The Great Demon in the Clouds

Everyone, the dead dragon (the old bird flies first) can get a little tired. Everyone, please understand Death Dragon. Death Dragon codes very late every day. It has been updated three times in the past few days. I'm a little tired of updating the dead dragon. I hope you can understand. Thank you (*°∀°). (Dead dragon, don't delete it, be careful I'll kill you) 😆😆😆

I love the beauty and thin makeup the most. There are waves wherever the love river runs out. The clouds, grass and trees shine together, The mid-night clouds are the companion of the autumn clouds. Nobita's authentic work rests on the dangerous mountain, The demon Hu is about to arrive at the Palace of Eternal Life. Understand that earthly things are irrelevant,

As a qualified book club, how can we not have idiom solitaire? Do whatever you want

Come on, recruit two younger brothers for me! ! ! The format is as follows: Name: ★★★ Race: ★★ Background: ★★★ OK, freshmen are opening, buy and leave! ! !

Another book has been lost. 😰😰😰

The author is trying to wipe out the last bit of popularity. I have seen updates every three days, weekly updates, monthly updates and even quarterly updates. Your update once every six months is too much.

It's been 18 days. According to the rules of going to the hospital for examination three days after catching a cold and then being quarantined for 14 days, it seems that the author did not hide away. Silence 🕯️🕯️🕯️

This book is really good. I just read the first dozen or so chapters and it seems to be a good sign. I hope the author can write well and be less aggressive and sign a good contract and then it will be stable. To be honest, the quality of the books about demon cultivators is really poor. Most of them are demons in the front and no different from human beings in the back. It's really not good to read. Now that I see that this book has just been published, I am really afraid that a good book will die prematurely, so I have a few suggestions for the author: 1. Several brothers have already said that it is right not to avoid transvestites, because many people who read demon cultivators want to see the cultivation of immortals from a different perspective, so they do not want transvestites. However, I think it is not a stick to kill the human form. It should be that the human form in the early stage is for the purpose of being in the human world. As a tool for world action, it is almost a trend to change into a human form when you are powerful, but the key point is to have the characteristics of a demon. Can you, a demon, behave like a human all day long? 2. The three views are mainly determined by the author himself. I can only say that the Holy Mother, dark anti-humanity, etc. Are not the way to go (unless you want to take the niche route). Now the novel has three major plot points that persuade people to give up. , Settings, and three views are really worthy of the author's careful consideration. 3 The author is now in the beginning period. I really hope that the author can grasp the golden stage at the beginning so that the subsequent writing will be much easier. At least he will not go into the palace (no offense, this book is a good seedling). The plot at the beginning does not need to be too hasty and unfolds at once. Settings can be taken slowly and thrown away. Settings are not very good. There are many now. People don't want to be "open" because of this. In short, the strength should not be lower than the average level. It is still okay to have a 50-50 openness. Things like golden fingers... Whether it is necessary or not depends on the type of writing the author wants to write. The setting should be the best and reasonable. In short, don't be wrong, and there is always a textual researcher to set the pace. This should be paid attention to. 4 Finally, I hope that the author can write the book according to his own wishes. The book friends provide suggestions in the hope that the work will be improved and the flaws will be corrected, rather than forcing the author to write a book that they are satisfied with. I hope the author can write this book well. To be honest, I haven't written so many comments for a long time... Mainly because this book made me feel a little bit like I used to read about demon cultivators. I still remember that I read a book about demon cultivators 10 years ago, which really broke my three views on cultivating novels at that time. I was really shocked and really enjoyed reading it, but now I think In fact, the writing seems to be average, but at that time it was really good. A book about a yokai protagonist can never get tired of reading. It is very interesting. I have read several good yokai-style novels intermittently. I won't go into details now. I hope the author can create bigger surprises. Come on!

Nowadays, apart from Lan Ke Qi Yuan, this is the only novel about immortality. Although it is a little small, it attracts me as much as it did in the early days of Lan Ke. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will do my little bit to invest first.

Emm suddenly thought that Yun Zhongjun is in his 40s and Yao is 1 or 2 years old, so does this count as an eagle eating a young deer?