything she does is for the evil god's resurrection. However, this foreshadowing was not reflected in the previous chapters. Instead, due to this "evil god's control", the protagonist performed a lot of strange operations, which made people not understand why they did this, but also made people feel uncomfortable. The protagonist is really just a tool man. I believe that online articles must make people want to read them. No matter how wonderful and outstanding the later part is, if the first part leaves a bad impression, then it is likely that a large number of people will shout, "I can't do it anymore, I'll die from the poison" after looking at the first part, and then quickly leave. I have heard of many books opening high and selling low, but I have never heard of books opening low and selling high, because books that open low have low exposure and low popularity, and cannot attract more readers. This is just my random comment about my feelings, it doesn't have much value, just watch it for fun😂😂. The above only represents my personal subjective opinion, which is determined by my personal views and past experiences. It does not have universal applicability, does not have much value, and it is not intended to explain what to convince anyone. If anyone disagrees, then disagree. 🤪🤪

Let me just say one thing: The reason why the medieval church dared to eliminate witches was because they knew that there were no witches in the first place, so women could bully them at will. Just like the reason why the United States dares to attack Iraq is because Iraq does not have weapons of mass destruction Since the author wants to write about a world with witches, cults, dark professions, and evil gods, everyone should be cautious. Nobles must also protect serfs, because strife, plague, and famine are the evil gods' best gifts. God is not a fool, kings are not a fool, and the church is not a fool