Starting as a Renowned Hengshan Master in the World of Martial Arts

Let's just say that the writing style is not particularly superb, but it is quite good, and the plot is also refreshing. It can also be seen that the author still has a cultural background. He should have checked a lot of information on many details. I recommend it!

First of all, let's set the tone. This is a very good novel. It can be clearly seen that the author's level is on a good level. If you only read this book as a pure martial arts, then it is definitely not the right text. As a fanfic + history + martial arts, it is very good. Each character is well portrayed, and the personality changes of the characters in the original work are not too abrupt, conforming to the logic of neither more nor less. In short, this is a novel that is above the passing mark. Maybe it's because of the topic choice. I don't know if this book is good or not, but I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch and updates it quickly! If the author's next book is of this level, I will still read it.

The martial arts system of this book has completely collapsed, and you have written a good martial arts drama into a time-travel drama. I don't even think about how the imperial court can tolerate martial arts sects like you with such strong combat power. The protagonist's martial arts system is full and he is like a loser. When a martial arts boss meets the government, he is like a top dog. A guard in uniform can conquer the entire martial arts sect. Also, the Wuyue Sword Sect is just a small sect. A novel described all martial arts sects as licking dogs, humble and weak. What kind of messy splicing book did you write? When writing about martial arts, just write about martial arts, and when writing about history, just write about history. You have to focus on one thing, otherwise it will really look like a mess.

If the protagonist's martial arts is not enough, go to the "Nine Yang Manual", "Poison Scripture" and "Medical Sutra" left behind the cave on the northwest cliff of Zhuwu Lianxiang in Kunlun Mountain, where Zhang Wuji buried his sutras, and find the "Old Tomb Sect Martial Arts Stone Carvings" in the Tomb of the Living Dead in Zhongnan Mountain and the Ancient Tomb Sect's training room. Quanzhen School's martial arts stone carvings> and "Jade Girl Heart Sutra" and "Jade Girl Suxin Sword Technique" can dominate the world, as well as the fragments of "Nine Yin Manual", "Great Demon-Suppressing Fist", "Waving the Five Strings", "Soul-Taking Technique", "Easing Muscles and Forging Bones", "Hell's Wind Roar", "Helix Nine Shadows", etc. Etc., There may also be the "Liancheng Sword Technique" and "Shenzhao Sutra" in the treasures of Emperor Liang Wu of Tianning Temple, the "Flame Sword" that is comparable to the "Six Meridians Divine Sword" in the Snow Mountain Dalun Temple, and possibly the "Small Wuxiang Divine Art", Tibet has the "Dragon Elephant Prajna Art", and finally at Lingjiu Peak in Tianshan Mountain The underground palace contains all the martial arts stone carvings of the Jin sect's martial arts ceiling "Xiaoyao sect" and all the martial arts of its subordinates "Thirty-six holes" and "Seventy-two islands", as well as countless martial arts secrets collected by the Xiaoyao sect. As long as one thousandth of them can be left behind, they can dominate the world.

What can I say about this book? It's well written. However, any unknown general who comes to the imperial court is a great martial arts master. This is a bit unacceptable. You think it's just an internal guard trained by the royal family. You're making martial arts masters worthless at all.

I was deceived, this is not a martial arts novel 😅

Liu Qing Height: 172cm

Overall, it's good, especially the way Songshan defeats Liu's government. It's really eye-catching. There are many novels about breaking the situation by practicing magical skills, using force to suppress others, using literature to break the situation, becoming a Jinshi, and bringing the legitimacy of the court to force oneself to become the trend. It's really rare, and it has a different kind of refreshing feeling. This alone is enough to add to the bookshelf. Especially after being admitted to Jinshi and becoming a close minister of Zhengde, he can still influence the emperor and give Wuzong the possibility of reaching Hongwu and Yongle. I find the pleasure of historical novels in martial arts. But there are indeed problems with the chapters about returning home. Things are too complicated and the time is too tight, giving people a scattered and bloated feeling. The seven-day martial arts performance is a bit too anticlimactic. The wedding chapter is not as grand as it is described (I don't know if it is my own perception problem). Actually, I can accept the problems. After all, I just discovered this novel today and read it all at once. I skipped chapters with problematic pacing. It's not a big problem. As long as it's not something that has to be explained, I can accept it. At least the author is still writing and putting effort into it. He just needs to adjust the rhythm of the plot back as soon as possible, or he can add 1-2W words a day. It's not unacceptable to have a single chapter pacing. Like the Eagle, one major event ends in a few days and another one starts immediately. Is there any problem with the pacing difference? No problem at all.

So far, it is very well written. The author has a profound literary background and a grand layout. It goes beyond the narrowness of martial arts novels and is full of new ideas. Worth reading carefully, recommended

Beautiful little girl

Jinshi uniform Juren uniform

This book is in the wrong place. If it is placed in a historical text, it may be read more. If it is placed in a martial arts text, it will let a bunch of people who like to watch martial arts masters enjoy themselves in martial arts.

The writing is well-written and the logic is rigorous, but the expectations for the plot are not strong, especially after Zuo Lengchan's merging conspiracy is solved. The protagonist's martial arts has been upgraded, but there are too few application scenarios after the upgrade. It has forced the martial arts fandom into an alternate history. Think about Xiao Li Tanhua, who also has an official status, but only as a background foil. You can't figure out the priority. After a hundred chapters, there is no sense of expectation at all.

After reading a hundred chapters, when I looked at the table of contents later, it was all about the imperial court, and it was all about the imperial court with the Five Sacred Mountains. I thought it was off topic, so I stopped reading. Personally, I still prefer Jianghu!

Why are there so many fan books about Swordsman recently? The routines are almost the same, such as Hengshan, Imperial Examination, and Borderline... Was it written by AI?

Let's rewrite it. I can't stand the first chapter when the system comes out. My advice to the author is nothing else. It is not easy to publish a gold series martial arts book now. Systematic writing is outdated, and few of the books that produce results are systematic writing, and they are still such mindless systematic writing. To get this right, the author should check the information carefully and let the male protagonist practice martial arts and study. Also, there is a big loophole at the beginning of the first chapter. Since Pig's Foot is very talented in reading, lives in the Liu Mansion, and is Liu Zhengfeng's eldest disciple, he is no different from his own son. The whole family should not know about the young master's provincial examination and the announcement of the announcement. How could he react like this as a housekeeper. The door should be open, and the whole family should be waiting for the good news. And there is a way of saying good news. It should be, congratulations to your master, whose surname is so-and-so, what is your high school grade in so-and-so, etc. All authors should check more information

🤔 The early stage was a bit too slow, and the journey to Beijing was really long. I don't know whether the author wanted to write about martial arts or history! If you want to write about history, don't use martial arts to attract the audience. If you want to write about martial arts, don't get hung up on the minutiae! Martial arts does not have the flavor of being a martial artist, and history does not have a rigorous economic structure! I can see that it feels a bit like a literary youth The book was renamed: Ming Dynasty Swordsman in the Entertainment Circle! The protagonist practices martial arts, serves as an official, writes songs and lyrics

The protagonist succeeds in the imperial examination and becomes a member of the Yuan Dynasty! This is a huge leap in status and class! If you have the status of being a civil servant, you are no longer a citizen, but an official! He is a reserve official and also a civilian official! With this status, why do you want to be involved in the world? What is the identity of Jianghu people? The butchers and escorts in the market are just working in the business. They are all cheap servants. How can they be compared with officials or serious civil servants? Scholars can be officials, but there is an unbridgeable gap between officials and officials! What's more, it's a serious civil service official? The Liu family now has a protagonist who has passed the national examination, and his status has been on the same level as before when he failed to win the national examination! The Songshan sect dares to kill Master Juren? Could it be that Zuo Lengchan wanted to blame the Songshan Sect for rebellion? Funny?

I know that the author wants to portray the protagonist as a gentle gentleman, but there is no need to always "speak gently". The repetition rate of the word "gentle" is too high, so you can consider reducing the number of times.

Alas, this author is actually pretty good at writing novels. But the plot is not interesting. It is neither literary nor martial. It is not like a historical imperial examination novel or a martial arts novel. The plot is too bland and there is nothing exciting about it. It is really boring. This martial art is not interesting at all. With this system, it is not difficult at all. It's even more boring now that the official is here.

I saw 326. Dongfang Bubai died. In fact, I originally read it as a historical novel, and the martial arts plot interspersed in it seemed to me to be a good adjustment. The author has always handled it very well; until I saw the chapters before and after Dongfang Invincible Death, it felt a bit abrupt, and then the story of Yue Lingshan was introduced, and the sense of abruptness became even stronger. I can't stand it anymore, so I'll put it on the bookshelf and I'll come back when the idea strikes me. It's not that I don't read harem novels. On the contrary, I read more harem novels. But how can I put it, maybe it's pretentious, or maybe I had higher expectations for this book.

It was good in the beginning, but not so good after returning to my hometown. Especially in the "Martial Arts Tournament" and the following pictures, it really stretched my legs. The plot was dull, the rhythm was poor, and the character description was lacking. If it really doesn't work, the author can act like biting the lighter

If you don't read Ta as a martial arts, then this book is still very good. The writing style is of a high standard and is quite acceptable for daily writing. The disadvantage is that political thinking is extremely naive and often taken for granted. The level of history fluctuates up and down. In some places, he has studied them carefully (mainly the details of ancient life), but in some places he doesn't understand and just starts to make up things (mainly military, technology and politics). With a slight tendency to be a fan, but with a crooked butt, there were uprisings in various parts of Jiangxi, and more than a dozen rebels were rebelling against the army. Regardless of the reason, they directly described them as rebels and suppressed them. After that, they patched them up and said that their military discipline was corrupt to create a sense of justice. They were both responsible and established.

I saw that many readers put forward different opinions, so I read it a few more times myself and looked at the analysis of Yue Lingshan's character on the Internet. Yue Lingshan is a bit unruly and willful, but she is not a person who does not understand propriety, or she is a very measured person. She obeys her father at home and her husband when she gets married. I misunderstood the role here, I'm sorry. So I revised that paragraph and changed the original plot of reading the letter from home to the one after reading the first page and finding out that it was a personal letter. I realized that I had acted recklessly, so I did not continue to turn the pages, but pulled out the last page to confirm who the writer was. In this case, it is more in line with the character of the original character and more reasonable. Finally, bosses who like this book can give it a lot of support, and those who don't like it can also get together and part ways~ I wish everyone a happy weekend and a good mood every day~ Thank you

The writing is very innovative. Integrate talents, beauties and the world together. I hope the author can keep writing. Write about the humanity and world in your heart! 👍

Although there are only eight chapters, it is very easy to read The male protagonist is a bit wise in his wit, and Lao Liu is also really kind to his apprentice Yuan Gong did not learn somersault clouds when he was not handsome enough, Lao Liu did not blame him, but instead went to develop an awesome light kung fu and gave it to his apprentice. The male protagonist secretly introduced musicians to Lao Liu, but in the end, Lao Liu still fell in love with Qu Yang, which made him laugh to death But the author, please give me more trouble!

The front is interesting, but the back is a bit anticlimactic, and the system's presence is a bit too low.

In view of the fact that the author of Hun Dan dares not to update during the Mid-Autumn Festival, I had no choice but to read the last four or five chapters twice today, and I suddenly thought of a problem. As for sending Sage Wang to Dingbian, Gansu, for Xiao Ou, I am afraid there are two values ​​- One is for Xiao Wang himself, which naturally goes without saying. Whether it is Xiao Wang's gratitude for his kindness after making great achievements, or whether it is the improvement of his moral integrity and prestige inside and outside the court, it can be placed here. There is also a relatively hidden strategic significance, which is still in a state of being in a state of limbo: Xiao Wang left, and King Ning rebelled soon after. This is also a huge contribution. Who will go? Xiao Ou has dealt with Prince Ning, and he is one of the few ministers in the court who is both civil and military. He can both fight and caress. Whether you go by yourself or send others within the faction to go, it is another step up. If Xiao Ou comes in person, this merit will not only be enough for Zhengde to send him to the cabinet and become the minister of the Ministry of Rites, but also to naturally start to cut down the Tibetans. When the Ministry of Household Affairs and the Ministry of Rites work together, and with the strong support of Zhengde, who is at the height of his prestige, the biggest cancer of the Ming Dynasty - the issue of vassal princes and royal relatives may be solved. Even if he had to settle for the next best thing, the cabinet boss Yang Laoliang would not let Xiao Ou go out of checks and balances. Xiao Ou took advantage of the situation and let Peng Ze and Lao Zuo, who were close to him, go. He was in the middle to coordinate and support, which was also a huge favor. For example, if Lao Zuo is allowed to go, it may be the first time that Lao Zuo takes charge of his own affairs and fights a strategic battle. Taking advantage of the situation, he can enter the palace and reach the top of the pyramid of the true Zhengde Dynasty. For Zhengde, this also means that his team of cronies has been further strengthened, and the imperial power, especially in terms of force, has been further consolidated.

Qu Feiyan Ou Zanghua's best wingman! (PS: This is the actress Amy, she looks very cute and beautiful~)

The author has good writing skills and cultural background, but there are too many things he wants to write about, including martial arts, history, court, war, and folk culture such as opera and folk music. Anyway, overall, I feel that one is very messy, and the other is unclear, and what affects the perception the most is that the author has to write so many things, but maybe due to the length, each part is average, the folk culture part is okay, but the fighting part, especially the war part, is a mess.