Global Gamification: Divine Realm Online

Ugh! What kind of woman is this, named Jing Ke?! Is she crazy?! A man who's been a slave for five years seeing someone like this, and she thinks she's kind and won't harm him? She deserves to be a slave; she's such a naive and innocent male lead!

The beginning is too wordy. Let's revise it. First, write a scene after obtaining the cheat ability, and then recall the experience of obtaining the cheat ability. It will be much better than you torturing the protagonist at the beginning.

The subject matter of this book immediately appealed to me, and the author's writing style is excellent. At least from what I've read, the protagonist is great in every way, making it a very enjoyable read. That's exactly my kind of book. To be honest, the description of the Snowflake Guild really bothered me.

To be honest, author, you deserve your low ratings. You're a perpetually unfinished author; who would want to subscribe to your books? Why would they subscribe only to find them abandoned? I only had a couple of weeks to read before it was abandoned, and with such a disgusting ending. You shouldn't write anymore; you can't write books that achieve good ratings.

Sorry, I'm canceling. It's not that your writing is bad, it's just that the style is too similar to the book I'm currently writing. I'm afraid you'll influence my writing, so I have to leave.

The premise seems good, but the opening is really painful. Couldn't we have made it a bit more ordinary? Did it have to start with a weak protagonist? There's no guild as promised, the protagonist doesn't even build one, it's not very interesting, and I haven't seen any strategy guides. I guess it'll be several hundred chapters later. 😅

I'll subscribe to the whole thing as long as you don't write a female lead.

It feels a bit padded out; the "trash-to-hero" trope in the beginning is a bit overpowered. The writing style is okay, I'd say first-rate ideas, second-rate thought process, and third-rate writing.

Each level up grants one magic resistance and one Willpower, so you shouldn't play that class. Druids, after all, have always had magic resistance as their primary attribute.

This new book is pretty good! Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง