Ancestor of Humanity in the Primordial World: From the Start, I Joined the Chat Group

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the male protagonist becomes the Great Luo Jinxian too easily. Look at how hard it took Emperor Huangtian to become the Immortal Emperor for more than two million years. What big things the male protagonist Luo does are all trivial in comparison to the infinitely diverse world like the prehistoric era.

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The strength is unbalanced. I think the Supreme Treasure really does not have the realm of human immortality. The immortals in the ancient times are invincible, but neither can ruthless people. The most ruthless people are at level 9, Tang Hao. . . . . . . I really don't want to say it anymore, it's at most level 4-5, and Supreme Treasure is level 5-6.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. After reading online articles for more than ten years, I can see that there are not many people who have given up halfway. So far, I have not given up reading more than ten... This is the second person who has given up reading and complained about it. Let's talk about the priority of the characters in this article. There is no problem with having only one protagonist, but the problem lies with the supporting characters. Except for the protagonist, it can be said that all the "positive" characters are supporting characters. The number of supporting characters is a bit scary! ! ! Moreover, I personally feel that every time the author describes these supporting characters, he has the attitude of writing about the protagonist. The description is too detailed and grand, and it feels like there is no prioritization. Whenever the protagonist comes out to show off, then the protagonist is praised from the perspective of the supporting character, which is equivalent to watching it again from the perspective of the supporting character. The flattery is forgotten, but after supporting character 1 praises, then supporting character 2 and supporting character 3... The protagonist's pretentious scene is repeated again and again by the supporting character! Generally speaking, the protagonist's role in a web novel is directly proportional to or more than the total number of supporting roles. But here, the protagonist's role is pitifully small, perhaps not much compared to a single supporting role. It can be said to be huge, but it cannot hold up to the number of supporting roles. Even if it is a soy sauce, it will be given to him. After writing thousands of words, this soy sauce appearance has nothing to do with the main scene. I forcefully insert it and praise the protagonist (a soy sauce writer is useless in writing so meticulously, pure water). I won't go into details about other aspects. In a word, he is a soulless character.

The ending was very abrupt, and the author cut the book without any warning.

What kind of face is the setting of Swallowing the Starry Sky? It was already speechless that the Douluo weak god was the tenth level. Now you tell me that the eternal true god is Da Luo? ? Hey, the Immortal Emperor in this book is just a fake Da Luo. Why should the Eternal True God be Da Luo? The Lord of Chaos is at the 17th level and the God King is at the 18th level. I'm really speechless. Although the God King's real body is hundreds of millions of light years away, it's just a comparison. The perfect Immortal King's physical form can also reach hundreds of millions of light years. What on earth is the author thinking?

It's okay to have double standards. Tang San is not very good, but if they are reincarnated and Tang San seizes the body, who are you as the protagonist? Can the protagonist promote himself first?

Let yourself go, the author belongs. I don't know why, but I feel confident when facing Lord Hunyuan, and I dare to show my golden finger. It's okay to be too trusting to others.

Wu Zetian killed her own daughter. Please check the history carefully.

I read the paid part, and then I wanted to share my thoughts on this novel. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. The writing is poor and the character description is insufficient. This should be due to the author's experience. I hope the author will do better in the future. The subject matter is good, but this kind of description of multiple worlds, readers only read the feelings, and it ruins the original work. According to my personal understanding, it is a brainless and cool novel. Now I am afraid that only elementary school students like it. In the description of the spiritual cage, Ran Bing didn't even say "Can you do it without me?" Did the author really read it three times? I really can't stand it any more. It makes me smart after watching too much.