The Celestial Serpent of the City

Keep it up, author! Your works, whether it's the Sword Saint or the later Crown, are all very imaginative, but you need to update faster. That's how you build a following; a large following gives you motivation, making it less likely to end poorly, which in turn leads to even more popularity, creating a virtuous cycle. 🎁🎁🎁

How many chapters does Fatty have in reserve for his new book? Don't tell me it's still one chapter a day written on the fly... I strongly suspect that because you never have any drafts in reserve and always write on the fly, the story falls apart towards the end... This time, learn from your mistakes, save some drafts, and give yourself some time to polish it.

3 Major flaws in this book 1. He wrote about a useless wife who dragged down the pace and held the team back. 2. He keeps writing about Guo Jia's story, but he doesn't handle the balance well. 3. After writing about cultivation techniques for so long, he still couldn't beat someone who practices martial arts. He was like a grandson, doing whatever he was told.

We've already invested and are making follow-on investments, Fatty, don't let your loyal readers down!

The scope is too narrow. At first, I thought it was a fantasy novel about seeking enlightenment, but it turned into a poorly written, third-rate romance drama. The worst part is that it keeps going on and on. Later, it introduced interstellar travel and talked about all sorts of advanced technology, making me think it was some advanced interstellar civilization.

Every book you write is poisoned by your female lead, and the worst part is that you still have to write about female leads in every single one of them, even though you don't write the romance well.

The romance plot is poorly written; it feels forced and contrived, like it was just there to fill in the gaps in the story, making it irritating to watch.

It's well-written, but it's completely off-topic. A snake is a snake, and it's supposed to transform into a dragon? Why not just change the title to "Urban Dragon"? It's so embarrassing to read, I tried to pick it up several times but couldn't!

Could you kill off the female lead? It would make the story more interesting.

I'm making this promise: if this book reaches 200 pages, I'll eat my phone! The author is welcome to prove me wrong, but I doubt they'll give me the chance.