This Japanese Tale Isn't So Cold

After reading Chapter 86, I don't plan to read any more. I looked at the comments posted by other readers in the book review section, and found that some parts are quite similar to mine. This book really makes me feel inexplicably irritated while reading it, and I just want to fast forward to watch the plot progress. I thought about it and the problem may be the lack of details or the lack of main idea. The lack of details includes the lack of details of daily life and the flat labeling of characters. Although I know that the background of this book is Japan, I could not feel the customs of Japan at all during the reading process. The Japan described by the author is more like a prefecture-level city in inland China. Even if the characters use Japanese yen and take the Shinkansen, it still feels like they are using RMB and taking the high-speed train. The characterization gave me the feeling that the author first listed a number of attributes in a notebook, then selected a few of them and put them together, and a new supporting actress was born. We need a "sister with thick lines", a good sister is here, we need a "capable senior", a good senior is here, we need a "sick and weak classmate", and a good classmate is here. After tearing off these universal labels, does any of the many female partners have a real personality? I didn't see it. Even the female doctor villain who was solved in the 80th chapter, I didn't feel anything about it. She was just a stereotyped female madman. Maybe this is the second dimension. As for the lack of theme, I think this is another source of irritability for me. The plots in the book do not highlight the characteristics of the characters, nor introduce more background settings. They just constantly elevate the protagonist's personality, making readers doubt the value of these plots. When I read that the protagonist felt that he was satisfied reading alone, I thought he would lower his sense of existence and solve problems in an unobtrusive way. It seems that he is a wise general. Then he went to fight in a group. Well, this is also a way to solve trouble. It seems that the protagonist is a reckless man. Then the protagonist begins to reason and investigate. Well, maybe the author wants to design a protagonist who is both wise and courageous. After so much investigation and reasoning, he will definitely be able to solve the supernatural incident without any blood in the end. Then the protagonist violently beats the resentful spirit, and the incident is resolved. Okay, I get it. If you advance, you can ride a thousand horses, but if you retreat, you can strategize. The author just wanted to write such an invincible protagonist. Moreover, this protagonist is not only invincible in strength, but also invincible in mentality. There is no need to grow at all, so it is very easy to write. The question is, does a protagonist who does not need to grow have descriptive value? Is there any conflict at all in a story with such a protagonist? Is there any contradiction at all? When reading such a story, you can't feel the advancement of the plot, nor the crisis and confrontation, nor even the family affection and friendship. You just watch a protagonist who is lonely and unparalleled... That's why you feel irritated, because you actually already know that the daily plots of investigation and reasoning you read will not produce value in the end. Anyway, I gave up the book. I seem to be sorry that I didn't see the paid chapter. Consider this carefully written review a reward.

That... Mei Dou's new book is 404, that's it, don't ask, I'm sorry, everyone

Off topic: First of all, I would like to thank {"NickName":"Mo Youchenshuang","UserId":336046840} (Hanpi Xiangnan in the group) and {"NickName":"Ling Hanba","UserId":228906174} (lmz Future in the group) for giving me some inspiration, so I decided to write about it. Then thank you {"NickName":"Mo Youchenshuang","UserId":336046840} (Kirishima Gonan) {"NickName":"Linghanba","UserId":228906174} (Kamidai Mirai) for your friendly appearance. ——，                               ， When she first debuted, she was hailed as a genius girl appointed by Master Beichuan, a top-notch exorcist. She was also Master Beichuan's biological sister. With her good looks, she attracted countless fans as soon as she debuted. After time, she also proved to people that she can do it with her superb talent and learning ability, not because of her appearance, not because he is Beichuanji's biological sister, but because of her talent and talent. In front of others, she is a talented painter and a beautiful goddess... But behind others. "Ah~ Brother Si~ I'm hungry, help me order a takeaway." After a long while, there was no reply, and a person's voice echoed in the huge house. (Small details, please don't disturb me) "Ah~ I forgot, Brother Si and his future sister-in-law traveled around the world, and now I don't know which country they are in... No, even if Brother Si is here, I don't think he would tolerate my behavior like this... Fortunately, he is not here, forget it~ Just order one by yourself." I ordered a takeout casually, and threw the leftover takeout box on the table from yesterday to the ground. I sat quietly on the table waiting for the takeout to arrive. Waiting quietly alone, I couldn't help but think of Brother Si's kindness. Brother Si is very gentle, but he will not spoil her. Whenever he has any trauma, he is always more anxious than anyone else... Except for sometimes scaring her with a cane or even beating her, apart from this, Brother Si is really a perfect man. As I think about it, my thoughts let go. "I really want to find a man who is as good as Tera-ge, but one who won't scare me with a cane..." Eri has even begun to think about the sweet time with him... In fact, because of Eri's appearance, she has many suitors, but because she has a brother like Tera, her requirements are very high, and no suitor can catch her eye, so she is still single until now. The doorbell interrupted her thoughts... She took the takeout, ignored the takeaway boy's nymphomaniacal gaze, closed the door, and found a boyfriend who was just like Brother Si, even if he was a little bit different. A few months later... Looking at the shy boy in front of her, Eri became slightly interested. In the past few weeks, Eri told Brother Tera and Mirai Kamiya that she wanted to find a boyfriend. Mirai Kamiya said that he must help Eri find a blind date that meets his standards. Kitagawa Temple's original words were: "With your salty looks, I don't think anyone will want you." In the end, Mirai Kamiya really gave her two pieces of information, and the one in front of her was the first candidate. Eri looked at the handsome boy in front of her with interest. She wanted this boy to introduce him first, but he kept blushing and couldn't speak, so she had to introduce herself first. "Hello, my name is Kitagawa Eri, I am a painter, I like to draw..." After Eri finished introducing herself, the boy in front of her raised her head, "I... I... My name is Kirishima Gonan, I am a writer by profession, and I like... Reading comics." Exactly the same as the appearance, the guy in front of me who calls himself Kirishima Gonan is a bit girly even in his introduction. After a period of in-depth understanding and many meetings, Eri felt that this boy was not suitable for her, so she sent Kirishima Gonan a good guy card and became ordinary friends. A few weeks later, the second candidate introduced by the future sister-in-law also met with Eri. Completely different from Kirishima Gonan, the boy in front of him was the first to introduce himself. "My name is Kamishiro Mirai, a professional cartoonist, and I like reading comics..." After the boy Erimi finished his introduction, he also started his own introduction. After many meetings, Eri had a very good impression of this boy, and they quickly established a relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend. Mirai Jindai is a cartoonist, and Eri is a painter. The two often communicate together about their daily work. The relationship has been established for a long time, and Mirai Kamishiro also knows how bad Eri's behavior habits are, but he has always been used to Eri. Eri is also very satisfied with this boyfriend, and even once made her think that he was Brother Temple. During this period, she also discovered an interesting thing. Her first blind date, Kirishima Konan, and Mirai Kamishiro were very good friends. They also cooperated with each other at work. Konan wrote stories and Mirai drew comics. At first, Konan was angry about this matter and refused to help Mirai write stories. Until... He also met his true love-Momona Yoko. After some time, Brother Temple informed Eri that he and her sister-in-law were coming back and asked her to pick them up at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning. Because she has a boyfriend, Eri's room is finally clean, and she finally calms down after being distracted all day long. Beichuan Temple was also shocked when he knew this change, but he still accepted the reality that had become a fact, and promised her not to beat her with a cane or scare her in the future. At 8 o'clock the next day, Eri got up unusually early and took Jindai Mirai to the airport, accompanied by a pair of Kirishima Konan and Momona Yoko. Nine o'clock... Three faces that Eri was very familiar with got off the plane. "Brother Si, welcome home." Tears burst into my eyes... (Follow-up content will be posted in the comment area)

I have some suggestions. Don't let the system speak. Isn't it better to just let it be a cold dead thing? It's not that you can't do it if you have wisdom, but you just feel uncomfortable. A slight change will make you feel comfortable. (It's so embarrassing to have levels like elementary and advanced. It would be more interesting if you give stars⭐️ to the game system) I'm not asking the author to change it. I'm not that shameless. I'm just putting forward my own reading experience. I hope I can learn from it. Don't criticize me😄

I also started to feel arrogant, and I actually dared to reward the author. (Although it's only five yuan ( •̀∀•́ ))

The early morning sunlight shines through the curtains on the two figures, one large and one small, hugging each other on the bed. In the kitchen, a cold-looking man wearing an apron was holding a spatula to scoop up the fried eggs in the pan and put them on the dinner plate. "Bang... Bang..." With the sound of "beep——", Beichuanji put the freshly baked toast, placed the cut small persimmons on the plate, and walked to the dining table with the plate and put it away. Turn off the natural gas stove, pour the hot milk boiled in the pot into three glasses, and place them next to the dinner plate. After doing this, Beichuanji hung the apron he took off on the wall, opened the door and walked into the bedroom. Breathing quietly, Kitagawa Temple looked gently at the mother and daughter sleeping on the bed, walked over gently, leaned down, and stared at Kitagawa Mirai. Five seconds passed... Ten seconds passed... There was only a slight sound of breathing in the bedroom. Twenty seconds... Thirty seconds... Suddenly, the rhythmic breathing began to become disordered. Kitagawa Mirai opened his eyes angrily, his big watery eyes revealing dissatisfaction. "Why didn't I wake you up?" Beichuan Temple asked expressionlessly. Beichuan Mirai nodded grandly. "Since you're awake, it's up to you to decide whether to get up or not." Mirai Kitagawa pouted and was about to speak: "Huh?!!" Kitagawa Temple straightened up: "Okay, it's time to get up? The milk will be cold after a while." Mirai Kitagawa touched his lips and giggled. After a while, he gently pushed the little man next to him, and Kitagawa Mirai leaned down and kissed him on the face: "Xiangli, it's time to get up, we have to go to school today." Put the prepared omelet, rapeseed, and steak into the lunch box one by one, put the rice in it, and cover it. Kitagawa Temple looked up at the fragrant pears that were almost finished at the table: "Pear, vegetables." "Ugh... I know dad." Kitagawa Fragrant Pear put the small persimmon into his mouth with a sad face. Kitagawa Temple drove Kitagawa Kaori to school and handed it to Takihara Nanako: "I'll leave the pear to you." "Don't worry, leave it to me, Brother Temple." Kitagawa Kaori raised her excited red little head Face: "Aunt Nanako!" Takihara Nanako took Kitagawa Kaori's little hand and walked to the classroom: "I have to call the teacher." "Tera-kun, are you going to daddy today?" Kitagawa Mirai blinked his big eyes and tilted his head and asked. Kitagawa Temple nodded, then shook his head: "Go to the airport to pick up Eri first, and then go to Kamiya's house." After arriving at the parking lot of the airport, the phone rang after a while. Kitagawa Mirai picked up the phone and looked at "Eri" on it and chuckled. "Hello? Brother Temple!" "It's me..." "Ah, future sister-in-law. Where is Brother Temple?" "Next door." "Oh..." The voice on the other end of the phone was a bit noisy, "I'm almost at the exit, where are you?" Kitagawa Temple answered the phone: "It's in the parking lot, come over by yourself." After a while, Kitagawa Eri rushed over with her suitcase. Beichuan Temple looked down at the suitcase that had fallen on the ground, and then looked at his sister who was holding him in his arms. He raised his hand and was stunned. "You are so old, you don't know how to be ladylike." "Hey, hey, hey..." After receiving Kitagawa Eri, Kitagawa Mirai and Kitagawa Eri sat in the back row, chatting about the interesting things Kitagawa Eri encountered abroad. Beichuan Temple listened quietly, occasionally interjecting a question. The chatting time passed quickly, and in a blink of an eye, we arrived at Kamiya's house, and Kitagawaji honked the horn. Chihiro Kamiya pulled Haru Kamiya and ran out. Mirai Kitagawa opened the car door and complained: "Mom, how come you are so grown up and still act like a child." Then Chihiro Kamiya flicked her in the head. Kamiyaji got into the passenger seat, closed the door and fastened his seat belt, looked at Kitagawaji, and nodded. Beichuan Temple also nodded. Kamiyaji leaned on the back of his chair and looked forward. Beichuanji started the car. "You are here." Kitagawa Rin opened the door and smiled at Kamiya Chihiro. On the shoe cabinet, a little puppet is waving with its round little hands, and a light golden word bubble is hung on its head, which is dotted with the word "Welcome". "Poi-chan!" Kamiya Chihiro picked up Nishikujo Poi-chan and rubbed her face against her. Poi-po struggled and jumped into Kitagawa Mirai's arms. "Well..." Chihiro Kamiya looked unhappy, like a child who had his favorite toy taken away. "Ahem," Kamiyaji coughed, "Chihiro, change your shoes quickly and help, there isn't much time." "Ji——!" Kamiyaji ignored her. At two o'clock in the afternoon, the sun began to shift westward. Eri Kitagawa stretched and said, "Finally the decoration is finished." Eri Kitagawa frowned when he saw it and said nothing. Eri Kitagawa shuddered. Kitagawa Rin looked at the clock on the wall: "Tera, it's almost time to pick up Kori." "Okay, Mom." "Aunt Nanako, are you going to my grandma's house today too?" Kitagawa Kori raised her little face and asked Takihara Nanako, who was standing beside her waiting for her father. Takihara Nanako touched Xiangli's little head: "I told you to call the teacher... Not only aunties are going, but many aunties are going today." Kitagawa Xiangli blinked her eyes, not expecting who Aunt Nanako was talking about. In Beichuanji's car, Xiangli asked enthusiastically: "Dad, Aunt Nanako just said that many aunts are coming today, why?" Beichuanji glanced at the person in the rearview mirror who was not Takihara Nanako had the nerve to secretly stick out her tongue: "Because today is a special day." Kitagawa Xiangli asked doubtfully: "What is a special day?" "You will know when you get home." Kitagawa Temple gave up. The sound of the car stalling came into the room, and Xiangli's crisp and cheerful laughter made everyone in the room ready. "Pop--" "Pap-pap--" "Pap--" The sound similar to firecrackers startled Xiangli, and the little guy hugged his father's neck tightly. Colored films and colored satin fell one after another, and Kitagawa Xiangli could clearly see the people in the room. "Grandma Rin, Grandma Chihiro, Grandpa, Aunt Eri, Aunt Pity, Aunt Hitomi, Aunt Ai, Aunt Saki, Aunt Mio, and Aunt Salted Egg Blossom..." Kitagawa Kaori greeted them one by one with a happy smile, and the name Nakajima Mihana made Nakajima Mihana look embarrassed. People in the room laughed. Beichuanji carried Xiangli to the decorated living room. Colorful ribbons were hung on the ceiling. TVs and sofas were placed against the wall. There were three or four tables put together in the middle of the living room, and there were all kinds of tempting delicacies. The big cake in the middle attracted all the attention of Xiangli: "It's so beautiful~" Eri Kitagawa smiled and urged to light the candles, and then turned off the lights. Nishikujo pitifully put the birthday crown she had cut out bit by bit on Xiangli's head, with the words "Make a wish quickly" on her head. Kitagawa Xiangli obediently closed her eyes: "I hope my dearest family members will be happy and joyful every day." Then he blew out all the candles with a "huh-" breath. "Happy birthday! Xiangli~" {"NickName":"Emperor Abandoned Heavenly Way","UserId":314571720}

The shackles entered the palace and dressed in women's clothing. This building is the best.

After reading the latest chapter, let me talk about my opinions. At present, I personally think that this is a light-hearted supernatural mystery adventure novel that uses the setting of time-traveling system flow. It is said to be a light-hearted supernatural mystery adventure novel because its background is a world where supernatural beings really exist, and the protagonist participates in it again and again. Among the various supernatural events, it should clearly depict a supernatural world full of dark tones, but it is decorated with the semi-invincible protagonist's crisp and neat handling of events (adventures), the cold-faced and warm-hearted character, and the interaction between the protagonist and the people he meets along the way. It is like an ongoing puzzle-solving horror game, in which there are many links to collect information and deduce events. However, some of the puzzle-solving mini-games are forced to pass by our semi-invincible protagonist through violent means (such as the protagonist's various violent door openings, which are manually funny). However, the description of the system functions in the article currently only has tasks, skills and blue bars (dead energy). It is really a stand-alone game! Talking about the character design, my favorite is our male pig's feet. The male pig is scripted as a doctor, which makes his calm behavior when seeing various corpses seem reasonable (a quick comment, can a doctor really be as good as the male protagonist?), Ahem, the male protagonist has inherited the fine tradition of time travel protagonists, and got the golden finger - the system. From then on, he can act as a ghost in the front, and flirt with girls and show mercy. He is really a man chosen by God. Ahem, I am sorry that I suddenly fell into the trap, and the above mentioned does not count. In fact, what I really like is the protagonist's pragmatism that sees through the world and is pragmatic. He did not deliberately cater to other people's opinions, but just focused on doing what he should do and what he could do, which made him appear too cold and straight to others. When faced with supernatural beings, he did not choose to kill them all for the sake of power. He would help good spirits whenever he could, such as pity. For evil spirits, his idea was to let the other party escape with the least pain possible, such as his poor mother. In the face of human beings, he will not pretend to be a saint, but has his own bottom line and standards. He will not be timid and swallow his words, nor will he bully others and go too far. Although the series of actions of the protagonist in the article always give people a slight feeling of pretentiousness, this is not the kind of deliberate behavior in other novels that forcefully pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. Rather, it is due to the personality and personal behavioral principles, giving people a very natural and freehand feeling. When the protagonist and the ghost confront each other, it is also very refreshing. In addition to the protagonist, the heroine Mirai is also a character that I like very much. She always reminds me of Chitanda Airi (⑉°з°)-♡ (my wife, I'm not convinced). Finally, I support a wave of authors. In fact, I was a little confused when I saw the title of the book at first, but after reading the content, I fell in love with this work. Although we are too poor to give away rewards every now and then, we will definitely save money and actively pursue books. Now I just want to work hard to update them! ! !

I, a poor man, imitated the 2,000 starting coins rewarded by the big guys, and asked the author when he would put it on the shelves. I want to read 30 updates, and two chapters a day are not enough.

After those few years... Eri grew up according to the route arranged by Kitagawa Temple... "Ah~, it's so boring~, when will Brother Temple come back~?" The salty egg who has become a famous female painter in Japan... No... Eri lay on the bed, stretched, and said with a salty expression. "Lililili~!" A phone call came. Eri stretched out her hand lazily and groped around on the table. Halfway through, she finally touched her "cheap" pineapple phone. "Hey~, who is it~?" "Me." Came the cold male voice. "So~, who is it~?" Eri asked stupidly, not knowing her own fate. "Your brother." "So what is it~..." ...Σ(°Д°; Wait what he said... "Brother, listen to my explanation." "Come to the airport to pick you up at seven o'clock tomorrow morning. Don't be late." Kitagawaji looked at the plane ticket indifferently. "Yes! Dear brother~, are you... . Hehe, that... Specialty~?" "Dudu~" Kitagawaji calmly hung up the phone and said to Mirai Kitagawa with a smile: "Throw away the previous gift." The next morning, watching Eri who didn't wake up until eight o'clock, Kitagawaji silently pulled out the prepared rattan from under the sofa...