Dimensional Expansion

The author can seriously think about it. People who are still following this book are definitely not here to read some short stories. There are two reasons why I liked the novel very much in the early stage. One is that the plot has great tension, and the other is the realistic future imagination. Recently, I have been slightly disappointed. One reason is that the plot is relatively bland and the sense of crisis is slightly insufficient. The other reason is that the amount of information/imagination provided has become less. After seizing the divine body, there is no substantial progress in understanding the super company and non-server areas. If it is used as a transition period for the next big plot, that is understandable; if not, then the author needs to seriously consider it. It is recommended to prioritize quality between quality and speed, because the audiences are really different!

I was prepared with so much hard work, effort, and restraint at the beginning, but in the end, the complete character design was ruined in less than 3 minutes. In addition to watching the Ear and Nose concert, I actually want to instill in readers that voluntarily working overtime and giving up vacations is happiness. Is the author missing from the class?

I haven't been able to catch up on Blood Race since 2019. I finished reading it in one sitting a few days ago and it was so satisfying. Now when I read this book again, I can intuitively feel the huge progress in Hamburg's writing skills. As a setting person, I really appreciate this system-building style of writing. It feels very comfortable to see that the entire power system is complete and self-consistent in the book. The new book can also feel Hamburg's progress in plot design. It has changed from the original plain and unabashed writing method of step by step narration to a slow picture with plots, thrilling processes and final rewards. This is also the most popular and mainstream way of writing in Qidian, such as Jiang Ye, Dafeng Da Gengren, Overthrowing the Han Dynasty, Sutra of the Dead, etc. This kind of writing skills combined with the rigorous and complete style and setting of Hamburg itself, as well as the problem-solving ideas of dimensionality reduction and attack through the construction of the power system, are so perfect and comfortable.

I don't even know what the main plot is 😅

1. The main line is unknown. At present, it seems that it should be genetic ascension, mechanical ascension, becoming a new human being, immortality, becoming a god, etc. However, there is a hammer here and a stick here and there. The story is too scattered and makes me tired. 2. Not enough fun. The fun comes from showing off, upgrading, and seeing what changes the new body will have after a sudden change. After the fantasy web novel is upgraded to a level, what can be done, what changes are made, the effect will be immediate. If the concentration is 100, your grass snake gray line will be slowly laid out, and the concentration will only be about 10 or 20. 3. The structure is incomplete. After slowly spreading, problems appeared in the worldview structure. This matter cannot be avoided. What is the organizational form of society? Does the government still exist? Why do only giant companies exist, and no trace of the government's existence can be felt? How come non-server areas appeared? Does the government not care? Why doesn't it care? Technology has progressed and productivity has developed. Is there any movement in space, the moon and Mars? Logical writing is very good, but remember that you are writing a web article.

A little bit irritable

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There are rave reviews in the comment area. When will the comment area be able to have a Steam-style review format? How many minutes of viewing will it be displayed?

The beginning of this book is too strong, and the imagination of the near future is very immersive. The protagonist does things with strict logic and the plot is compact, which is closer to a physical book. Now that we have passed the first tense point, it seems that we are about to enter the research of supernatural powers. I wonder if I can write something new.

This is the best book in recent years.