The Mountains Call

I have read all the updated ones so far. Let me tell you my feelings. The beginning is very interesting. There are no clichéd systems and plug-ins. It is a realistic dark style with elements of Cthulhu DND Wizard, mainly Cthulhu. I think the writing is quite good and very flavorful. It is one of the best starting points. There is no such thing as a routine in this book. The protagonist is the author. As a pioneer, it is a pioneer of slash and fire. It is very novel and has a unique power system. At least it is the first time I have seen it. There is also a very important point. The protagonist is a living person who will make mistakes, fail, be careless, arrogant, and angry. However, I feel that there is less emotional writing, making the protagonist a bit dry and cold. Moreover, it is not refreshing enough. The ending is too rough and skipped, which lacks a lot of sense of immersion. Some things are not explained clearly, and it feels a bit like moving here and there. I find the fighting scenes extremely embarrassing, and I'm looking forward to the undeveloped map and power system, so be sure to hold on tight and don't write down. But overall, in a world where pretentious writing is rampant, this is a rare and thoughtful work. The author is also doing it for love, and I admire this spirit. While reading the book, I also met a Madonna reader, and I really wanted to give them both a thumbs-up. Finally, I hope that the author's story will get better and better and more exciting. Readers who are watching this for the first time should be patient and read on.

After entering the academy, it became the classic pretense and slap-in-the-face routine of Qidian. The settings and plots that were so amazing in the early stage have turned into rubbish here, as if they had hired a ghostwriter. If this book had followed the plot line at the beginning, it would have become popular a long time ago.

This book is a lot more advanced than Black Adam, in all aspects. Behind the smooth plot text, I saw a relatively complete outline. I hope the author of the later setting plot will also think hard and not end up like Black Adam. After reading this book, I saw the author's true potential to become a god. I still hope that the protagonist can try his best to get some recommendations or publicity.

This pretense is too stiff. I don't know why, but after fighting with that new star, it suddenly turned into a brainless and cool article. . . Is there really no substitution?

Alas, the author Da Da's last book was originally very exciting, but it's a pity that it was due to performance reasons. The subject matter was a bit niche, and the writing style was not worthy of mention.

This book is not at the starting point (read alone)

The more I read, the more disappointed I became. I was introduced to the Grammar novel, but when I went to school, it turned into a traditional Western fantasy, as if it was written by two people, and the taste completely changed.

After leaving the Ural Mountains and starting to slide down, I immediately threw up when I saw the chapter "New Star Supernova". The mysterious, weird, and Cthulhu flavor was gone, and a fantasy smell came over my face, but it was still earthy fantasy.

Regardless of the writing, the opening of this book is the best I have ever seen in a book of this type, a perfect opening, a god-like opening.     ，，，， If you follow the beginning, you will definitely be able to become a god, which can only be said to be a pity.

In the first chapter, the time traveler was threatened and forced to tell everything, and the efforts to persuade him to quit were maxed out.