Visitor from Another Plane

Personal feeling! If this book is not set up in the later stage, it will be such a high-quality fairy grass novel. The first world is currently written very well, but there is also a problem, what should I do next! It's quite difficult, author, you have to stay steady and don't drift away.

Everyone wants to read more, but it is not important. There are really many updates, which is an option but not a necessary condition The necessary condition is to keep updating, and it is unshakable. One chapter must be updated every day, which is very difficult There is also a necessary condition. From the perspective of a reader, the protagonist cannot be unlucky all the time, but how to interpret what unlucky is It depends on the individual Then it depends on whether you like what you have written. As long as you can endure it, it is generally not too bad. Each stage is about one million words, and you will probably know the result after three million words. But many people give up before they even pass the 500,000 new book period, so it depends on how much you like what you write. To put it bluntly, how much are you willing to pay?

Unexpectedly good-looking, it feels a bit like a real running group O(∩_∩)O

It's so difficult to break the game and create a novice village 🤫

I think it's not bad, except that the introduction is a bit too esoteric and makes people feel confused and don't want to understand. It is recommended to change to an easy-to-understand, straightforward introduction. The content is pretty good. I like to set up the party reasonably.

It's too difficult. After reading it, I ended up being a eunuch.

Come on, author, although it's a niche, it's really good!

No wonder this book has such poor results. The first few chapters are too discouraging, with too many typos, and many of them cannot be guessed at all. Whether the author wants to become a professional writer or realize his dream, these typos will make you fail.

Literary youth is a disease and must be cured

The part about killing the dragon was really bad. Abandon the pit