Swallowed Star: The Genius Battle Begins

The writing is alright, and the style is decent, but for me personally, it's a bit hard to read. The biggest flaw, in my opinion, is only one: the protagonist's character design is problematic. You step over the corpses of countless simulated humans, transform yourself into a so-called genius, and then step onto the stage of the universe.

Swallowing the Stars: Starting with the Battle Blade Swallowing the Stars: Starting with the Battle of Geniuses Not only are the names similar, but the sense of frustration from sticking to one thing throughout also feels somewhat inherited.

The company's setup is ridiculous. Luo Feng only managed to enslave nine people with the Marquis-level secret technique. How could he possibly give it to a planetary-level person at random? Moreover, what gives them the audacity to steal the spotlight from the Giant Axe Duel Arena? And what benefits do they gain from doing so? It would be better to just turn it into a training base, producing a thousand-win duelists to earn rewards.

It's almost impossible for a stellar-level being to obtain the Soul Enslavement Technique. If it were auctioned, the price would be in Primal Chaos Units, which is far beyond the reach of a working-class protagonist like myself.

I've seen many people point out the problems with gene-level gene-altering agents, so why are they stubbornly refusing to change them? Changing the settings could easily fix the flaws; it's not like they're planning anything significant.

It's pointless. The author spends a lot of time describing things that can be quickly skipped. I don't know what the author was thinking. Is the author having writer's block and padding the story, or is the author unable to control the level of detail?

Finished reading it, it's addictive. I subscribed to show my support for the author, not because the book is good. Goodbye.

How can this be another author who thinks they can elevate their genetic level with drugs? Impossible, what were they thinking?

Up to the point of exiting the primordial universe, the plot was exciting, the characters' actions were reasonable, and some parts conveyed profound truths and personal emotions, making it excellent. After possessing a new body, the quality of the body dropped drastically, and the clones' abilities resembled those of anime characters, with cultivation advancements far too rapid.

The simulated human portion is considered top-quality food, while the real human portion is only barely edible dry rations.