Embracing the Moon

From the moment you write, you are not only responsible for the book, but also for yourself. Unfinished books are like dead larvae. Even if you have great ambitions, they are just a dream. Judging from the chapters that have been published so far, "Mahabodhi" has a grander world view and a clear main line, but there are relatively few branch lines. The plot progresses steadily and the rhythm is melodious and graceful. Between the lines of your words is ambition, expectation, and a blockbuster. Now that you have taken the first ten steps, please finish the remaining ninety steps. Take a rest when you are tired. If you have no inspiration, you might as well change the direction. Walk to the waterless place and sit and watch the clouds rise. No author's success is accidental. Do you still remember your original intention of writing a book? If it's just for money, you might as well write novices. With your talent, it shouldn't be difficult. But looking at online articles, there are only a few well-known works, and they are all works by great masters. If you want to gain a broader world, you need to calm down, savor it carefully, think about it over and over again, and never regret it even if you correct it a thousand times. Books should be the fruit of night and silence, not of day and idle chatter. In the book, you are Ji Yuenian, but outside the book, you are just you. You can stay the same. What we say is just gossip, coming like the wind, but it is also a noisy sentence from you. Every author deserves respect, but not every author deserves to be followed. With that said, let's wait and see.                                                                                                                                                            since

This is one of the best immortal novels I have ever read. The protagonist's personality is the closest to an immortal (not like a human anyway). The protagonist's wisdom and character are described very well. If there is true spiritual practice, it is probably only this kind of inhuman thing that can become an immortal. He is indifferent and has few desires, and he is devoted to seeking immortality. . . As for some people saying that dark writing is not true, the writing style is indeed not passionate and depressing enough compared to stallion and regular upgraded fairy writing. But it has more depth, which makes this story feel more real. After all, it is cruel enough, and reality is inherently cruel. . .

You are right, so the secret is revealed. You know best. If you just want to write an ending, it will still be hard for you to be a genius. You can't count how many chapters have been completed. Writing a book review is never unconscionable and has no yin and yang. You deleted it, ok. Let me see what you wrote in the end. You co-authored the book for your own reading, right? Now that I have subscribed, I have the right to speak for it. You delete it nn

I feel like it's okay in every aspect, except that the protagonist doesn't have much of a human touch, and feels like a human machine.

I have been reading for more than ten years, so let me tell you why I gave up. The author's writing style is very good, and the quality of this book is definitely better than most novels, but it's a bit dark in style. Family ties are estranged, friendships are weak, people are like weeds, the world of cultivation is full of intrigues, and calling the birth mother her name is too rude, so I decided to abandon it. Book friends who like dark styles can read it.

It's well written, and I didn't feel it was dark at all. It's quite normal, I'm very happy to see it. I haven't encountered an article of this quality in a long time. The author's writing is superb. It's just that my grades are too bad and I'm worried that I'll go to the palace. It's a student party, but you still have to support it and subscribe for future chapters. I hope the author can persevere. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

If you don't want to write, then stop writing and spend all day drawing.

You keep urging me, but the author is also a human being. He also needs to rest. He keeps updating. Isn't he tired? But if he is tired, what does it have to do with me? I suggest you write to death if you can't write to death! Damn it, it's been so long, it's time for the production team's donkeys to work!

Not bad indeed. Both the written expression and the logical self-consistency are great. Especially the background of the story. Based on the familiar Journey to the West background such as the Heavenly Court system, the Dragon Palace of the Four Seas, and Buddhism, and some of the author's own original elements, I am very much looking forward to it? By the way, what I like most is the description of the characters in the article, which makes me feel that I have finally found a normal book again. Some people say it is dark text, what? Is the bottom line of being a human being so high now?

The author has pointed out that this book is a lie and it is now over. I hope there will be a follow-up and weave a bigger lie😁🥺