The Great Detective of Japanese Entertainment

Coming from Tokyo Police, I am really disappointed😔. It is far worse than Tokyo. After reading Chapter 20, I really can't hold on. I feel that there are three major poisonous points: The first point is that Pig's Foot has no opinion of its own. It's understandable that he just traveled through the past and has no goals. Second point, Pig's Foot's sister Liangzi made choices for the protagonist twice. The first time was to agree to join the wild ball club for Pig's Foot and ensure that Pig's Foot could report tomorrow. The second time was to sign up for the Star Circle Agency for the protagonist without Pig's Foot knowing about it. Is the protagonist physically or mentally younger than his sister? Don't understand. Third point, the first class of the Star Circle Office requires that the horse be completed within a week, and the pig's trotters have no dance foundation at all. In addition, the protagonist is too old, so it is reasonable for the protagonist to want to quit the office. Then the police came, and the sister did not agree. Just because the sister wanted to enter the office through the pig's feet, and then used the protagonist's undressed Echizen borrowed money from his sister to buy pornographic books and the like to threaten Pig's Foot, and then Pig's Foot refused to retreat. In order to let Pig's Foot complete the task, Echizen's sister spread Pig's Foot's legs apart and tied them up again. As a result, Pig's Foot didn't sleep all night. The next day, the protagonist couldn't hold on any longer and asked for leave. The protagonist's sister also asked for leave, euphemistically saying that she was helping the protagonist complete the task. I gave up after seeing this. There were really too many poisonous points. I was already poisoned to death. I won't go into detail about the routines that were popular 5 years ago. My biggest feeling about this book is that it was difficult for the author. In 20 chapters, all these poisonous points were gathered and slipped away.

There are too many and too complicated lines, the set moves too fast, and the story line is very fragmented. I suggest that some parts should be reduced and the plot should be accelerated. After thirty pictures, it is still dull and without any ups and downs. I also suggest changing the part about my sister. It's weird for a person in his decades to be pushed around by a little girl. There are many people who hate my sister when they write about it like this.

Should the author consider writing a Conan fanfic for his next book? I see that the proportion of light novels in the Qidian rankings has been increasing recently, and several representatives of Conan fanfics have done well. The author is good at writing mystery articles, and his writing style and understanding of the island country are not bad. If he can have a writing idea that is different from other fan fictions and create an attractive protagonist image, I think the author's performance will not be bad. (To be honest, among the online articles I have read, the author's reasoning level and understanding of the island country's culture are definitely among the best)

I think the author is a bit self-satisfied. Many people came to read your Tokyo Police, and your title is about celebrity detectives. If you write about being a star and being a detective, that's okay. As a result, you also added baseball, and the latest update simply left baseball alone. I came to read your novel to read the detective story.

Piggy's sister is so annoying. She always likes to help others make decisions based on her own preferences. To put it bluntly, she is self-centered and has no respect for others. I can't stand it anymore.

I seem to have seen the end of this book. The clues are confusing, the characters are not likeable, and the characters are not likeable. Although I like the Japanese drama atmosphere created by the author, but...

Japanese entertainment detectives, the focus is on detectives, right? Even if the protagonist cannot directly participate in the case because he is a high school student, he still has to show active participation, right? As a result, I was being rubbed around by my sister in a daze, working as a trainee, and playing baseball. My character felt like a time-traveled elementary school student, and I didn't feel like an adult at all. Since a baseball plot is forced to be added between detective work and entertainment, as a time-traveler with a higher level than his school classmates and a mature mind, he must always reflect the idea of ​​dominance and leadership. However, the result is still confusing. Some people provoke and want to lick the opponent because of his good pitcher. It is too discouraging. And your story lines should complement each other and promote each other. Now it feels like they are trying to undermine each other. I stopped talking about solving the case halfway and went to play baseball or become a trainee. Reading feels very bad.

For a zero-score essay, no matter how much you write, it will still be off topic. Otherwise, change the title of the book.

The title is Detective, but the writing feels messy and the author wants to express too many things. The supporting characters as written are not very likable. The protagonist written by the author is also very cowardly. It doesn't look like he has traveled through time at all, but like a 10-year-old kid who has traveled through time and became a high school student. Such a weak, cowardly and opinionated protagonist. How could he possibly solve a case when just a few words from someone would affect his decision-making? Do all trainees need to dance like a horse? Not really, I haven't been dancing since elementary school. To be honest, people who read books with this name usually either like Japanese entertainment or detective novels. You have more than 20 chapters of both of them, and you can't feel the difference between them. I can't stand it now, and I don't know what it will be like in the future.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​? Who would have known that after subscribing to dozens of chapters, you would be writing about this, and you would also ask yourself if readers would like to see you write about baseball! It's completely baffling. Maybe entertainment in Japan is inseparable from baseball. The problem is that your readers are all Chinese, and it is a super niche subject. It is still realistic rather than a comic adaptation, which is even more unpalatable.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     but the major chapter you wrote is about high school, which means that you will at least have 2 parts to go to college and entering the society. However, there are not many outstanding novels of this type in Qidian. The main reason is that the good and bad novels in the past are almost ruined, and it is difficult to give people the motivation to follow up. It is recommended to return to the previous writing method, just detective and a little entertainment.