Starting as a Tiger-Jiao

There is basically no poison in the story about evil spirits. The protagonist has a smooth journey, but when he shows his strength, he is very smooth and does not feel awkward and pretentious like that kind of novice novel. Although there is no special plot of wits, the villain's IQ is still online, and there is no embarrassing plot like "I see you are unhappy and I will kill you immediately". The protagonist's battle process can be summed up in one sentence: I got up, and I was dead in a matter of seconds. What is there to say? Let me talk about a few points that I personally like very much: 1. The protagonist is affectionate and righteous. In order to repay his sworn brother, he did not hesitate to take risks many times. Of course, the same goes for his elder brother. Compared with the selfishness of the mainstream writing methods which are "There are no brothers, only younger brothers" and "Kick the brothers aside and forget them as soon as they are developed", I really like to see such a simple brotherly relationship! 2. There is no love line for the time being, and I personally hope there will be no love lines in the future. Yes (if there is one in the future, I hope it will be a single female protagonist, and the other race should not be human. I am most afraid of this kind of plot where shemales have different paths) ... Because many authors cannot grasp the portrayal of emotions, writing the male protagonist as a lecherous thief, and the female protagonist as a slut, countless _(´ཀ`" ∠)__ This is a big poisonous point, especially for novels about monsters and monsters Currently, the protagonist has an adopted daughter, a cat demon. Personally, I feel that portraying the image of a "kind old father" can make the protagonist's image more three-dimensional, especially in contrast to the protagonist's ferocious appearance. It has a contrasting and cute feeling ∠( ᐛ "∠)_ You can also enrich the emotional content of the novel by the way 3. I don't know how to describe it specifically, but I feel that it is quite immersive. For example, the reason why I wrote this book review is that the protagonist likes to have a golden thigh. I am sincerely happy for him.

Protagonist

The tiger dragon in the current Journey to the West Conquering the Demons chapter is too ugly.

The author, please don't forget that Shang believes in black birds, and don't engage in snakes and dragons.

How can I put it, the writing is very interesting, but there is something wrong with the outline and structure of the novel. A good novel must tell a story well. A grand world view is based on telling a story well, otherwise it will be meaningless. The author's idea is relatively novel, but it is too complicated, too many and too complicated. As far as I can see , has been stitched into Zhu Xian, Legend of Sword and Fairy 3, Journey to the West, and The Romance of the Gods. Sometimes adding too many things will weaken your main narrative. The things you want to add must be able to strengthen your storyline and promote your story. But now it seems to give me a feeling of "I think this thing is interesting, I can write it in." Another problem is that if you add all these things, but do not have so much space and writing power to write, or do not have enough adjustment ability to balance the weight between them, it will become something superficial, not deep enough, and unable to leave a lasting impression on the readers. It makes a deep impression, but it still seems very complicated. Instead of adding points, it will deduct points. This is also an aspect that tests the author's own control ability. It may be better to sort out the priorities and detail. This aspect is also a point that distinguishes the new vests of great masters from the true novice writers. Although, the writing is still very good, and I have been reading it. If readers feel that what I said is wrong, it doesn't matter if you scold me.

I tried my best to use my imagination. The color scheme is based on gold and the impression of water. To be honest, it may make the overall picture feel a bit feminine. I feel that the protagonist is not strong enough to have a strong face and tall figure, but I am afraid of painting him like a middle-aged uncle. It is difficult 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Editor: Slightly adjusted the neck and shoulders, which should better reflect the protagonist's figure.

I hope that the protagonist will not be the kind with a handsome face and a righteous face in the future. I am going to vomit.

As the title suggests, collect well-known mythical beasts, ferocious beasts, and monsters from various Classics of Mountains and Seas and traditional myths. It would be best if you have pictures. In addition, collect great magical powers such as the laws of heaven and earth, especially water-attribute magical powers, spells and exercises (as the magical powers that are inherited and awakened in the blood of the protagonist as he grows up). Various magic weapons that are well-known or feel awesome are also required. As long as it is from the myths and legends of our ancestors, I want it here. Crowdfunding to write a book, brothers, please!

Okay, kill if you have to, and be a monster properly

It is okay to adopt an adopted daughter, but it is recommended not to describe too much in words Normal dialogue relationship is enough After all, this is an article about alien beasts and not about master and apprentice cuteness and cuteness. I think it is not necessary. I just want to see the protagonist is not a human being and does not have so many emotional disputes.