Crushing the Heavens, Starting with Wind and Cloud

The Emperor of Heaven has returned home, to the home where he was still a weak mortal. Once he was just a mortal boy who had no knowledge of spiritual practice. Now he has returned from wandering for many years and is now the Emperor of Heaven and the Lord of Heaven. In terms of status, he can be on par with saints. I heard that the Emperor of Heaven came home, and every intersection was crowded with people watching the excitement... It is said that everyone present received a super big red envelope from the Emperor of Heaven🧧, but it is said that it was sent by the Taibai Venus in Heaven. What is even more incredible is that the Emperor of Heaven did not forget to update. What kind of spirit is this? No wonder people can become emperors of heaven, said Aunt Zhang at the entrance of the village to her six-year-old son. …

It feels so strange. How can the author write a world of high martial arts and immortals in such a vulgar and low-level way? It's not that the author's writing is not good. I haven't read Eternal Life, so I don't know what the worldview of Eternal Life is like. The author's writing method is not unreadable. Although it feels weird , it's just that he tried his best to express the greatness of a world of immortals and gods, as well as the difference from the low-level mortal world. It is indeed different. It is indeed different to be lower than the vulgar mortal world No derogation is meant. The vulgar and the high here are the same I have only read the first hundred chapters so far. Let's continue and see if there will be any difference

This makes me laugh so hard. What level are Lin Lei and Hong Meng at? Do you think I don't know? 😁Whether you can pass the ancestor immortal Fang Han is still a question

It's so funny😁The Immortal Emperor is indeed not as good as the vegetable seller in the upper world

Eternal life in the main world. I haven't seen someone write about eternal life in a long time. If you write well, it will be popular! Come on! Why does the name start from Fengyun?

God's Tomb and Heaven's Way Suppressed an Immortal Golden Immortal to Death 🤫 Hongmao's 2006 book, the combat effectiveness is relatively low.

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It's too watery. I wrote too many chapters when traveling to other worlds.

Here I would like to share my personal views on this book, to provide a reference for future book friends. First of all, I have only read the end of Fengyun, so my views only represent the first part, and I have not read the latter parts for comment. The Immortal World is well written and reads smoothly. You can look forward to the follow-up development. As for the first part of the Fengyun World, it is also okay. How can I describe the section to Wushuang City? It's like stewing a pot of hodgepodge and then forcefully pouring it into you. There is no sense of combination and taste of the ingredients, so it is recommended to skip it. I hope the author can improve his writing techniques instead of cramming everything in. It would be nice to have a little plot to tie in the plot. I hope it won't be this kind of plot in the future. This is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.

It doesn't matter if Fengyun is set in Xiaoqian World. The key is that settings such as Long Yuan's Sacred Heart Art should be based on the original work. Long Yuan can completely change genes to make people immortal. This can be seen from the fact that the future clones of Nie Feng and Bu Jingyun are cloned and cultivated using the blood of Long Yuan. The two have been transformed by Long Yuan into immortal species. So when the protagonist eats Long Yuan or practices martial arts such as the Sacred Heart Art, he should also be set to become immortal, so that it does not look inconsistent. Moreover, while others are working hard for immortality, the protagonist has already practiced Kung Fu or consumed Long Yuan to become immortal, so it just looks cool enough. After all, the Fengyun world belongs to another system, so it is naturally different from the immortal world. Just like some cultivation novels, one can live forever after reaching the Nascent Soul, while Zhe Tian will still die of old age even if he has cultivated to the point where he can shatter the galaxy. This is the advantage of traveling through different worlds. The most important thing is, if it is clear that Long Yuan can live forever, but it must be set as a genius treasure that increases one's cultivation level, and it is clear that the Holy Heart Art can live forever, but it must be set as a profound mortal martial arts technique, then it is better to set it directly to find an opportunity in the world of immortality. The biggest attraction of Zhutianliu is the collision between different systems. Where other systems are difficult to achieve, another system can easily achieve it. Only after complementation in this way can the protagonist have an advantage and be able to improve quickly and reasonably, instead of being limited to one system and using various illogical conjectures to improve.

Let me talk about my views on martial arts in the eternal world. First of all, you must understand that luck is needed to activate the beads. Once you go to the big world and you have the ability to get luck, martial arts is very suitable. This is how the snowball comes. It gets better every time. So at this point I have no idea why anyone would troll! As for the content, I haven't read a few at first. I won't comment on whether it is poisonous or not. Although the subject matter is old-fashioned, Zhutianliu doesn't have any new books now. If the writing is good, it is worth reading, and the audience is also large. Because now various studio articles have caused a lot of aesthetic fatigue, Zhutianliu hopes to become popular again. Then, here is my suggestion to the author. Based on my many years of experience in reading books, there must be enough early updates, monthly tickets and so on. Even if you can't make it to the rankings, you should get to the top of the rankings. Otherwise, you will gradually be submerged or even be killed. Then you need to take a look at other Tianliu to avoid any poisonous points. Don't blindly target every world protagonist, because some protagonists are really worthy of being the protagonist. In addition, I hope it can be refined

After reading books for more than ten years, I have always regarded the ancient world in my mind as the most advanced world. I've seen all the ones that cover the sky and live forever, and some people boast about Cthulhu, Infinite Flow, Marvel's Dragon Ball Super Seminary, etc., Etc., All of which are under the prehistoric period 🙂

I feel that the cultivation method in the immortal world is similar to that of Laqua. The rules are useless once the person is taken out. They just move the energy from the outside world into the body. In the perfect world, Shi Hao has been disabled so many times and had his supreme bone dug out twice, but he has become stronger and stronger.

The protagonist of this book is a bit self-righteous. He holds treasures from other worlds, uses Taoism and martial arts from other worlds, and looks down on other worlds. If he looks down on them so much, then why should he study the treasure books of these worlds? Pretending to be generous and buying things in the main world is like a big mistake. In the dungeon world, there is no difference between scratching the floor. The book is okay, but the writing of the protagonist is too bad.

In fact, in terms of personality, Da Luo among the immortals in the fantasy world is more in line with the image of a high personality in my mind. You will not be robbed by external forces, there is no pressure to survive, and you can almost do whatever you want. There are strong and weak players in Daluo, but this is more similar to the strength and weakness of game accounts when playing games. There are not many essential differences between Da Luo. In Zhe Tian, ​​Da Luo is the mortal immortal, in perfection, he is the Immortal Emperor, and in eternal life, he is the realm of eternal life, but he is the kind who can cheat and flip the table at any time.

Your world copy of Zhu Tianwen is no different from not writing it. Except for the world of eternal life, the other worlds are basically in water. There is no battle, no experience, and no insights. You just write a dozen or twenty pictures and skip it directly. You might as well not write it. .

Here, the world of immortality is very high, but if you don't join the Immortal Sect in the early stage, you will get nothing. Therefore, it is not poisonous to go to martial arts in the physical realm. Even if you are in the immortal realm, the resources are far inferior to those of high-level martial arts.

I found that most authors have a common problem. They have to make the male protagonist practice slowly and then kill people in several large stages, so he can't level up faster. He can't understand if he is a genius in killing enemies at one or two small levels. Killing enemies in many large stages is simply outrageous. What's the point of training? Just end up invincible.

My personal suggestion is that there is really no need to read the book. You can read about 400 chapters, but not more than 400. There are really infinite matryoshka dolls in the back, elementary school, junior high school, high school, university, do you think you have graduated? No, senior elementary school, senior junior high school, senior high school, senior university, done? No, Special elementary school, special middle school, special high school, special university, That's right, it's not over Super elementary school, super middle school, super high school, super university, You thought it would be impossible to repeat the plot and change the skin, and there are dozens of them. The super invincible and cool skill names are occasionally watered down for half a chapter, and the fighting plot is directly won without any delay (there is no foreshadowing, and it is bluntly relying on unknown passers-by to brag about the protagonist to show his awesomeness). You may think that repeated plot routines are staged in various ways, and several skill names are used with a few words, and the fighting plot is blunt and bragging. If you can accept these, then you can watch more. Oh? I actually found that the last two paragraphs of my text express the same meaning Haha, there are so many situations like this in the book. The same meaning needs to be divided into three or four paragraphs. I don't mean to discredit the author. The author's writing skills are very good, the plot is very exciting, the protagonist's characterization is also very good, and the supporting characters are almost boring, not to mention the copy. Really, he is a very good author, but why has he developed the habit of writing too few words? This is really bad. A novel with 3 million words is enough to be exciting, but it's not like 10 years ago, when tens of millions of dollars on the water can still make money, so it's not necessary. You will lose fans. I still hope the author can write a better book. I hope the author can change his habit of talking about water, and it should attract many readers. By the way, 1 horse, 10 horses, 100,000 horses, and 1 billion horse combat power are actually very bad descriptions. This digital way of expressing strength is actually very cheap. I am not qualified to evaluate the author. I can't even write a diary entry. I can only say that the old bookworm hopes that every book is in line with his own aesthetics. After all, the free chapters are for readers to try out. Please do what you can

How should I put it? I don't know why, after reading dozens of chapters, I felt like there was nothing in it. To describe it in one word, it is "empty". I felt that the storyline was very dry. Although the protagonist had a goal of becoming stronger, his actions were extremely empty. In addition, it feels like the protagonist is just a passer-by, without any inner changes, and everything he does seems to be completely pushed away. In addition, in the interaction with Yang Xiyue, the protagonist is like a wooden man. What Yang Xiyue says is what he says. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist seems to be an unreal person, like a puppet on strings. Maybe this is a common problem of Wudiwen.

Come on, come on, compare the settings, let me tell you the ranking in my mind! First, the dragon talisman has no immortality. The dragon talisman has 36 realms. Each realm has been stacked with settings. The last one is transcendence and immortality. The protagonist's realm can make everyone transcend. There is no immortality. As the name suggests, no one can be immortal. You can transcend. Secondly, the gate of eternal life is the strongest gate. Starting from Jinxian, all time and space are free and easy, with an infinite universe within. Taiyi jumps out of the infinite universe. Daluo is known to be omnipotent. As described above, he starts stacking boxes. Third, the Supreme Being, Tao and Fruit are unknowable and undiscussable. They are wrong as soon as they are said and misconstrued as soon as they are thought about.

Every time he travels to the dungeon world, the male protagonist is very pretentious, but he can't write that kind of pretentious feeling every time. And when you meet people, you accept them as disciples. Even if you accept the protagonist, you will also accept the supporting characters. If this is the case, then you might as well accept the whole world as your disciples. In this way, most of the luck in the whole world belongs to you. I think it is okay.

The next day, Su Li looked at the people kneeling in front of him in Lifeng Palace. After a long time, Su Li opened his mouth and said: Friend Brahma, you are destined to me, and I will come to save you this time. Who agrees and who opposes? The person whom His Highness knelt down was Fan Qingying, who was suppressed by Su Li. After hearing what Su Li said, Fan Qingying raised his head slightly, glanced in Su Li's direction, then lowered his head and said: Senior Brother Su, I suggest you look behind you. Making decisions. Su Li Wenyan sensed it and found nothing unusual, so he said with a smile: Brahma Taoist friends, don't panic. Although my spiritual power is very strong, you can just bear with it. There is no need to deceive me with such childish words. Immediately looked at Fan Qingying, and saw that Fan Qingying did not answer, turning slightly sideways towards Su Li: I have met Senior Sister Fang! After Su Li heard this sentence, his face suddenly twitched, but he returned to normal in an instant, and said to Fan Qingying below: I suddenly remembered that I, Li Feng, still have a furnace of elixirs being refined, and I can't leave. Let's go first... Wait, Qingxue. Things are not what you think. You listen to my excuses... No, listen to my explanation! Wait, Qingxue, why did you take out the Thunder Emperor Talisman? I was wrong. . . Stop it now... No! On this day, thunderclouds rolled over Li Feng, with lightning and thunder, just like the end of the world. The Yuhua Sect disciples did not dare to approach. Several Jindan disciples tried to force their way in, but were seriously injured and repelled by the rolling thunderclouds. On a mountain peak not far from Li Feng, Feng Baiyu, the leader of the Yuhua Sect, was playing chess and discussing Taoism with several elders on the stage. When he saw Li Feng's vision, Feng Baiyu just smiled slightly and sighed that it was great to be young and ignored it.

Good news from Yuhua Public University: Meng Shaobai, a talented student in the Department of Bioengineering of our school, has recently made astonishing achievements in the field of biological fusion, which even shocked many authorities in the field. It is reported that he may have obtained the research results of some prehistoric civilizations, and recently completed an unprecedented feat in the history of science in the simple laboratory he established. According to unreliable information, he used an unknown organic fusion agent called Demonic Embryo Parasite to successfully fuse himself. He was fused with the egg of an unknown human species named Kunpeng. He was not afraid of sacrifice, and with the spirit of dedication to science, he finally completed the experiment and became the first bird-man-demon in human history. He also brought great influence to the world of biological theory. In recognition of his contribution, our school decided to select him and Fang Han, a genius from the Department of Economics who have received much attention recently, as candidates for the next president of our school at the same time, and awarded them the highest scholarship in our school at the same time 😁

Fang Han in Eternal Life has never been stingy with his friends. Although several of his girlfriends were taken advantage of at first, they all entered the gate of eternal life in the end. After eternal life, he may transcend the confinement of this world and finally move towards a higher world. Perhaps only in that world can he obtain eternal life, and the souls of the immortal weapons will be poisoned by energy. At that time, the Gate of Eternal Life was damaged. Thinking about a higher dimension, the cancer had an opportunity to take advantage of it. The Immortal King of Creation understood something. They should also be communicating with the outside will. Therefore, in order to kill the weapon spirits, many of them had many bonds with Fang Han, so,

Opening a new book! Come on everyone! Eternal life fan!

It looks pretty comfortable from the back, so I'll give you a vote.

Why is the author of "Zhutian: Invincible from the Xuanhuang World" missing?

Fuck, why is this thing classified in martial arts?

Why is this gone