The Sword Rises in the Laughing, Proud Wanderer, Martial Might Shakes All Worlds!

I read a few Xiaoao fandoms and they made me sick, so I had no choice but to abandon the books. Linghu Chong learned from Dugu Nine Swordsmen. He had no internal strength and could blind a dozen people at the same time with a single arrow-breaking move. And the protagonist of the fanfic learns Dugu Nine Swords and can only slash at the enemy!

The writing was pretty good, but the main character was really unlikable. There are too many selfish people in reality, but after reading this novel, the protagonist is still like this. I feel quite disappointed. Personally, I prefer a protagonist who has a bottom line but is not pedantic, who is decisive but not arrogant, and who has ambitious goals but does not have illusions. As for whether the protagonist has a harem or not, I don't care. If it is well written and the protagonist is well portrayed, even if he marries ten people, it is still what he should have. The protagonist is not well portrayed, so what if he is single-minded, he is not unlikable.

The character of the protagonist is quite annoying. He pretends to be in front of Yue Buqun for the Purple Cloud Magic Skill. In the original work, Yue Buqun also pretends to accept Lin Pingzhi into Huashan in order to ward off evil swordsmanship. No wonder the protagonist is so popular with Yue Buqun. The two of them are almost carved out of the same mold 🤫

It is impossible to know what Jin Yong's original intention was. However, from a logical point of view, Lao Yue cannot be a bad guy at the beginning. People who spend time with him all say that he is a true gentleman. Compared with Baoqiang, who can't find any black spots in Ma Rong, Lao Yue appears, who is already in his early 60s. Swordsman is from the world of martial arts, not the world of immortals. At this age, he can be considered an old man. My wife, daughter, and disciples around me, except for the undercover second son, are all upright and good people. If a bad person reaches this level, can he still be considered a bad person? To say he is a hypocrite is almost all slander and speculation. He didn't know that the second child was an undercover agent, otherwise Zixia's magical power would not have been lost. Underage disciple Lin Pingzhi was stabbed all because of the second child. There was a corpse with a scratched face at the scene. The second brother was discovered stealing secret books and wanted to fake his death to escape. The young disciple calls him master? Note that Jin Yong's special case was for underage disciples. The child saw the traitorous second brother coming and injured Lin Pingzhi. Isn't it reasonable for him to shout to the master? Two old nuns died in Shaolin. Miss Ren initially said there were no wounds. After meeting Ren Woxing, Shaoshi Shanxia changed her story and said there were pinholes. You can only think about the reasons yourself. Linghu Chong is a fool. No matter whether others are good or bad, Ren family father and daughter, Xiang Wentian, Old Nun, Mo Da and others can take advantage of him. Yue Buqun, who had nurtured him, watched him grow up, and knew him well, did not receive any benefits. Isn't this strange? Still coveting the sword manual to ward off evil spirits? ? Who would take a serious look at the martial arts of a low-level escort? Otherwise, if Quanzhen Sect, the largest sect, cannot keep the Nine Yin Scriptures, how can the Lin family be stable for decades? If Lao Yue was really thoughtful and a hypocrite, with his scheming and his identity, he would have been able to capture Linghu Chong, a fool, long ago. Would he still end up in that tragic scene? He is an honest man who was forced into a desperate situation, and finally turned black and broke.

Regarding the evaluation of Xiaoao, I only recognize one, Xiaoao Wuxia. In the entire novel, except for a few female characters, there is no interesting character. Don't do anything in the early and late stages, and don't make any excuses for blackening. Most of the characters in the book are old, including the male and female protagonists. Even the younger Lin Pingzhi is twenty years old at the beginning of the book. For these people of age or above, even if their camps change, their personalities and concepts will not change easily. Where do they come from so many "maturities" and "blackening"? In most cases, those who can turn black are either black themselves, or have fatal flaws in their character, and will become black sooner or later. How can there be so many accidents in reality?

Yue Buqun, who has not turned into a black man, is still good. Whether it is true or not, a gentleman who has been a gentleman for twenty years, as the saying goes, time will tell people's hearts. Isn't twenty years enough? The Yue Buqun family deserves to be treated well. The most disgusting thing is Linghu Chong. He is a white-eyed wolf. Either kill him or abolish his martial arts and expel him from the school. Only in this way can he relieve the bad energy in his heart.

Many people think that in Jin Yong's Xiaoao, Yue Buqun was a gentleman in the early stage and later turned evil. In fact, this is not the case. He has been coveting the evil sword manual from the beginning. Yue Buqun is a real villain, but everyone doesn't know what he is hiding. I have read the original work of He Xiaoao no less than five times. Jin Yong actually wrote it very clearly in the original work, and even used Lauderno's mouth to make it clear at the beginning of the chapter.

The most disgusting one among the divine eagles is Zhou Botong. He slept with someone else's woman and had someone else go to great lengths to save his son. This made the emperor become a monk. It's really disgusting.

I don't understand why you want to hang out with Qu Yang and Qu Feiyan. Aren't you just another Linghu Chong? And Ren Yingying treated you like that, but you didn't kill her, you're a licker.

I caught up to Chapter 19 in one go. The overall rhythm and characters are very stable, and there are almost no annoying points that make people feel uncomfortable. It is very comfortable to read. I hope that Linghu Chong will not go dark in the future. Since the protagonist has such "extraordinary talent" and his cultivation level has been rising, his mind and structure should also be broadened.

Before going down the mountain, I thought I could get a high score of 8 points among Xiaoao fans. After going down the mountain, I only had about 5 points left until I met Qu Yang and Ren Yingying.

It's strange. It was very comfortable to read in Huashan, and the writing rhythm was good. Why does it not look so good when you go down the mountain?

Compared with other martial arts, it is considered a good fanfic.

It's very good. The writing is in line with modern people's cognition. It doesn't appear to be full of self-superiority. Ordinary people should understand how rare it is to be stable and protect themselves more than anything else.

He claims that he regards Huashan as his family, but in fact he still has the same logic as the protagonist of the selfish online article who eats his own food first and then distributes it to Huashan if there is anything left. There are too many such selfish protagonists in martial arts online novels. This type of protagonist is too low-key. Among the martial arts novels I have read, Swords Out of Hengshan is the best. The protagonist does not hide his magical power or realizes it for himself. He submits it to the masters for common understanding. The protagonist is always unique. Most of the protagonists in martial arts fanfiction like to hold on to their magic when they get good things, for fear that others will get past them. In fact, most protagonists have their own plug-ins, so how can they not have any confidence at all? My opinion is that the protagonist's inner lack of confidence is actually a reflection of some aspect of the author's heart. Reading a book written by a person can provide a glimpse into the author's mind.

The writing is quite in line with my preferences, and there is no hypocrisy. It is considered a good one at the moment. I kind of sympathize with Lao Yue, and I feel that the author's arrangement is quite good I forgot that the book I have read before has the same routine. As long as there is help, Lao Yue can be a lifelong gentleman The heroine Yue Lingshan is actually quite good, Ren Yingying feels It's better to forget about each other, otherwise it's really difficult to arrange and it's easy to collapse. I will go to the moderator to see a harem with multiple heroines. It doesn't require the author to bother And compared to having two heroines, it's better to let the protagonist create more martial arts skills. The protagonist uses his own unique martial arts to strengthen Lao Zuo and Lao Ren in some big plots.

The character design is okay and the writing is okay. But the transformation of your world is too blunt, too forced, and too embarrassing. What about the explanation of Swordsman Chapter? Of course you can go back and come back according to the changes in "Bing Jade". But the map change was too sudden, so there is no need to write it like this. I forced to lay a mine. And the strength of the protagonist you described, Hong Qigong can win with eight successes ? ! You have already mastered the Qi Wall with your Zixia Magical Skill, and the Qi-Breaking Style is almost like the Xiantian Body-Breaking Invisible Sword Qi. In Chapter 146, one palm can leave a two-inch deep palm print on a tree three feet away. Who among the divine sculptures behaves like this? Maybe Yang Guo can try it later. But how can Hong Qigong win? Your description of performance is not something that Hong Qigong can touch. You can beat Hong Qigong to death with just the strength of your palms. Even regardless of the performance of the protagonist, can Hong Qigong remain undefeated in Dongfang? Secondly, you, the protagonist, killed Dongfang Bubai in one breath, let me do it, Zuo Lengchan, and defeated Fang Zheng and Chongxu. (I don't count other small fish and shrimps) And the conversation between the protagonist and Hong Qigong is really, a little bit intellectual I'll take a look at it again, and don't mess with the readers, okay? 😐

Well written, I feel like classical martial arts

The previous writing was quite satisfactory, but as soon as I got in touch with Ren Yingying, my style of painting changed. You might as well let the Demon Cult do everything for you. It would be great to just speed through the Five Mountains Sword Sect. I don't know what the plot is.

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I really can't accept the conspiracy theory at the beginning of Shendiao's article. Choose to quit!

Wouldn't it be better to write Dongfang Invincible as Brigitte Lin's version?

It's so slow that I no longer have the motivation to chase. I'll just keep this update until you finish settling the account.

The ten good karma are specifically divided into the good karma of the body: not killing, not stealing, and not committing sexual misconduct; the good karma of language: not lying, not speaking harshly, not being divisive, and not being frivolous; the good karma of the mind: not being greedy, not being angry, and not being delusional.

It looks weird, was it written by AI?

Martial arts was given soul and meaning by Guo Jing Qiao Feng, but current martial arts novels deny the definition of martial arts. Martial arts is the underworld, which completely denies Guo Jing Qiao Feng.

The book is really good. I keep reading it. By the way, I would like to recommend my book "Zhutian: Master, please respect yourself!"

Are the Eight Immortal Aunts and Ren Yingying and Xiang Wentian dead? If you're dead, please kick me and I'll continue watching

After cultivating it for a while, I suddenly saw that Stenda had learned the Dafa of absorbing energy and was a little confused. I couldn't understand the plot. I wondered if I had forgotten a certain plot 🙂