The Great Detective of Japanese Entertainment

Having come from Tokyo Police Affairs, I'm honestly very disappointed 😔. It's far worse than Tokyo Police Affairs. I couldn't keep going past chapter 20; I feel there are three major flaws: Firstly, it's understandable that the protagonist lacks his own opinions and has no goals after just transmigrating. Secondly, the protagonist's older sister, Ryoko, made choices for him twice.

There are too many plot lines, the scenes move too fast, and the storylines are fragmented. I suggest reducing certain parts and speeding up the pacing. It's already past thirty pages and it's still bland and lacks any dramatic tension. Also, the older sister's storyline needs revision; it's strange to see someone in their forties being pushed around by a little girl. This kind of writing will likely make many viewers dislike the older sister.

Should the author consider writing a Conan fanfiction for their next book? I've noticed that light novels are making up a larger proportion of the rankings on Qidian recently, and several Conan fanfictions are performing quite well. The author excels at writing mystery novels, and their writing style and understanding of Japanese culture are also quite good.

I think the author is getting a bit self-indulgent. Many people came to read your Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department story, especially since the title is something like "Celebrity Detective." If you wrote a story with both being a celebrity and a detective, that would be fine. But you added baseball, and lately the updates have practically only focused on baseball. I came to your novel for a detective story.

The protagonist's sister is so annoying! She always makes decisions for others based on her own preferences. To put it bluntly, she's self-centered and has no respect for others at all. I can't stand it!

I can already foresee the fate of this book: the plot is tangled, it's disjointed, the characters are unlikable, and although I enjoy the Japanese drama atmosphere the author creates, but...

"Detective Conan" is supposed to be about detective work, right? Even if the protagonist can't directly participate in the case because he's a high school student, shouldn't he at least show some active involvement? Instead, he's inexplicably being manipulated by his older sister, becoming a trainee and playing baseball.

A zero-score essay, no matter how much you write, will always be off-topic. Maybe you should change the book title.

The title is "Detective," but it feels disorganized; the author tries to express too much. The supporting characters are generally unlikable. The protagonist is also incredibly cowardly, more like a 10-year-old who transmigrates into a high school student than a transmigrated character. How can such a weak, indecisive protagonist possibly solve cases? He's easily swayed by criticism.

The earlier public chapters were actually quite good; I've been following your books since your last novel. But once I switched to VIP, you started going completely off the rails, writing about baseball with abandon. Please, I came here to read your crime-solving stories, plus a little bit of entertainment.