
Actually, I'm a Witch
其实我是一个魔女
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 844k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Epic Fantasy
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
367Chapters
3.4kRecommendations
12.9kFans
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This novel is truly a mudslide in a clear spring. Fiery and lively, hahaha This is a dark and brutal novel. If written in a more detailed style by a male-oriented author, it would most likely be banned. However, due to its Spring and Autumn Annals style and the rapid flow of the stream-of-consciousness plot, it's easy to miss certain details.
After reading over a hundred chapters, I feel something is off. The protagonist's strength is a mystery; sometimes he's unstoppable, other times he's being manipulated by the Court Empire and similar entities. From being appointed a lord by the council to being captured and tried by the World Court, he's constantly controlled by everyone, his every move dictated by others—it's very awkward.
The plot of this book feels like it was written on a whim; the protagonist's strength, beliefs, and personality are constantly changing. He could kill so many people without consequence, yet he's bound by this and that constraint, sometimes lacking principles and other times full of them.
Featuring a female protagonist and showcasing her charm would be a major selling point, even if the rest of the story is terrible, but you deliberately omitted that. You spent over 20 chapters on her being betrayed and murdered, but didn't reveal the mastermind behind it all.
I liked the subject matter, but the writing was too chaotic, lacking a clear narrative structure. One second it was about the stepmother, the next it jumped to who-knows-where. The fight scenes were the same; the protagonist would act weak one minute and then become incredibly powerful the next, making it very confusing.
Female Conan Aristocratic version of Lone Star Tears From beginning to end, they were blacklisted, attacked, and assassinated. Before the chapter was even finished, I was attacked again, experiencing the thrill of a rollercoaster ride. It has a multitude of skills, and the more you kill, the more you absorb. A blend of Western fantasy content and Chinese language. In addition, it is worth recommending
Do you authors discuss and agree on the titles of your books before writing them?
Are twelve to fifteen from the same studio?
Is the author... Addicted to torturing the protagonist? Does he really want too many readers? I left a long review for my last book, saying a lot of things, the most important thing being to remind the author that no one is there to make you miserable while reading a novel. Your protagonist should either be weak and use cunning or strong and use power. What I see now is the protagonist being threatened for no reason, being insulted for no reason, and then being ridiculed... My rating is...6
There are probably a hundred billion people in this world. Human life is worthless. On their way to inherit the earldom, they encountered wave after wave of enemies, killing thousands, including many knights and wizards... Back at the castle, the servants were almost all sent by the enemy, and they carried out various assassinations. Chapter 50 indirectly resulted in the deaths of 10,000 people.
It's written as if even a dog would kill the protagonist.