My Life Simulator

Don't you give students online classes? I still have time to start a new book here

Author, I really can't help it, I want to say a few words. If this book continues to be written like this, I feel that there will be nothing interesting about it. My feeling is that you don't seem to have a clear distinction between priorities. What we want to see is the plot of him gaining abilities from the dungeon and returning to the real world, and most of your writing is describing the dungeon, and reality is often brushed aside. If you do this, we will not be happy. We want to see reality, but your desire to write a dungeon has led to our differences. There is no way around this. If there is a disagreement, we can't change your mind, so we can only give up on your book, right? After all, no one wants to subscribe to something they are not interested in. The above only represents my personal thoughts. Do you like to hear it or not?

This book is considered unfinished. The author's setting is that all the copies are actually different parallel real worlds. I just want to know what Liu Qin will do in all the non-real worlds? Run away after flirting? In fact, the author set up a method in the work to return to the dungeon world, but Lu Li never used it, not even once! ! ! Until the end of the article, all the dungeon worlds collapsed and destroyed, and Liu Qin in the dungeon was waiting for the protagonist to return. Since you like Liu Qin and have given hope to Liu Qin in the dungeon, you shouldn't destroy it anymore, or don't disturb Liu Qin's life in the dungeon world from the beginning. The protagonist just flirts with Liu Qin because he can't accept the possibility of having another boyfriend, and then disappears in the end. It's actually very cruel. Many of the author's settings in the first half of the article were completely useless by the end. I had actually been looking forward to the protagonist going to the dungeon world to find Liu Qin. Especially when the International Arcane Competition ended, I especially hoped that Lu Li could go back and have a look. I felt that the author was perfunctory in the later parts, and it was not as pure as it was at the beginning. I had been looking forward to it, hoping for a wonderful ending, but it ended badly. This is really uncomfortable. I feel that the author did not take the readers seriously at all, and did not respect the characters he wrote. This book actually moved me a lot, and I also found some compensation for my regrets. It can be said that it has realized the pure and ignorant emotional attachment of many people. I liked this book very much when I read the first half. I can feel the author's intention between the lines. However, as you go to the end, you will find that the author is becoming more and more perfunctory and pays less and less attention to the quality of the article. It feels like it is a perfunctory ending just to finish the book as quickly as possible. It is a pity. I also want to see a better plot, but there is no more! ! ! I don't know what the point of writing this is. Maybe it's just a complaint, maybe it's just a pity for this book. I feel like the ending of this book is a bit sorry for the excitement of the earlier period. I don't know if the author can see this post. Anyway, I'm very disappointed. The author's writing attitude makes me suspect that every book he writes in the future will be this bad, so his future novels will be worth waiting for. . . . . .

Finally... I still think the chapter about the top student is the best. After reading it, the feeling lingers, it's very beautiful...

Read this book! I suggest you skip watching and ignore the plot of the heroine Liu Hao. It would be better! The first love story between the heroine and the hero is quite interesting! After the second time, all that was left was nausea!

As a bookworm of more than ten years, please leave a comment after reading it. First of all, what is certain is that this novel can be read in the entire starting point, and it is enough to be a high-quality novel. However, there are still some shortcomings, which is why there are so few starting point masters. I'll go into details below. The first one, expression. The expression of this novel is very general. It is basically described from the perspective of the protagonist. In fact, it would be better if the description was changed from different perspectives. The second one is interesting and interesting. The writing of this novel is quite interesting. The author is obviously an experienced driver and drives like crazy, but too much would make it boring. Real humor should be able to withstand careful reading. The third one, substitution. The author wrote several copies, but the sense of immersion gradually declined. The author is not very good at suppressing first and then promoting. It would be a pity not to master such a good method. Because readers like to see the scumbag protagonist come back against the odds and make everyone laugh. The beginning should be as weak as possible under reasonable conditions, so that the protagonist has more room to become stronger, and the reader's sense of satisfaction will become stronger as they read. The fourth one is structure. This novel has a parallel structure similar to an infinite flow. The advantage is that readers can skip the copies they don't like. The disadvantage is that the coherence is too poor. Few authors can connect a large number of copies. Just like when I saw the police copy, I felt a little uncomfortable because the continuity was poor. The fifth one, reality, truth. Only what you get with hard work is precious. It is too easy for the protagonist of this novel to succeed. If the author increases the difficulty, the readability will be better. The sixth one, soft. This book has too little foreshadowing. Each dungeon should have several minor villains and one major villain. It is best to write from their perspective. This will make the novel more three-dimensional and more realistic. The seventh one, characters. Characters are the soul of the novel. Overall, the protagonist's character is not outstanding, and the supporting roles are also very vague. In fact, slowing down the progress of the dungeon and strengthening the interaction between the protagonist and supporting characters will make the characters more real. Eighth, change. This is okay, after all, you can change the copy, and the changes are enough. Ninth, details. Reading the whole article will make readers deeply impressed by the details in the text, and this book will not be too bad. For example, specific money, food, etc. The tenth, emotions. If it can arouse readers' emotions, it is a good novel. The mood swings are too low and readers are not interested in reading. Can it be good? The eleventh, climax, impact. This is very important, just like exercising with your wife, there is no way to feel good without climax.

A few details on the set. Now extra actors have to join the Screen Actors Guild first and sign up through WeChat the night before. The crew starts filming at eight o'clock, and the extras start putting on makeup at four or five o'clock. Then they wait with the crew all the time, and they pay 80 per day. The person in charge is the Assistant Actor Director, who manages the extras, guest stars, and starring actors at the same time. However, extra performances are generally managed by the Screen Actors Guild, charging a 10% fee. Basically, it takes one hour to set up and three hours to put on makeup before starting the filming. The leading actor can wait in a nice place and be notified when he arrives at the scene. Others have to wait on the set because there is no one to notify and there is no car. What the leading actors and creators eat is called director's meal, which is much better than other people's box lunches. What's the price? If the lunch box is 10 yuan, the meal will cost more than 50 yuan. The better screenwriters are not with the team, and the ones who revise the script on the spot are the on-site screenwriters. Miscellaneous matters are handled by the on-site producer, that is, standing staff, service staff, lunch boxes, etc. The director does not call the start or anything, that is the job of the on-site director. The director will sit behind the monitor, and the on-site shooting director is the on-site director. He is responsible for conveying the director's shooting intentions. Of course, some crews do not have this position to save money. In addition, rich film crews will have a documentary director who will lead a few people to shoot the footage. They will film all the interesting things about the crew that you usually see, in order to gain some exposure before the film is released. For example, plots that scare actors into tears can appear on the Internet through them.

After seeing 165, let me tell you my opinion. This is a good article. The academic chapter is quite good, with some small flaws in the details. However, when it comes to the championship chapter, it feels wrong and it is already a bit boring. When it comes to the movie king chapter, it is really poorly written and completely useless. There are so many good entertainment articles and the various rules and regulations are written vividly. The author didn't recharge his batteries before writing this article. Did he learn it? The whole company is just trying to make people happy. The girl from Beijing Film Academy has not yet graduated to help you manage Weibo and is responsible for administration and publicity. The makeup artist has the talent of being a housekeeper and oversees billions of finances. The professional accountant who has just received the certificate may not be able to handle it. Even if you are not a layman, you can understand it. The writing is like imagining that the emperor uses a golden pole. It has reached the lowest level of low-level writing. I laughed everywhere when I read it. I guess the author also thought that the writing was bad and ended it hastily. When it comes to the police chapter, the level has improved again, but there are still many errors and omissions that are limited by the author's knowledge level. For example, I am too lazy to complain about why being a police officer requires a polygraph and the specific performance of polygraph. It is also possible that the United States is a hundred years ahead of China in polygraph technology. Overall, the biggest problem lies in the outline. The author probably didn't know what kind of story he wanted to write before writing it. The female protagonist is what confuses me. Why would the author want to write a single female protagonist? I'm not saying that a single female protagonist is not possible, but what's the point of having a female protagonist who only shows up in reality and has no sense of existence except for the academic chapter? It completely limits the development of all subsequent chapters. And what did your life simulator simulate, except for the academic master chapter, what did it simulate, the life of a champion or a movie king? I only see a tool person who completes the task, and the cheating is too much. The reader can't even get the sense of accomplishment from completing the task.

I basically couldn't stand it since I started with the Best Actor. It felt completely wrong, as if someone else had written it. It was originally ordinary and ordinary, but it turned into a forced pretense and a slap in the face, which was boring.

There is nothing behind the grass jelly in front