The Scholar of Great Wei

Xu Qingxiao

Come on, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this

The comment area is too violent. Many people are refined egoists and have some weird values. I hope the author can keep his original intention, take the essence and discard the dross, and stick to his general direction 😡😡

The book is very nice 😍 and the foreshadowing is very good!

I am a student and just finished reading the free plot, and I would like to give the author some small suggestions. I have read many time travel novels that have plots of copying poems. To be honest, I am not disgusted with the plot of copying poems. However, many authors write protagonists who copy poems, which is simply mindless copying. Not to mention the allusions in many famous poems in my country that have been passed down through the ages. No, just say that the place name in the poem does not match the image represented in the fictional world poem. For example, in many Chinese poems, the alien world such as Luoyang may not exist at all, and the author does not explain it, which shows a serious sense of disconnection. Also, the age, mood, and experience required for some protagonists to copy poems and be able to write such poems are not in line with their own age, mood, experience, etc. In this case, the author describes the protagonist's description of the plot of everyone being amazed after copying poems. It is really difficult to bring in, and it is very awkward to watch. So I hope the author can pay attention to this in the plot written below. I'll give this book a try first. Is there any enthusiast who can tell me if there is such a situation in this book so that I can have an understanding?

It's not enough to watch. I'll have to wait for a while to watch this.

I've given you ten votes, and I'll vote to the upper limit 😅

Is the author from Hunan? Brain pain😁😁

I've given you all the monthly ticket recommendations, come on

Now that I see it, I still want to say something I said in my chapter that you are not afraid of being late for a good meal, and it should be more than half fulfilled now, so I hope everyone will be patient. Some holes are already being filled, and although new holes have opened, everyone should still be patient. Then I personally look at it and express my humble opinion. First, the force system must be carefully considered and stabilized. I already feel that there is a trend. Second, the outline of the main plot that follows should be very thin and not easy to develop. I hope that the introduction of immortality will not cause confusion in the main plot. Third, the ending of the event is a bit weak. I hope the next climax will be better (it is indeed getting better! Compared to the last round) That's all 🙂