My Sect Leader Is the Greatest Under Heaven

I have read a few of the author's books, and one of the biggest flaws is that the plot is too heavy-handed, not exciting enough, and the plot is not big enough. Taking this new book as an example, it stands to reason that the protagonist has experienced so many long lives in Nantianmen, even if he has a golden finger, and when he comes out, he still competes with the martial arts masters in the main world. Among the top ten masters in the world, who is over a hundred years old? Doesn't it seem that the protagonist is useless and incompetent? The layout is not good and the spirit is not enough. He has cheated for tens of thousands of years but cannot compare to decades. He is a waste of resources and martial arts. The author has been writing a kind of novel with high ambitions and low power, and there is no progress...

The more I read, the more I feel that the author's setting is unreasonable. He made the protagonist's predecessor's father look so useless and had been the best in the world for decades. As a result, other sects had a few great talents at every turn and had huge power. After the death of the father of the predecessor of the Dao Yizong, he was almost wiped out. He has gone out of school, and has been reduced to helping the court capture wanted criminals and solve crimes to make money What's even more outrageous is that his predecessor's father has already completed the 24 Gods. As a result, there are no corresponding skills in the sect, and the protagonist needs to obtain them through other sects.

I can't accept it. The first few chapters are too cliche. Li Jianzhou abandoned his martial arts, left whenever he wanted, and broke off the engagement impulsively. It doesn't conform to the logic of a time traveler at all. Your plot level is really getting worse.

The author of this book has been changed, or it was written out of outline, abandoned the recovery of heaven and earth, abandoned the golden finger, anyway, many settings are ignored, it feels like I wrote whatever comes to mind, it is very rubbish, I will not read it anymore

Why do you have to rush back every time when close people like fellow students and disciples are about to be beaten to death? You can rush back to Daoyishan in just a few breaths, but you have to wander outside slowly and wait until the Zhouguang Stone is crushed before rushing back? It says that he is very worried about Dao Yishan's situation. As a result, he has been traveling abroad, right? He really won't rush back and won't show up until the crisis comes?

Is Qi Xianer having an affair with you? Has her in every chapter? Your apprentice and your mother don't have as many appearances as she does, and they both let you become the female supporting role. How disgusting...

I discovered a problem, that is, the recently resurrected ancients in the book were bewitched by others. Each one of them had a horribly low IQ and EQ. However, they were also characters who had been cultivated to the point of being broken. They looked like mentally retarded people.

I don't know when the invincible novels became truly invincible. I used to like invincible novels very much because the protagonists were not truly invincible, but the author allowed them to narrowly win the battle. Now I am "forced to retreat" after just one glance. They will not show off and slap in the face, nor will they break off their engagement due to emotional disputes. They will only be single-minded and perseverant, staggering towards the top of the mountain step by step. I can witness their progress every time and their gradual determination in the doubt of failure, not the saint on the left and the witch on the right. I always like to progress and grow with the protagonist in novels, persevere and be invincible, because this is probably the most regrettable and most lacking persistence in my life in the irreversible time. I never like to watch the sunset alone on the top of the mountain. I just like to march against the wind and snow on the hillside, with two or three friends, talking and laughing together, advancing and retreating together, drinking and having fun. Even if he falls, he is not alone.

I gave up when I saw the change of body.

Logically speaking, your writing style shouldn't be so poisonous. . . In the beginning, in order to show off his power, he forcibly created conflicts and deposed the strongest senior brother of his generation, and then regretted his marriage to a sect of the same level that had been married for generations. . . . Originally, the writing was good, but it was all about food, but after just a few chapters, I got addicted.