Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei's Everyday Life

How long are you going to keep padding this story with Zhao Menghua? I won't even mention the rambling, long-winded writing, but how can you keep writing about such a minor character from the beginning until now?

The first three chapters were enough to make me want to quit; they were incredibly verbose, especially the first chapter. Everyone knows Zhao's attitude and thoughts towards Lu, yet he managed to write hundreds of words on it. I heard that it was making me anxious.

Of all the dragon fanfictions I've read, this one is the only one that gives those two vampires a secure job.

Writing so much about a campus and its insane heat, while exuding an aura of dominating an era, is absolutely hilarious.

Book Title: Everyday Life Main title: Living in seclusion Actual content: Playing palace intrigue in the classroom

I've been writing this far and it's become so verbose. Does Zhao Menghua really have that much power? Anyone who didn't know better would think he ruled Shilan; he's everywhere. Where's your mental fortitude? Is it so hard to cause him some kind of accident? You're the most pathetic character in the entire "Return" series. Don't you understand the "three strikes and you're out" principle?

Just so you know, if you're a fan of the original Dragon Raja novel and looking for Kassel showing off and dragon slaying, you can leave now. If you're looking for a slice-of-life romance novel, that's fine too. This is suitable for beginners, but there aren't any beginners who read Dragon Raja fanfiction.

I have no problem with the author not following the original story's plot, but you're supposed to be a campus romance, so why does it feel like a gangster movie? 🤔 I hope the author focuses on the romance and doesn't deliberately include those show-off and face-slapping scenes.

The book explains that Lu Mingfei is handsome, and Chen Wenwen personally invited him to join the club. Chen Wenwen is attracted to Lu Mingfei's looks and feels that he is a threat to her; they are rivals in love, so she wants to undermine Lu Mingfei. Based on my own experience in high school, Zhao Menghua didn't see Lu Mingfei as a threat at all.

This is truly a case of false advertising. Some things could have been done earlier; they should have been dealt with starting with the uncle and aunt. Once the rhythm is disrupted, it won't last. There's no need to watch.