My Sect Leader Is the Greatest Under Heaven

Having read several of the author's books, the biggest flaw is the lack of dramatic tension, making the story feel rushed and lacking in scope. Take this new book, for example. Logically, the protagonist, with his cheat-like abilities, has already experienced countless lifetimes in the Southern Heavenly Gate, yet he still tries to compete with martial arts masters from the main world.

The more I read, the more I felt the author's setup was illogical. The protagonist's father, who was the strongest in the world for decades, was portrayed as utterly useless. Meanwhile, other sects had numerous Grandmasters and immense power.

I can't accept this. The first few chapters are too formulaic. Li Jianzhou cripples his martial arts, leaves whenever he wants, and his impulsive annulment of the engagement doesn't make sense at all for a transmigrator. Your plot quality is really getting worse and worse.

This book has a new author, or it's just rambling off-topic, abandoning the revival of heaven and earth, abandoning the cheat system, basically ignoring many settings. It feels like they just wrote whatever came to mind, it's rubbish, I'm not reading it anymore.

Why do we only rush back when our fellow disciples and close friends are almost beaten to death? He could have returned to Daoyi Mountain in just a few breaths, but he insisted on wandering around outside until the Zhouguang Stone was crushed before rushing back. You wrote that you were very worried about Dao Yishan's situation, but you've been traveling all this time, haven't you? You're really not rushing back, and you only show up when there's a crisis?

Does Qi Xian'er have something going on with you? She's in every chapter? She doesn't even appear as much as your apprentice or your mother, and you made them supporting characters? Disgusting...

I've noticed a problem: the ancient figures recently resurrected in the book have been cursed, and their intelligence and emotional intelligence are terrifyingly low. They're supposed to be characters whose cultivation has reached a point of collapse, yet they act like complete idiots.

I don't know when it started, but invincible novels have become truly invincible. I used to really like invincible novels because the protagonists weren't actually invincible; the authors just let them win by a hair's breadth in battle. Now, I'm "forced to give up" after just one glance.

I gave up as soon as I saw the idea of ​​changing the physical body.

Logically speaking, your writing shouldn't be this harsh... The story begins by creating conflict to intimidate the strongest senior disciple of his generation, then breaks off an arranged marriage between them from a sect of similar strength... Initially, the writing was good and it seemed like a promising read, but after just a few chapters, I was hooked.