Lord of the Sword of Order

Please stop writing emotional dramas. No matter how good your writing skills are, you can't stand this kind of approach. Like your current situation, the protagonist saves life, and then the heroine repays the favor. There are only two suitable ways to do it. One is that this is insignificant to the protagonist. With the help of the relationship between strong and weak and the relationship between repaying kindness and being repaid, the hierarchy is completely established, and there is no equality. The second one is that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist, the male protagonist desperately saves the female protagonist, and then the female protagonist gets promoted like a boss. Allow the desperate reasons to benefit. Like you currently, the heroine is basically useless and is still a tsundere, and then the protagonist makes various efforts to persuade her to quit. Oh, yes, there is also the tsundere aspect. Tsundere is a trait that, if you want to describe it as cute, it means that it is far more coquettish than arrogant, which is basically equivalent to being cute. Either the heroine is very useful, she helps the protagonist after she is proud, and she pays a lot of money. Like this heroine, she is useless and yet she is still arrogant every day. . . See for yourself what the effect is →_→

In fact, as an author, you have to believe in yourself and write according to your own plan without being disturbed by other things. Originally, your first deposit was over a million, so just keep writing. But if you have to rewrite it and your plan is completely messed up, you will definitely not be able to write. I hope I can write well this time, keep up the good work and look up to you.

If you dare to do it again you will be dead, just wait to change your vest😤😤😤

Hurry up and update it, the last one will be gone as soon as you keep it.

I would like to express my personal opinion. After reading the latest update, I am 10% dissatisfied. Both the male protagonist and the female protagonist are a bit brainless. The heroine Emilia is very unlikeable and has no regard for the fact that she is the matron and housekeeper of the hero's wife's family. Just for some cosmetics and a small profit, the male protagonist was sold, and those benefits were added to the story. The background of the novel is that the upper class in the Middle Ages were aristocrats. The bloodline that maintains family relationships. Although this is nominally a borrowed seed without inheritance rights, the bloodline is there. If the family becomes weak in the future, or something happens, can you guarantee that others will not use this bloodline to take a bite of you? Moreover, this period is still a special period of taking sides. Announcement of the borrowed seed at this time without any discussion with the male protagonist is equivalent to directly pulling the male protagonist onto someone else's chariot. Doesn't the heroine have this awareness? I remember that the heroine is from a noble family. Has what she learned in her original family been eaten? I really want to ask the author if he is afraid that the male protagonist will be too strong and put someone around him that will slow down the progress. Or maybe the heroine wants to take revenge for the destruction of her family. The most intolerable thing is that the male protagonist is complacent about having his seed borrowed. What is there to be happy about? Is there a shortage of women around the male protagonist? Aren't there female prisoners of war? Find them to vent your physical desires. If you like a noble person, why don't you go to a neighboring country to find a female noble? The value of force is no problem! Moreover, the sky is high and the emperor is far away, so there are no hidden dangers. The rabbit hasn't eaten the grass on the edge of the nest yet. This should be the most intolerable part. You are being treated as a bargaining chip, without ever asking yourself what you mean. It's like when you don't want to eat a certain kind of food during a meal, someone forcefully feeds it into your mouth, and while doing so, they say it's good for you. And this person is still your wife. I really want to ask the author about the sanity and caution of the protagonist. We readers want to read organized and logical novels, not this kind of novice Long Aotian Mary Sue. This routine has long been outdated. I know that authors have to work and write novels, which is very hard. I am also willing to spend money to subscribe to novels to provide the author with reasons and motivation to write, but what I want is not perfunctory or brainless. If the author needs to think about the plot, or feels tired and needs a rest, you can leave a note asking for leave and leave it to the readers. I don't know, but I understand and am very happy to wish you a blessing. I hope you can bring us better and more interesting novels.

I don't like Emilia myself, it smells like a Mary Sue. His family was destroyed, he was captured, and he met a handsome, powerful, noble, infatuated, pure and enlightened master with a bright future. He became a maid and then a housekeeper. She seduces the master and becomes the mistress. The old servant returns and the family status becomes more stable. Her husband is a virgin and she is bent on kneeling and licking her, giving up her status as a more noble and beautiful female aristocrat. My husband is famous all over the world and has a lot of money. A group of female nobles who were previously out of reach now kneel down and lick me. Now I think Emilia is a pig's trotters. Now she arranges for others to borrow seeds from pig's trotters. I don't care whether the person borrowing seeds is a rich woman or a king. I think this is an insult to men. She probably treats pig's trotters as a licking dog. We discussed it all without leaking any words, so she can only give up first. Goodbye!

She gets married out of nowhere and is poisoned to death. The protagonist is like a child. He does whatever he wants and abandons the book. I was originally looking forward to the plot of the royal capital. I can only say that the author's plot is reasonable.

The author acted like he had never seen a woman before, so he gave up and wasted my subscription.

Another person who sees a beautiful woman as his ancestor, and his enemies are all smart, and he doesn't even know how to use a better honey trap.

Why did the gods in the sky die by the sword? What did the gods do?