Swordsmanship Above All

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The plot flow is very appetizing, and I also like the character of the heroine, but I have to wait to gain weight. Who knows how many books I have gained at the same time...

It's amazing. There aren't many books like this that are impeccable in every aspect. The author's writing is very well-conceived, and I feel like he must have put a lot of thought into it. The plot is compact and feels high-energy throughout. Some people think there are too many psychological descriptions, but I think the characters are richer. All in all, it is very exciting, bookworms should not miss it!

I was "shocked" when I first saw him, especially when he was on the line between life and death several times. Originally I wasn't interested in rebirth novels. I'd read too many and always felt the same. This one really made me read it over and over again, and I was deeply impressed. Even if it's broken (just a hypothesis), the chapters already written are still exciting enough. So I won't rush it. I just want to let people know that there are people reading this book and waiting for it.

1. The female cultivator is more realistic, with dark human nature, but also a kind and positive side. The author has limited writing power, so he can only write what he wants to write. 2. This is not a masterpiece that will be famous throughout the ages. It is just a humble work. There will be flaws. For example, it is very slow to warm up and can be called a fighter. If you want to see a smooth and smooth upgrade in one step, please go out and turn left. For example, the text is a bit verbose. I have worked hard to improve it, but I am still not satisfied. Please go out and turn right. 3. Accept criticism, say it is correct and I will correct it, but please try to say it in this chapter. I will try not to move in the comment area, but I did not understand it, and misinterpreted what was expressed in the book. Malicious comments mislead newcomers, and all posts will be banned and deleted. 5. Complaint - The author of Sanyuan is very busy. Apart from working, eating and sleeping, he basically spends all the time he can squeeze in coding. But writing itself is difficult. I also have to act as customer service and answer questions. The important thing is that it doesn't cost money. Why am I so worried? Don't blame me for not replying. Don't call me tacky. I worked hard to code for a month and you didn't even spend five yuan. Do you think I'm tacky? Then I beg you not to read it. 6. Finally, thank you to everyone who supports genuine subscriptions. [Note] A self-report and begging from a humble author who suffers from repeated attacks of mouse hands - please support the original version and give the author a bite to eat!

The beginning is really long-winded. Many of the descriptions are either similar or repetitive, and the same thing is said over and over again. When writing a novel, it is a good thing to have plot foreshadowing, but if it is too foreshadowed, it will affect the progress of the plot too much, just like a water chapter.

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The idea of this book is actually very good, and it is good to create some atmosphere at the beginning, but as the author said, the writing is too tedious. The plot flow and the upgrade flow are different. All book friends know this, but if you analyze and explain over and over again, you are a book lover idiot. Is it? The plot is driven by endless explanations and analysis. After reading dozens of chapters, I can finish the story in 5 chapters. Add the background and writing method and dig some holes. At most, I should leave the town and change the map in 20 chapters. How many chapters have you been grinding? I am speechless.

Although it's very interesting to watch, I really can't stand it anymore. The plot is too long and lengthy. It's written over and over again in one sentence. It would be nice if it could be simplified.

The book is okay, the plot and characters are good, but it's a bit too wordy. There's no need to keep asking questions and explain a lot of things when describing them. Just explain the reasons concisely and clearly. It's too wordy and makes me feel tired.