A Madman in the Gu Long Universe

I've read a few chapters and still can't tell if the protagonist is a native or not, but I'm too lazy to read any further. I'll just assume he is and I'm outta here. I'm not a transmigrator, so I don't feel any connection to the story.

Why not choose to write about one world at a time? The success of works like "The Melon-Eating Swordsman" and "The First Deep Affection" speaks volumes. Why insist on being so stubborn?

To be honest, the writing is alright, but since you chose the legend of Chu Liuxiang, why not write about a local instead? Who would feel connected to that character? Learn from Gu Long's style of writing about a gossipy swordsman.

This is pure, nonsensical literature. It's pointless. It tries to imitate Gu Long but fails miserably; it's a hodgepodge of styles. I'm out.

This book is amazing. Right now, I'd rate it a 7 out of 10, but if it were original, I'd give it an 8, and if it were by a great author, I'd give it an 8.5. Unfortunately, it's fan fiction. If I had to describe it, it's like a pretentious riddle-maker who defeats all the nameless, faceless monsters but still can't beat the original protagonist. Yeah, sorry, that's how this book feels to me.

The whole thing is just endless "why" and "why," it's all nonsense and a waste of time.

The strengths are that it's written in a very Gu Long style, with a strong martial arts feel. The dialogue and conversations are distinctly Gu Long-esque, and the battle descriptions are also excellent, truly capturing the essence of the genre. The weaknesses are numerous. Aside from the ubiquitous typos, the protagonist's personality is incomprehensible.

Do you think your readers are idiots? Do you need to explain this and that reason throughout the entire article?

If your martial arts novel lacks appeal, it's likely to flop. The protagonist isn't even a time traveler, so the sense of immersion is naturally lower.

You could reduce the amount of Gu Long's nonsensical writing; otherwise, readers will get tired of it. This was originally a point to attract readers. Now you need to write your own stuff, otherwise, not many people will subscribe after it's published.