A Demonic Cultivator in the World of Anime

The first part is okay, he is a decisive and decisive devil, and he has established a good character image. The later part becomes more and more erotic, and it completely changes into a different style. Really.

Note, only say important things three times: no heroine, no harem, no stallion Don't write things like a heroine that are a hindrance. You can write a female supporting role. Writing a heroine also requires a lot of emotional drama. Some of those rookie authors don't even have girlfriends, so they just write emotional drama randomly, and there is no reason to write "a woman's heart is a needle in the sea" Write all kinds of trouble-making or procrastination The plot is tired of the male protagonist, letting the man take all the shopping, saying rubbish like "you don't love me" at every turn, being strict with his wife in his private life, and using the name of love as an excuse to disguise his inner fragility; as long as the female protagonist dies, he will destroy the world at every turn. The world did not mess with the protagonist, nor did the world let the villains kill the female protagonist. The world nurtured the protagonist, noRetributionEven if it is retribution, it will still be destroyed. If some worlds did not give birth to the will of the world, I am afraid that the protagonist will be killed by God as soon as he gets his name There are also those who specialize in writing about the heroine's sister or younger sister. In addition to the desperate environment in apocalyptic novels, they can fight In order to break the inner defenses of women and make the male protagonist more responsible, in other genre novels, those female sisters and younger sisters can all "ride" on the male protagonist's head. I really don't understand why I write like this. I have read too many Japanese comics. Although the plots in Japanese comics exist in reality, this is really disturbing in reality. I'm disgusted. After all, the drawings of the sisters in Japanese comics are very beautiful. Watching anime can be eye-catching, but it's different in real life. Writing like this in real life feels very straightforward and ideal, especially when reading novels without pictures. You have to make up your own mind. It's easy to bring yourself into the protagonist of the story, which will subconsciously be very important. I feel disgusted, and as long as a normal person is doing his own thing, and someone like his sister disturbs him, unless he is a girl-controller, as long as he is a normal person, he will have a temper to some extent I also have an older sister and a younger sister. If I really want to behave as deliberately as in the book, I think I will get angry! Women can write, but not female protagonists. Male protagonists can be scumbag, but they cannot have female protagonists. Male protagonists can have partners, but not to the level of female protagonists.

Only those in the golden elixir stage can have the power of a thousand catties. This cultivation system is really weak.

Others are entering into two-dimensional love, but you are here to purchase goods.

From the beginning, I felt like the author of God Eater had changed. The more I read, the less interesting it became. I already had dozens of them undecided. After looking at the chapter titles, I no longer had the desire to subscribe.

When are you going to advance to the dark bullet?

The demonic monk written by the author is about to become an immortal. Has he never seen a woman? Aren't the female fairies and female devils in the protagonist's previous life in the immortal world beautiful? Have you become a demon and still talk about relationships? With the character of the protagonist, he must have left at least a thousand women in the world of immortality in his previous life. When does the author plan to have the protagonist return to the world of immortality to receive the women left behind in his previous life?

While others are opening a harem, why don't you put in the purchase? (ಡωಡ)

Delete my comment, right? Then I'll post it again. If you don't know how to write about harem, don't touch it. It's outrageous that your writing suddenly turns into a bulldozer. What about the plot development? Just take it all with you, right? If you don't know how to write, don't write. Do you really think people in the second dimension are fools? Or do you think we are fools so easy to fool?

I looked at the comment area and told me my understanding. I guess the author also saw that the protagonist's combat power was low, so he introduced the concept of the Great Desolation in God Killer, setting Luo Hao as a descendant of the Shangqing Sect. At this time, it was clearly stated that the protagonist was from a small place, and his cultivation was not orthodox, so the orthodoxy should be closer to the Great Desolate side, otherwise it would be too difficult to even go to Xingyue. In addition, this book did not set Luo Hao's Woban to be open at 50-50, so he could stop and stop.