Master of the Demon Realm

I finally found a way to avoid being poisoned by the garbage coming and going at the starting point. This is also the correct way to use the Qidian app! At the same time, it is also a way to solve the shortage of books and the short and weak author. I have only 46 chapters for so long!

Come on, come on, the boss, the author wants women's clothing in white silk stockings. I'll book tickets with a reward of 10,000 yuan first. If this building exceeds 10,000 yuan, the boss may live broadcast the pure land of paradise in women's clothing.

What should I say when building a reward building~ Hmm~ How to settle the settlement depends on your mood~ Whether cleaning the building counts also depends on your mood~ Hmm~ I'm in a good mood, let's give it a try first~ 23333~

Anyway, the plot at the beginning is okay, and there are some surprises. The language was very strange, but I tolerated it. After that, it became more and more popular, especially promoting girls took up more and more space. It might be better if it was written as a party struggle, but it would be uncomfortable if it was written as Brother Cheng.

Alas, a good book is so unfinished. What a pity. There is obviously still a lot of foreshadowing. The story of the gods has not been finished yet. There are many, many more. What is the reason for the poor results?

I have read about 50 chapters, and I feel that the plot in the novel is too rushed. There are so many plots within an hour of starting the server. You are not giving ordinary players a way to survive! Everyone has a process of adapting, let alone an online game that spans generations. For most players, it takes half a day to stretch their muscles, become familiar with the plot, become familiar with the gameplay, and observe around to satisfy their curiosity, and then there is a huge gap between them and those so-called internal beta players.

It's so good, the audience has too much fun. Who plays a game and follows you just to watch you show off? Nowadays, all online games are written this way, and I can't stand it after reading Chapter 2. Just keep your game plot quiet. Forcibly inserting viewers into it to make up for the word count will only make the writing more difficult.

Blank, brother and sister, is this a tribute to the anime game life?

In the beginning, the 100-plus chapters of the game plot were brilliantly written. However, once the author met a woman, his style of painting suddenly changed. After the samurai became a woman, the interaction between the two was really awkward in my opinion.

Don't write novels, rely on shit