Seeking the Dao and Immortality, I Am the Butcher's Knife

Finally found a novel without a female lead! Those novels about immortality and the pursuit of immortality with female leads are so annoying. You have to control her cultivation resources, her lifespan, and keep her secrets—it's just so frustrating.

Two-watch beasts are not your limit, but just your beginning.

For three years, I've been a live-in son-in-law, subjected to daily domestic violence by my wife, and my in-laws have been cold and sarcastic towards me. My best friend even seduced my wife. My countless acts of forbearance have only resulted in her escalating abuse. I've reached my breaking point; I can no longer endure it. Just ten more chapters from the author, and you can hear my revenge plan.

Come, author, repeat after me my solemn oath: From today onward, I will never stop updating. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not play games or write filler articles. I will be strictly self-disciplined, cherish time like gold, be indomitable, strive hard, pursue excellence, strive for brilliance, find joy in writing, be tempered into steel, and be worthy of my readers, worthy…

This is the only smear article I can find right now, please don't abandon it 😭

My personal opinion on this book: An overemphasis on "caution" can, over time, create the illusion of timidity and fearfulness in the reader. The male protagonist lacks confidence, and his combat strength is slightly low. After watching for a while, you'll get a very frustrating feeling of tormenting the protagonist. As the protagonist, he naturally needs some protagonist halo.

Why is the protagonist becoming less and less human the more he cultivates? He must have some kind of disguise technique. The more advanced his cultivation, the easier it is to transform into human form. The body is just an outer shell, that's fine, but people prefer something aesthetically pleasing.

I think Raymond Lam's storyline is really toxic, extremely toxic. One was trying to control the Spirit Sea cultivator while the other was trying to cultivate Qi, and it turned out like this. The protagonist was too impatient and ended up reaping the consequences. Just assign him any kind of mission outside the home, and that will be fine.

The cultivation novel system has many illogical settings, and the plots are all about encountering caves, secret realms, cultivation techniques, and so on. They're all pretty much the same, and after reading too many, they become bland. Plus, with so many fortuitous encounters, it feels like the protagonist is showered with treasures by the God of Wealth, blessed with a protagonist's halo.

There are no major flaws at the moment; it should be considered a "mortal-oriented" approach. Avoid actions that are easily banned, such as directly devouring people. You could try a different method, such as directly draining life force, or a more roundabout approach. Is it 8u? You can keep writing, and refine the details further.