Crushing the Heavens, Starting with Wind and Cloud

Setting Fengyun as a minor world is fine, but the key is that the settings like the Dragon Essence Sacred Heart Technique should be based on the original work. The Dragon Essence can completely change genes and make people immortal. This can be seen from the fact that the clones of Nie Feng and Bu Jingyun in the future were cloned and cultivated using the blood of the Dragon Essence.

Let me share my thoughts on going to a martial arts world in an immortal realm. First, you need to understand that activating the bead requires luck. Once you go to the greater world, what ability do you have to generate luck? Wuxia (martial arts fiction) is a perfect fit; that's how a snowball effect works, getting stronger with each iteration.

Having read books for over a decade, I've always considered the primordial world in my mind to be the highest level of existence. I've read *Covering the Sky*, *Eternal Life*, and *A World Worthy*, and there are even those who tout Cthulhu mythos, as well as infinite flow novels, Marvel, Dragon Ball, Super God Academy, and so on—all of them pale in comparison to the primordial world. 🙂

The cultivation methods in the world of immortality seem ridiculous. If the laws of the world were to be used against a person, they would be crippled. They would simply transfer external energy into their bodies. In the world of Perfect World, Shi Hao was crippled so many times and had his Supreme Bone dug out twice, yet he became stronger and stronger.

The protagonist of this book is rather arrogant. He possesses treasures and magical arts from other worlds, and looks down on them. If he's so disdainful, why bother studying their scriptures? In the main world, he acts like a generous spender, buying things and acting like a complete scoundrel. In the alternate worlds, he's practically ransacking the place. The book itself is alright, but the protagonist is poorly written.

Your description of the world instances in the "All Heavens" section is practically useless. Aside from the Eternal World, the other worlds are mostly just filler; there's little combat, little experience, and little insight. You just casually wrote a dozen or twenty pages and then skipped over it. You might as well not have written anything at all.

In terms of rank, the Great Luo Immortals in the fantasy world of "Great Transmigration: The Immortals of the Heavens" are more in line with my image of a high-ranking individual. They are immune to external calamities, have no survival pressures, and can do almost anything they want. There are strong and weak Great Luo Immortals, but this is more like the strength of game accounts.

Here's a point about the Immortal World: it's very powerful, but in the early stages, if you haven't joined a celestial sect, you won't get any resources. So, going to a martial arts world with only a physical body realm cultivation level isn't a bad idea. Even within a celestial sect, your physical body realm cultivation level isn't anything special; the resources are far inferior to the opportunities in high-level martial arts.

I've noticed a common problem with most authors: they insist on having their male protagonists cultivate slowly and then kill enemies several major stages ahead. Why can't they level up faster? I can understand a genius killing enemies one or two minor stages ahead, but many of these instances are ridiculously absurd. What's the point of cultivation then? They might as well just make him invincible and end the story!

My personal suggestion is, if you're really out of reading material, read up to around chapter 400, but don't exceed 400. After that, it's an endless series of nested stories: elementary school, middle school, high school, university... You think you've graduated? No... Advanced elementary school, advanced middle school, advanced high school, advanced university... Is that all? No...