We've All Transformed, So Who's Going to Be the Femme Fatale?

When did the male channel come along with the female channel? Is the author just here to gain territory?

It finally started to feel cool. The author's foreshadowing in the early stage is too depressing, and I feel like I am looking at the moderator and it is completely evil. It is estimated that most readers were dissuaded by the early stage. If you set it up nicely, it will appear in the first three chapters. It is estimated that there will be many left. In addition, the writing style is good and it reads smoothly.

I can barely accept being transformed into a sea queen or a furnace, but I am speechless if my original body was manipulated at will... I think the transformation story has a virgin complex, because I treat the heroine as my wife. Obviously it is written in the book that Yan Zhuo's appearance is the male protagonist's strike zone before traveling through time. If you say this, I don't understand why it is set like this. Just to show the world view? But for the world view, this is a setting that doesn't matter if it exists or not. Its existence can only disgust people like me.

Although I read Transformation, after reading hundreds of Transformation books, I really feel that this is the logic of a female channel, and this book should be released on a female channel.

Hopefully it will be finished

Only over 100 orders per day? ! At present, including me, it's 111? I like this protagonist very much. The author should not die. How did you get along? Are you from another station? The writing is okay, and I've smoothed out the plot a bit, but it's just that you don't speak human words well? There are places where I can guess, and there are places where there are just too many possibilities. The characterizations are all very good. After just a cursory glance, I can remember a few people. If it becomes broken, it will become broken. It doesn't matter. Author, please think about it a bit and provide some more foreshadowing in the free chapters. I'm so angry. How bad are the characters in other novice novels? Apart from character creation, everything else you do is just by the wayside! Let me praise the protagonist. Motivated, not pretentious, speaks human words, decisive, optimistic, positive, ambitious, a little bit kind, knows sense of proportion and boundaries, and has a tough mentality that doesn't matter if it breaks. It's not like the other little girl mentality that I've seen that transforms into Wen Luoli. I can clearly feel the charm of the male and female protagonists. In conclusion, if you want to write it, write it carefully for me. Your background, setting, structure, coolness, and character relationships are all a mess. I even suspect that you will cut up the book soon. I didn't expect that the person who wrote it was the eunuch. If you are here, please give me the correct letter. My money does not come from the strong wind.

It feels like I'm halfway through writing it. The starting point is that I can only accept a light hundred at most. If I really want to write it, it's best to accept the fact that it will only be read by a dozen readers.

Where did you come from? Is this still the starting point?

Needless to say if you don't want to, in today's novels, whether it's a more popular male protagonist novel or a novel of this type, it's not difficult to give a female character an identity, it only takes a few sentences. (In a sense, this is also a matter of not being able to go down) . But being unable to go down means that since you are not given the status of the master of change, you are even being exploited and given benefits. It would be better to go further and directly let the protagonist have clear experiences and make it clear that those encounters have had an irreversible impact on the protagonist. . Whether the protagonist becomes careless about intercourse and acts recklessly under the extreme influence of the body, or whether he still chooses to stick to the bottom line under such a strong influence, it is much more interesting than the current situation of neither going up nor down. . But the protagonist's current suppression of physical pleasure can be overcome in just one or two sentences. The former is just feeding stones, while the latter has no hindrance. It is too smooth and unattractive. . When I first read the first copy, I thought I would actually experience it, but it turned out not to be the case. After seeing the second copy, I found that the protagonist had a deep memory of the experience. I thought that the third copy would directly experience it, but it turned out that he didn't. So I won't be looking forward to the third time. . As for the impact of the body on the consciousness, it is probably a rare advantage. It does write about the impact of the body on the protagonist's consciousness. . But it is still only a matter of one or two sentences. At present, it does not have a big impact on the protagonist's behavior, and it still has not much to do with whether the protagonist is in love or not. . As for plot parts such as the main plot... They are tasteless, so they are discarded.

This is really not a male channel transformation article. Maybe it's up to the moderator. You might as well write it on the moderator.