Bleach: Forced to Clock In

It's... Pretty frustrating. Does the author really not realize that his biggest flaw is the romantic subplot? As you can see from the replies, most of the criticism focuses on the strange premise and the romance. The former is common in almost every fanfiction, but the latter, whenever it appears, invariably indicates a major problem with the author's writing style regarding the romance.

Your opening line is so toxic! How desperate for women are you, drooling like that? You exude the aura of a total loser.

Actually, there are many things I don't want to say. As for reading, if you like it, keep reading; if you don't, just click the X. Not everyone has the time to read comments and argue with everyone! I was quite excited when I heard the news a while ago that *Bleach* would be getting an anime adaptation.

The pursuit of sexy women is a major deterrent for many people. The timeline is moving too fast. They've only been in the Bleach world for a year and already encountered the main characters. What's next? There are so many plot holes in this anime. The timeline is actually quite good if we go back a few hundred years.

Also, let me explain what the consequences would be if you asked someone in Soul Society if they knew a Shinigami named Kurosaki. First, if all of this happened at the beginning, when the Fifth Division Commander was still Hirako Shinji, then Kurosaki's surname represented a noble surname among the Quincy, the mortal enemies of Soul Society, much like asking someone in the former Soviet Union if…

Crossdressing is impossible (but it's actually quite appealing).

Wow, you've really got some nerve starting off like a total loser! Goodbye!

How many people still believe that spiritual pressure is a special energy source for Shinigami (death gods)? Does using Kido (demon arts) always deplete spiritual pressure? How did this bizarre idea come about? Spiritual pressure, a concept from the manga *Bleach*, refers to the density of a person's soul (including in determining a Shinigami's (death god's) survival).

Please, please, no harem novels! Things aren't like they used to be. Now, the mere sight of a harem novel makes me want to quit. I initially came for the fanfiction's plot, but the romance became just too much of a hassle. If you want to see stories about finding women, just read novels specifically written for that kind of plot; why bother with fanfiction?

The toxicity is too much; the "golden finger" (a powerful ability to grant special abilities) doesn't go well with the Grim Reaper. I couldn't continue after reading 10 chapters. The time travel point is too late; Renji is already a vice-captain, which means the main story will begin in a few months.