Witch: Void Cards

Many people say that the author's writing is not very good. I feel that this is more about brain waves. I feel that it is very perfect. There is no point in saying that I feel that the plot is starting to fragment as I read it. The author's writing technique is very special and different from many others, but it is definitely not a bad one. Many people say that the plot is a bit incomprehensible, and they feel that it jumps here and there. This kind of slightly jumping writing style is quite picky for readers. This may be the reason why the author is still a first-class writer 🤭 Internet articles are still more popular with easy-to-understand narrative techniques and straightforward storylines. For example, those novels that use fragmented methods to deal with storylines in the literary world are definitely criticized when placed on online platforms. As readers, when we read the author's literary works and feel the author's spiritual expression, we must learn to tolerate things that are outside our own reading habits, not just criticize those things that we cannot adapt to. The author's way of writing is definitely weird in the current Internet writing environment, and the writing is full of a lot of black humor. The author's own jumping thinking is reflected in the protagonist. The readers feel that the protagonist is stupid. Is this kind of stupidity not the freedom that the protagonist can achieve in this dark world? ps: I am a nine-year old bookworm who believes that men wearing women's clothing does not affect the reading experience. Newbies who have never experienced the baptism of transformation literature should read a few more books and get used to it hahaha 🤭

I've read most of it, so to say how well it's written, I think it's probably okay. The setting of using spiritual pumping skills to kill people is still okay, but the story is too awkward. The protagonist has no goals and beliefs of his own, and his brain - the key is the brain - is just a symbol representing the "protagonist", and is used by everyone. If it is for power, just kill; if it is for normal life, it is not difficult to control a territory behind the scenes. After all, there is still no brain. How far can a protagonist without his own thoughts and only rely on supporting characters to promote the plot? I hope I can have a little more self-respect in the future, and my butt determines my brain, instead of being like... A giant baby like now?

The biggest problem with this book is that every character in the book has an IQ lower than that of a person with a disability. They do things basically without logic and are all stereotyped NPCs. 1. Let me give you an example. That Simon is obviously just a country landowner with a temper bigger than that of a king. He asks for a job but threatens a person who is powerless to resist, and then goes to death to offend the protagonist. What are you talking about the side effects of the red cloak? This is how it was in the Middle Ages. Does it make sense? It makes sense, but the grade of this book is low, because the protagonist is fighting wits and courage against a weakling. Simon, as the so-called son of destiny, does not even have any advantages. The character is shaped like a clown. This is a problem with the author's writing power Whenever Simon leaves the protagonist and suddenly realizes something is wrong, or secretly tests the protagonist's approximate abilities, the image can be more three-dimensional. 2. Secondly, the conflicts in the plot are too childish. The protagonist is hated by everyone, the supporting characters are not strict with their speech, and each leader is more mentally retarded than the other. This is a fantasy medieval world, where human life is as small as grass. Therefore, normal people should pay more attention to their speech in this environment, because there are real witches here and they cannot be offended. Those who troll people when they see them will die early. On the contrary, only in a legal society can there be trolls, because there is no price for trolling people. There are assassins, witches, heretics, and even a beggar here who may have the ability to reshape the map, which will make people do things so as not to offend others. 3. Secondly, at the beginning, one knight led one professional, and a dozen professionals dared to attack the town. As a result, the protagonist killed 200 dark professionals in one breath, and then the dark organization dared to resist? Equivalent to 1/3 of the elite within the organization, they disappeared overnight. There were no survivors, no information, and they just evaporated. It would be scary for everyone. In the mid-term, all branches of the Imperial Intelligence Department were wiped out again, and I still felt that the protagonist was just a mere witch, right? Red Moon ended early, and no one paid attention to the reason It was set up to have a fortune teller to look at destiny, but the empire actually had no talent reserves of its own, and had to ask charlatans to screen them one by one Go to fight against the Church of Abundance, one by one, just like playing a dungeon, the leader will not ask for help, peace or change families, right, just a bishop and The witch is at 55, right? The empire uses all the elites in the kingdom as cannon fodder. This is the plot that this kind of person can imagine. On the first day of the war with the Church of Abundance, 7,000 professionals were lost, and then the morale was still so high. They are all your own private soldiers. Do you really think you can command them? They ran out of money on the first night 4. There is the Earth Church, but as a result, it did not develop efficient staple food. There are diviners, but the rich and powerful need to find charlatans, and there is the industrial revolution, but it turns out that they can't reduce the dimensionality to attack. Beggars like the Witch Church have airships that travel through time and space. But the kingdom and the empire still rely on cavalry to fight, right? There are professions Or, as a result, Baron Salin, Counts and even the highest-ranking Dukes can only rely on the protagonist to save their lives. Except for the Bishop, who is Sequence 4, the other high-ranking officials are ordinary people, absolutely Drive low and go high, laugh to death, the early level is low, and it is as absurd as a fairy tale. Writing about the kingdom's campaign in the mid-term is like playing house, the skill is completely exposed

The writing is quite good, but why are you still being treated like a dog to that knight and being ordered around after more than ninety chapters? Does the protagonist have any psychological problems?

The early stage is quite good. If the protagonist is not smart, at least he is not stupid. In the later stage, the protagonist is really stupid. Then Simon... Harms the protagonist. Simon... Explains himself or is caught by the protagonist, and then the protagonist realizes that this person wants to harm him. Who has bad intentions towards the protagonist and wants to kill the protagonist... It all has to be reminded by people around him. The supporting role does not reduce his intelligence. The protagonist is. He is mentally retarded. He doesn't care about things around him and does not prepare himself for the future. When he is being plotted, he will be plotted in vain on the pretext that he wants to draw a card. After being plotted, he pretends that nothing happened. He knows that he is being plotted again but still insists on grabbing evidence before taking action. The person who plotted against the protagonist must confess himself or be seen by the protagonist before taking action... I have killed so many high-level professionals, the master The protagonist doesn't even know what level his own strength is, and he still feels like a stupid b. He feels that he is weak, and then he is plotted and manipulated by someone weaker than the protagonist. He feels that the protagonist is higher than the servants and everything else is inferior. He is either working or on the way to work. Signing an equality contract is actually working in a different way. I really can't stand it anymore. I was taken by the master. The role is so stupid There is nothing wrong with male-to-female transformation. It is just that some people comment that male-to-female transformation is toxic. Some people don't know what to comment after reading it. They follow the trend and say that male-to-female transformation is toxic (of course there is also a setting that is really disgusting about male-to-female transformation). In fact, I think male-to-female transformation has no writing ideas... That is what matters. For example: I like to read stories without female protagonists, but if they are well written, I support them with all my hands.

The daily detoxification service is well-deserved and has really given me a lot of experience. By the way, author, why don't you vote for female videos? 😥

I see that occasionally people are obsessed with the matter of male-to-female change. In fact, this is my neglect. I didn't expect that someone would be so disgusted. I wrote a magic story and said these things. It is true that I ignored it, so now I am asking for your opinions. Please leave a message from all book friends. If you think it should be changed to women wearing women's clothing, please rate 0. If you think it should remain the same, please rate 1. I will decide whether to modify it after reviewing your opinions. Actually, I think this thing is what it was in the previous life, and in the next life... Forget it, it mainly depends on whether book friends are disgusted with it. If they are actually disgusted with this, then change it. To be honest, this is a little uncomfortable if you think about it carefully, but it is not ambiguous. I have always written with her as a girl 😭[fn= 12]😭 If you who have supported this book to this day feel that it can be maintained, then maintain it 😁😁😁 Finally, thank you for your support. If there are still people who have not left after get off work late today, I will continue today's coding after dinner. I will look at the results at around midnight, and then. . . I hope I won't stay up late 🙂 Finally, I wish everyone who supports this book a happy day and everything goes well

The writing is messy, and the heroine has been living under someone else's roof. You can tell that the author is a woman, because a male author would write it like this: The transgender heroine starts by killing Simon Knight with a golden finger or something else, then pursues the mysterious power of the world, then fights monsters and upgrades, and finally becomes a god. So it is easy to see the styles of novels written by male and female authors. The male author writes novels mainly for pleasure and pleasure, and mainly writes about the pursuit of the power of the mysterious world. The female author is always petty when writing novels. She always gets into troubles in the palace and house, and gets entangled with all kinds of bad people.

I wanted to complain about it, but I felt that apprenticeship was not very good, so I booked some chapters and became an apprentice before I complained about it. After reading the previous part, I felt a bit poisonous. First: Abuse the Lord. It's understandable that the protagonist is weak and bullied in the early stage. After all, he lacks ability, but he can't always be bullied, right? The rabbit bites people when it is anxious. The protagonist acts like a good old lady, constantly doing things for those who bully her, a bit like "Stockholm Syndrome". Second: Bad contrast. This contrast means that the protagonist is described in the article to give people a feeling of "oh, so awesome", but the things the protagonist does are not worthy of this feeling. That is, the protagonist did not do anything consistent with this description, but was used like a tool. Third: Strange characterization. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are a bit strange. The strangeness of the protagonist has been mentioned above, and the strangeness of the supporting characters is as follows. I just don't understand why a knight lord would have so much trust in a person of unknown origin who relies solely on words. Of course, this can also be explained by extraordinary power, but it is still a bit strange. Moreover, the main problem with the supporting characters is that they have not found their own positioning. To put it bluntly, they are stupid. In a situation where there is a huge disparity in strength, it would be strange to provoke something that is obviously beyond your ability to handle, and you may need the help of the protagonist to solve it. The protagonist really looks like a tool man. Fourth: Foreshadowing. Although the author said in the first chapter that the protagonist's behavior is controlled by the evil god, everything she does is for the evil god's resurrection. However, this foreshadowing was not reflected in the previous chapters. Instead, due to this "evil god's control", the protagonist performed a lot of strange operations, which made people not understand why they did this, but also made people feel uncomfortable. The protagonist is really just a tool man. I believe that online articles must make people want to read them. No matter how wonderful and outstanding the later part is, if the first part leaves a bad impression, then it is likely that a large number of people will shout, "I can't do it anymore, I'll die from the poison" after looking at the first part, and then quickly leave. I have heard of many books opening high and selling low, but I have never heard of books opening low and selling high, because books that open low have low exposure and low popularity, and cannot attract more readers. This is just my random comment about my feelings, it doesn't have much value, just watch it for fun😂😂. The above only represents my personal subjective opinion, which is determined by my personal views and past experiences. It does not have universal applicability, does not have much value, and it is not intended to explain what to convince anyone. If anyone disagrees, then disagree. 🤪🤪

Let me just say one thing: The reason why the medieval church dared to eliminate witches was because they knew that there were no witches in the first place, so women could bully them at will. Just like the reason why the United States dares to attack Iraq is because Iraq does not have weapons of mass destruction Since the author wants to write about a world with witches, cults, dark professions, and evil gods, everyone should be cautious. Nobles must also protect serfs, because strife, plague, and famine are the evil gods' best gifts. God is not a fool, kings are not a fool, and the church is not a fool

The more I read this book, the more I feel that it shouldn't be a fantasy, but a light novel. 😆 It is recommended to read it from a God's perspective. You will find the protagonist very cute (๑• . •๑), Directly bring you into the protagonist ~ 🙂 (Beeping quietly, I feel like I am watching a novel version of animation from the perspective of God, but this is a novel, not an animation, there is no visual display, only the text has a weak resonance, but fortunately, my animation brainstorming ability is first-class and I can bring back the silly and sweet side 😆)

After seeing the part that was just released, I finally understood why some people say that the protagonist is abusive. The protagonist lets a guy who can be crushed to death with one hand keep plotting and plotting against the protagonist around him. He has to wait several times before killing the protagonist. It has always been like this, like the lord at the beginning, Killing him will always be the next time or the next time. There will be a day in the future. I will think about reality in my head but it will always be the next time. Until the people around me are controlled and poisoned, and the poison is successful. I am plotted by a group of guys who can crush him to death with one hand. The cheater personally saves the scene and laughs. He is stupid and indecisive, and even if there are cheats, he will almost die at the hands of minor characters.

Emmmm I have read many chapters of this book. I will be a little excited when I share my impressions based on the book circle, because this book is good and worthy of my excitement. The first is that I don't think the author's positioning of the book is clear. It's not that the author doesn't consider the reader's perception, but most of them make up for it, and the most important thing is that many of the settings are added by himself. The readers have no idea that there is such a setting or that many things are only followed by the author himself. Aren't you just enjoying yourself? But asking readers how they are doing from time to time is outrageous! The second is the character of the protagonist, Stockholm is not advisable. And everyone despises cool writing on the surface, but if a book isn't cool... It's somewhat boring. This book is... The protagonist can be indifferent or crazy, but he cannot be weak! As a protagonist in a novel, you can be tough and unreasonable, but... Abandon yourself and become a dog for others? Even if this is the opinion of the evil god, I still feel unhappy! Note, it's not unreasonable, it's unpleasant! ! It's really frustrating to read novels and emo for such boring reasons! The third issue is the strength of the protagonist. To be honest, I think the promotion route of the protagonist is too disruptive to the balance, and the salty fish mentality is undoubtedly the most annoying mentality. The protagonists in the good books I have read will be relaxed, but they will never give readers a "salted fish" or "muddling through" feeling. This reflects that the author may have controlled the pace too slowly. It is recommended to speed up! Strength tips are the only way to relax in this dirty world (compared to the real world, this world is indeed too dirty). Now the author can't compress it like this! That's all, that's all for the time being. The advantage lies in the author's imagination and shaping of the world! The dirt in this world is really overflowing, so I think the author is very powerful. I believe that after some failed attempts in this book, the author will definitely be able to reach a higher level in the next book (if possible)! Then I'll leave first, and I'll see you next time the author writes! !

Build a building. Cards that friends think are fun can be placed here, and then I will put them in the book, such as: Card: Author Introduction: This is a guy who writes about women after eunuchs Ability: Placed in teahouses and restaurants, it can increase popularity Source: Blue Star Parallel World

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I feel like this fits quite well

I tortured you from beginning to end. I thought I would be awesome in the end. But... It was the first time I read it and it was also the last time. From now on, I will directly photoshop your books.

Actually... The book is quite good, but the sentences are a bit unclear and the logic is too jumpy. Also, this is really the first time I have seen a book in which the protagonist clearly knows that he has entered a dangerous world, but is not wary of anything. Nmd drinks and then sleeps in a place where strangers live. It is too much, too much. There are also plot connection problems afterwards, but I won't go into details. The author should be able to feel it after reading it himself. The most outrageous thing is the protagonist's shabby character. If you say that he was lonely and lonely in the original world, I would never believe it. The author recommends that the plot should not be so blunt.

The male-to-female change is not a problem for me, but I never know what the protagonist is doing. You say she is doing it for promotion. She is strong enough but still like a thug. In order to survive, she can definitely take that lord as her subordinate, instead of like this. I have not read this book. I want to delete it but I feel that the card drawn is very interesting. I want to read it but I feel like the protagonist is like a headless fly.

It is still very interesting, but the narrative is too messy and there is too much new information. It feels like the author is enjoying himself and it is difficult to grasp the main line of logic. My head hurts after reading too much. It is recommended to consider writing from the perspective of the reader. In addition, the main plot line is not obvious, and I lose motivation after reading it.

It was recommended and I read it in two days on and off. The author's level is not low, so there is no need to doubt his own work

The first transformation story that I can read

Vacuole type: body fluids, slime, flesh and blood Vine eyes type: barnacles, various magic eyes Tentacle type: tough strips Insectoid type: arthropods, carapace, claws Crystal type: energy crystals, minerals, pronuclei Vortex type: surround, twist? ? ? ? Network: Various concepts of silk and net? ?

The main character feels stupid.

I don't know if it's the pig's feet or if the author is a masochist.

All I can say is, after reading Chapter 60, is the protagonist's hanging a decoration? Simon is not dead yet, he is still working for his subordinates. Those women who died trying to find the witch died in vain. The protagonist's strength still needs Simon's protection, so Simon can attract attention.

The protagonist is obviously very strong, but there are still people jumping up. The attitude of the protagonist is also very fascinating, very fascinating, and it is very uncomfortable to watch. It feels so depressing, like falling into a spider web.

Friends who are coming in, don't look at the boring titles of these books. The content is still very interesting. I started to get excited after reading Chapter 10. I have read half of it now.

Alas, to be honest, I've reached about 140 chapters and I really can't stand it any longer. Although I read this book with the intention of changing my mind, relaxing a bit, and reading some cool stories about the main character NB. I also posted a few posts to complain and express my confusion and discomfort about the incomprehensible plots in the middle, but I actually had no intention of abandoning the book at that time, especially since I rarely post comments directly, because I think the beginning of this book is really to my taste, and the setting is interesting. I think it has great potential. But unfortunately, the author only has inspiration, but lacks the ability to write a book. It is really a pity. If another book had been written like this, I would have turned around and left without saying a word, which is really a pity.

The protagonists in many novels are named Alison?