One Piece Achievement System

A forbidden great magician, maybe his body is far inferior to that of a sword master, but his physical strength is not as good as that of 14-year-old Nami?

Do you really think this pig's foot is stupid? First of all, the wind element is synonymous with agility, so it won't bless you? Why can't we fly until 50 o'clock? Wind borrows the power of fire, and fire borrows the power of wind. Why do you have to have 3 wind runes to reach the second level? Can't you have one wind rune and two fire runes? Moreover, the first-level magic comes with a wind blade, but what about the lightness of the wind? A magician who doesn't even study the basics of magic is nothing. Moreover, elemental magic is simply about mobilizing magical elements through mental power. It's ridiculous to tell Nami that she doesn't have magic blood. Don't you know that the body is the foundation of God? Still separated from the body, almost like a lich 😅

The writing style is still novice, and the logic is also seriously damaged. This book is like a rushed work, not at all like one written by an old writer 😒

If you want to ask who is the craziest in the East China Sea, I am the Thief King of Sige. I can fuck the Four Emperors with a wine bottle in my hand, and step on the future Pirate King with my feet. If it weren't for the King of the Near Sea, I would have finished playing One Piece in the fourth level.

No matter how strong your spirit is, what's the use if your body can't keep up? Just like a professional player, the retirement of a professional player is because the body can't keep up with the conscious reaction. In the world of pirates, you have all kinds of strange fruit abilities. Let's not talk about anything else. Can you block Kizaru's kick if your physical reaction can't keep up? Even if you have a magic shield, can the magic shield offset all the force? Aren't you afraid of being shocked to death by the power? After all, unlike the game, the mage shield is immune to damage unless it is broken. Even if it can offset the kinetic energy, what about pure energy attacks at high and low temperatures? Also, most of the battles among pirates are melee combat, even the three generals of the nature type are inevitable. How can a squishy guy just want to fly a kite? In the early stage, it was okay to bully the minions, but what to do in the new world? Let's not talk about fighting with people. As for the weird weather, don't worry about illness before the fight begins. Even if you can survive it, how far do you think Kaido can knock you away with one punch? Is it possible for two capable people to play the protagonist like badminton?

Just started reading this book. I see that the main character has been suffering from mental illness. I just want to say one thing now. My spiritual power has become a god. Why was he killed by a mortal?

Let's break up. Why can you still share it? So what do you need the system for? Give it away!

The master who adds points like this has no soul.

As a newcomer, writing a pirate novel for the first time, I feel a little out of my depth.

After reading 100 chapters, it seems that a lot has been said, but it seems that nothing has been said. It is all about settings. I can't stand it anymore. The character of the protagonist can't be established. It keeps talking about achievements and studying magic runes. After that, the magic settings are not explained too clearly. In short, it is always too many chapters. I am curious. Didn't the author read the book after he finished it? I can't say whether it is good or not until the 100th chapter. It may be the content and settings that must be written, but it gives me a feeling that it is boring.

I saw more than 40 pictures and couldn't stand it any longer. Please seriously give some suggestions to the author. Reading the fanfic is just to see a different original story. The author writes it as if he wrote it for his own entertainment The writing of the system failed. It is said to be an achievement system, but there is no sense of achievement at all. It is just an excuse for plug-ins. Magic is very strong, but it should not only be strong in combat. Nowadays, it is difficult to attract readers by simply writing about magic with the attributes of earth, fire, geomantic omen, and water. The format is too small. You can even change the words, necromantic system, evocation system, such high-looking words. The writing and ink focus too much on magic. I really don't know but think it is a magic system. Half of a chapter of the novel is about practicing magic, and with this writing style, am I reading an ancient online article? To sum up: One Piece has such a big layout and is written in such a petty style, and the writing style of describing magic is like a primary school student's fantasy of magic My feeling after reading the forty-six chapters is that there is no clear story line. It feels like just one step at a time, no foreshadowing, no background story, and the protagonist's training all the way I suggest the author to open up his imagination, read One Piece comics a few more times, supplement the settings, and improve his writing skills. The above is my feeling after reading Chapter 46. About ten chapters were skipped in the middle. If there is anything wrong, please correct me.

Book review. Task. Go to bed and sleep as if you are as energetic as you want. Just open up and think about those things. You can't participate in those things you want to see. Losing weight doesn't bother you. What do you want to talk about about your past after get off work?

It's embarrassing. I always read novels without reading the author. When I opened it a few days ago, I discovered that I had finished four books by Ye Da😥

Daughter Island is in the windless zone in the first half. Luffy has not penetrated the red continent. The strength of Daughter Island is only in the first half.

So well written! Not enough, so I had to re-read the talent system in the past few days.

You all say this, so why don't I watch it? I hesitated for a long time.

What is this? Old book friends, let me tell you.

Post a book review. Mission mission. Class time is about the same, scientists, everyone, New Year, Miss World

There is a very strange problem with this book. There is a system but attribute points cannot be seen? Has it always been possible? Almost?

Xiaofeng himself has an achievement notebook, and he writes down interesting achievements when he thinks of them. However, the number left after screening is still too small, so he opened an achievement collection building so that everyone who has some interesting achievements can share them with Xiaofeng. In terms of format, it is best to write it as follows, which is easiest to understand. Achievement: Dangerous (seriously injured in battle) Achievement: Destiny's Child (Enter a near-death state in battle and finally survived) Achievements: Mildly famous (killing a pirate with a bounty of more than 10 million Baileys for the first time) Achievements: First showing off (killing a pirate with a bounty of more than 30 million Baileys for the first time) Achievement: Professional seaman (owns a medium-sized brig) Achievement: Noble Captain (obtained a large dhow) Achievement: Set sail! Conquer the sea! (Get a giant ship) Achievement: What a big fish (hunting a sea king) Achievement: Devil Fruit Collector (Collect any ten Devil Fruits) Achievement: Famous Sword Collector (collect ten famous swords of any kind) Achievement: Famous Knife Collector (Collect three supreme sharp knives) Achievement: Historical text collector (obtain ten historical text stone tablets) … It shouldn't be a spoiler to mention the achievement bar prepared by Xiao Feng.

If the protagonist is attacked without any physical exercise, his mind can sense it, how can he avoid it with his body?

Another Ron landed in the pirate area. I was reading a book called "One Piece: Navy Thor" before. The main character is also named Ron. When I was reading this book "Ron", I suddenly had a strange feeling. "Ron's Bizarre Adventure" Successive Rons are legends on the sea, Supreme Mage Ron Former navy admiral and thief Ron.

The protagonist has a brittle body. Does he have defensive magic? How does he feel that he is invincible in the East China Sea and can kill him with one bullet?

The protagonist was doing other things while giving a lecture in Zefa, and then he was named as a sparring partner by Zefa and was beaten. Then he complained about Zefa. He is really mentally retarded. He actually took other people's classes. He just took them well. He also said that magicians don't need to exercise.

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I feel that the conflict with Zefa is completely unnecessary. Wouldn't it be over if you just say that your ability relies on mental power, not physical strength? Zefa always thought it was a devil fruit, so it would be weird not to force you to practice physical strength. Moreover, you inexplicably didn't even give a reason why you didn't even apply. It would be weird if Zefa didn't get angry. This wave is completely the protagonist zz. He thought that if there was a system, everyone would have to revolve around you. The key is that he didn't say anything. Then they know it.

Except for the pig's feet, all the magicians are female. I can't stand the routines from more than ten years ago.

I haven't read many chapters yet, but why are so many people criticizing the protagonist for always adding spirit? The protagonist's profession is a mage without adding spirit. Gandalf is just a joke. It's really serious and he is a demigod. I wanted to laugh when I saw that the protagonist would be beaten up when he met Kizaru Kaido. The protagonist has only defeated pirates with millions of bounties. Compared with the Yonko, he is really awesome. Why don't you tell Naruto, what kind of Rasengan are you practicing? Hurry up and practice the Six Paths mode, otherwise how can you fight Kaguya? I would like to say that for the protagonist's early achievements, what can he do after adding the body. Balanced development has to be done in the late stage. In the early and mid-term, add advantages (spiritual mage). In the middle and late stages, make up for the weaknesses (shield flash, elementalization, spell solidification, blood transplantation). In the late stage, deify and rule, there are no weaknesses. In reality, early equilibrium is the stupidest thing, giving up advantages and making up for weaknesses. For example, before Hongjun became a saint, his physical body was not as good as that of the ancestral witch, so he could not become a saint. Does he have to make his body comparable to that of the ancestral witch before becoming a saint? Isn't this funny?

The protagonist is too self. It is very taboo to write novels about the protagonist's ego. It's normal for others not to understand. If you know nothing about magic in the world of pirates, of course you have to judge based on your own experience. The original intention is also for the protagonist. This is obstacles in knowledge and is human nature. The protagonist can explain to the other party and explain the pros and cons. For example, the shield in the later stage of magic is so hard that it will drive you crazy. You only need to stand and open your shield to kill the entire field. However, the protagonist's performance is "You should understand me even if I don't say it". This can easily make people sick. Just like a certain Infinite fanfic, the protagonist robbed other people's things and was killed by others. He also complained that others were sick. Essence is self-centered. I'm not complaining. Except for the protagonist's self-centeredness, everything else about your book is fine. After reading Chapter 78, I don't know if I can continue reading.

Poison! I can't stand it when I go to Zefa's place. It's really poisonous.