Actually, I'm a Witch

This novel is really a mudslide in the clear spring Red and bright, in a trance, hahahaha This is a dark, deep and incomplete novel. If you put it in the male channel author and write it in detail, it will most likely be blocked, but with the Spring and Autumn writing style, the plot consciousness flows away so fast that you can't even notice it. The plot, because it goes so fast, the chaos of combat power, deus ex machina, etc. Are not a problem. It seems to have a sense of comedy for no reason. I don't know what I am writing. Anyway, I am very happy It feels like a journey to another world 🙂

I've read over a hundred chapters and it feels weird. The protagonist's strength is a mystery. Sometimes he kills everyone, and sometimes he is coerced by the court empire. From the very beginning when he was arranged by the parliament to be a lord to when he was caught and tried by the world court, he was controlled by everyone along the way. Every move was controlled by others, which was very awkward. Secondly, despite killing so many people and so many powerful people, no one thinks the protagonist is powerful. They even think of the protagonist as a character who can be manipulated at will, but it is true that the protagonist is constantly being manipulated. Not to mention the cursed object exposed by the protagonist, from the more than 3,000 professionals killed to the hundreds of thousands sacrificed, anyone with a brain knows that they cannot underestimate the protagonist. No matter how much you underestimate the protagonist, it is not like this. . . And to be honest, as I read it, the more I read, the more I felt that it was ridiculous that the protagonist was caught and became a lord because of his blood. Because it is clearly written that everyone wants this name, but in fact everyone does not care about this name, and the protagonist is killed casually. It feels like the name Lord Bloodline has become a tool for the author to push the plot. Use it when it is useful, and throw it away when it is not. After all, if they really value this title, then the empire should send people to protect (even imprison) the protagonist. Just letting various villains conduct targeted assassinations countless times still... Doesn't make people feel that it is in the interest of the empire. And to be honest, the descriptions in many places are incomplete. For example, I still don't know the logic of what the church does, and I don't know why the cultists suddenly joined the Light Church. I don't know why the Light Church gave up on the protagonist at the beginning, even though the protagonist still claimed to be a member of the Light Church at the beginning. It was also the case later on when the people who had been sacrificed were judged. Suddenly, various churches did not agree to judge directly. I don't know why? Hundreds of thousands of people have died and you still have to hold it in? This is too... I am short-sighted and can only think of one explanation for the above, that is, the world is polluted, hhhh, everyone including the protagonist and gods are sick. It's not normal, so the plot is abnormal. This is the biggest foreshadowing of this book! ! !

I feel that the plot of this book is a little bit whatever I think of. The protagonist's strength, concepts, and personality are changing all the time. It doesn't matter if I kill so many people, but I am bound by this and that. I am unprincipled and principled at the same time The supporting characters are also strong and weak. On the way to the territory, the protagonist is not able to defeat a dozen waves of attacks. When it comes to occupying the city, what will happen? Such a mess of people have run out. There are at least a thousand cultists in a small city, and they can summon the evil god's clone. Obviously the protagonist can't get a single feather, and you villains have no communication at all. After the death of this village, continue to send to the next village. Your empire can send troops from the beginning, why are you still dealing with all this mess And where did the protagonist come from? Tang Monk Meat Family saw You have to take it. By the 100th chapter, there are at least 30 waves of attacks. The supporting characters have to attack no matter how strong or weak they are. And sometimes the protagonist randomly kills fourth-level people. Sometimes he is surrounded by a bunch of peasants and can't get away In general, after reading the 200th chapter, I still don't understand what it is about. Everyone wants to kill the protagonist, but they haven't made it clear why they want to kill her. Everyone is pretending. The Riddler, all of his men are gone. Anyway, I don't see any charisma in the protagonist. It only highlights one person who can be killed if he wants. The world view is not clearly explained. Although you said it is the second part, you must at least explain the most basic world view clearly. I still don't know the strength of the protagonist. What is the strength of the supporting role? What does the protagonist want to do and what does the supporting role want to do? There are just a bunch of Riddlers. You kill me and I will kill you.

Using a girl as the protagonist to show the girl's charm is a big attraction even if it is other garbage, but you just didn't write it. I wrote more than 20 chapters of being murdered by a rebel without telling the mastermind behind the scenes. I only saw "the whole world is lining up to kill me" being hunted in school, the whole upper class trying to control you, being hunted on the road, and being fucked when you get home. The cunning battle was not seen, the serious battle was not well written and not interesting, the heroine could not see the charm, the personality point was not seen, the behind-the-scenes boss did not appear in the scene, and the names were all random in 5 chapters, both positive and negative NPCs died. I still don't understand what the world is like. The setting of the protagonist seems to be a simple setting at the beginning and then be added later. I write whatever comes to my mind. What kind of readers do you want to enjoy reading your book? Aren't you tired from writing? What was your motivation for writing a book? Why not be more serious? You've already written everything, why don't you try harder and be more serious?

I really like the subject matter, but the writing is too confusing. There is no narrative context. One second I am writing about the stepmother and the next second I jump to an unknown place. The same goes for the fighting. The protagonist pretends to be weak and becomes awesome again. It makes people feel very confused.

Female version of Conan Aristocratic version of Lone Star Tears From beginning to end, being hacked, attacked, and assassinated One chapter is not finished and then being attacked, and being stimulated by the roller coaster. Many skills, the more you kill, the more you will absorb. Western fantasy content plus Chinese language. In addition, it is worth recommending

Are twelve to fifteen in the same studio?

The author has... Maybe, is he addicted to abuse? Do you really think there are too many readers? I left a long comment on my last book and said a lot. The most important thing is to remind the author that no one will bother you when reading novels. Your protagonist is either weak and uses strategy or strong and uses strength. Now I see that the protagonist is threatened, scolded, and ridiculed... My evaluation is...6

There are probably 100 billion people in this world. Human life is worthless. On the way to inherit the earl, enemies came one after another, killing thousands of people, including many knights and wizards... After returning to the castle, those servants were almost sent by the enemy to carry out various assassinations. In Chapter 50, ten thousand people died indirectly. What the protagonist sees is not a single civilian. The whole world is an enemy... The deaths of tens of thousands of people are not as good as a port?

It was written as if even a dog wanted to kill the protagonist.