The Evil God's Completion Plan

I feel that the author is a genius, but genius will not be accepted by most people. Your writing style is destined to not make money, so it is better to use love to write a good book.

After finishing this book, let's change the subject of the next one.

Feeling better and better, come on

The character dialogue is very stiff_(:з∠)_

I feel that the rhythm is a bit strange. I randomly picked up the eggs of mythical creatures on the road. There is too little foreshadowing and description. It looks awkward, but the story is good.

Good guy, I've basically seen yours. It's all due to fate.

The beginning is very interesting, better than the previous ones.

The cover is the same as "The Imitation of God", but this one is from 23 years 🙂

So what? Author, I cut again. To be honest, I quite like your style. But I couldn't even read a few books.

Fantasy is still my favorite theme. The main attractions are the gorgeous magic, the life of wandering mercenaries, the strange races of elves, dwarves, dragons, the abyss, esoteric magic plants and runes, potions, nobles and slaves.       But these can be found in the writings of writers in the past few years, the same old way of fighting monsters and upgrading, slapping people in the face and getting in touch with girls, it is always annoying no matter how good it looks, in this book shortage I recommend you to study it "Konoha: Prepare to defect, the system is coming"  His writing techniques downplay the presence of Goldfinger, add humor and imagination, and give people a strong sense of immersion. And most importantly, he uses psychological testing of the characters and the creation of supporting roles. In his writing, every character is not a foil to the protagonist, but has his own life and action trajectory. With this method, we cannot predict the development route of the protagonist. However, other novels summarize the Destiny Child's pretentiousness and the future route is clear at a glance. It is nothing but different from Goldfinger In this film, you can find the rhythm, the plot is fun and interesting, the characters have rich emotional lines, and the supporting characters' personalities are well shaped but not rigorous and logical So fantasy is a good open-ended theme. 1. Racial occupations, whether they are mermaids, naga, sea monsters, aquatics, or five-color dragons, forest elves, tree people, elves, cave dwarves, underground dwarves, undead lichs, The characteristics of the above are appearance, racial environment, lifespan, etc., Pay attention!! Racial talent is the least writeable, because it will limit the world view and is not conducive to shaping the history of the fantasy world, especially lost history, which can only be seen by a few people. That's it for the time being, I hope it can bring some help to the author in setting up the framework, summarize the key character creation, the future plot is unpredictable, the plot is interesting and fun, and finally there will be an original race. The existing fantasy races have not changed for a long time.