There’s Definitely Something Wrong with This Game

Is there anyone out there who can pass by and leave a message for the poor author?

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Many readers have mentioned that the game ability can be brought into reality and can also be used to make money. They are worried that the money will be out of control and you can be invincible by just paying money. So I will give a unified reply. First of all, only the character's skill card, equipment card and character card can be redeemed for real game abilities, and there will not be any invincible skills that can destroy the city. Secondly, after gaming abilities are brought to reality, there will be strict restrictions to ensure that gaming abilities will not cause social problems. At the same time, there is a limit to krypton gold. Although players who deposit money will definitely become stronger, they will not become stronger without limit. Moreover, krypton gold is different from gift packages. There is no guarantee. The more you charge, the more powerful you will be. As for what you can do to print money to earn krypton... I will not answer similar questions. Finally, the krypton gold system itself is a very important setting. It is not something the author came up with to make up the numbers. If you really don't like it, you can choose to leave quietly. If you speak in the comment area, please remain civil and polite and do not ruin the viewing experience of other readers. Otherwise, the author will ban the comment and delete the post without hesitation. Finally, thank you readers for your support~

The amazing plot operation at the beginning makes it endless fun to fight with others. The writing of this article is fluent and interesting. In addition to the intense reasoning and thinking, you can't help but smile at their interludes. The following three keywords are used to describe this book: exciting, interesting, and exciting. Each character has his own unique charm, and the description of the supporting characters is no weaker than that of the protagonist. Not only that, it should be said that the sparks they create when they collide with each other make people look forward to the follow-up direction. During the reading process, it is obvious that the author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the development of the plot, and gives people the best story (script) impression. Not only is it the exploration of the truth in each script world or the tit-for-tat confrontation between people from different camps, but also the reality is as full of curiosity about the secrets behind the game as the title of the book. The only flaw is—— How to return this book! Without! Superior! Shelf! I pressed the button for a long time and couldn't cast my monthly vote. When I looked up at the sky, I felt like I couldn't go out to eat hot pot with my friends because of the epidemic. Waiting for the script to unfold and fatten up until the end of the script, it is refreshing to read it in one breath. The waiting before that is like planting a seed and waiting to see it take root, grow lush, and bear fruit, and then pluck it all and eat it. If you are interested in infinity, games, and reasoning, you really can't miss this article, it's worth waiting for. Support the author, look forward to putting it on the shelves, and the full subscription money is ready! (((O(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))

I just like authors with raised butts

How should I put it? First of all, let me be sure that the writing is not bad. But I still think there are some shortcomings. First, the system of drawing cards with krypton gold to become stronger is not very good. Maybe the author has never seen a big man with krypton gold, who can draw a single card for 10,000 yuan or ten consecutive cards for 100,000 yuan. Let me give you an example. NetEase released a game called After Tomorrow. I played it when it was first released. Each server has a large group, and most of the people are in the group. In this group, the guy who can make money the most earns 5,000 yuan a day (the difference between RMB warriors and non-money players can really be highlighted). Later, after catching up with the progress of the official map release, this guy stopped playing. Of course, it won't be my main topic after that. . . . . . This guy is definitely not the one who can make money the most in the game. The people who can make the most money are the anchors, rich second generation and so on. I really can't imagine that for a game that only costs 100,000 for ten consecutive games (the main and most naughty thing is that this game can bring fantastic abilities to people in reality), for a really rich person, how terrifying an account would be built with ten consecutive games. How crazy would such a fantastic ability make a person? Secondly, the behavior of the officials is a bit hard to understand (maybe the author will add more later, I just saw the official blowing up the door). I didn't understand. Aren't the officials in this novel all talking nonsense when they called the door? To check the water meter, the protagonist tells you that the water meter is outside. It's time to deliver food (I forgot if it was a courier), and the protagonist also told you that the delivery was wrong, and he didn't decide anything. This section is very weird. He is really a person who has nothing to do. The man outside the door first said to check the water meter, and then said to deliver something. Anyone who is not suspicious in his heart can just open the door to people outside casually. In my opinion, this person who bombed the door was just a person (perhaps an official) who had nothing to do and was looking for trouble (Sir, you have such great official authority 🙂). . . . . . In addition, some people say that it is to intimidate, so let us first assume that the protagonist is a positive person. In this case, the act of blowing up the door will not benefit either party at all, and will intensify the conflict between the two parties (you may say, it doesn't matter. But think about it, since you have to send a commissioner to control this group of people, why intensify this conflict)? Another hypothesis is that the protagonist has an antisocial personality. This situation will only exacerbate the protagonist's antisocial mentality. . . Therefore, with the protagonist's cooperation, the protagonist's door is blown up without any explanation. The person in charge is either a spy sent in from another country (specialized in sabotage), or the person in charge is a idiot in a special position who looks at people with his nose. It seemed pretty good at first. Although the author's reasoning is average, this is not a pure mystery novel, so the plot is not bad. But why add these two failures (at least I think they are failures). If the plot can be written more rigorously and better, why not write it better, at least without making big mistakes. Novel does not have to be related to real life, or even has nothing to do with it at all. It cannot be applied according to the laws of our reality. As long as it does not conform to the laws of reality, it will be said that the novel is not well written and has loopholes. This is unreasonable. But the internal plot of the novel must be logically consistent. For example, one hundred thousand yuan for ten consecutive times, how can it be consistent? We have to make the money in the world of the novel valuable (just like we pay two yuan for a bun, but in the novel, two cents are used for a bun). There is still money to recharge, but to whom is the money recharged? Country? Countries around the world? For another example, this fellow who bombed the door, how did he become the person in charge (at least in the door-exploding team, he was the leader), why did he become the person in charge? Is it relying on connections and going through the back door? Or are the people in charge from top to bottom a bunch of reckless idiots who don't take others seriously? In general, I hope the author can read it. What I wrote is not easy to type by hand. Not to criticize, I wish the author could write better. Of course, it may be possible that the author explained the relevant issues later on, and then it will be treated as if I said it in vain. Also, like the author said, it's OK to give opinions, but not to attack others personally.

The author was a little surprised that this book has not been released yet. After reading it in one go, I wanted to vote for two monthly votes but found that I couldn't. 😂😂 The quality of this book is quite good, and so far there are no signs of collapse. The Xiao Jianzhu in Ling Yunzhi really likes me. I look forward to the author putting it on the shelves and will continue to subscribe. It's on the bookshelf, come on, author. 😬😬

By the way, has the krypton gold problem of this game been solved? If not, I won't watch it

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