Nightmare Erosion

I, Lu En, am the protagonist. I am hiding nearby and watching the fight between you two. After the fight, I will come to collect the corpses, but I know that I am just an innocent person, so you people who kill me are bringing disaster to Chiyu. I am unreasonable and not a good person. Damn it. Thirty years of Hedong, Three Years Ten years in Hexi, I must teach you all a lesson in the future, and tell them that I have an old father and a lovely sister, and tell them not to cause trouble, let alone threaten me with my family, otherwise they will be asking for death 😒

The latest chapter should be the original transformation into a fairy. Upstairs, the author writes it very carefully, and the story's bright and dark lines are very exciting. Coming from the West to the East, I feel like I am a god in the prehistoric times. The book review area and this chapter say that a group of people are chattering. If you don't like it, just go to the upper right corner. If you look at the free book and criticize the author, you can love whoever you want. People who don't usually post book reviews just can't stand it anymore. Come on, author!

During this period, Xianyu was reading everyone's opinions. Except for the mindless comments, I wrote them down in a small notebook while rolling around, trying not to make these mistakes again. However, Xianyu is indeed a novice in coding, and I just read a lot of novels, so some You can only notice the problem after you write it down (the gap between writing novels and reading novels is really huge...). Originally, everyone responded that I wanted to revise the article, but after thinking about it, it might get worse the more I revise it, so I'll leave it to everyone 😭 I would also like to thank my friends who support Xianyu. Thank you for giving me encouragement and motivation. I will try my best to write a good story. For those friends who have no choice but to leave, Xianyu can only roll around and watch you go away. After all, it is difficult to reconcile with everyone. Xianyu is not a talented player, and he cannot write stories and plots that everyone likes (so desperate). He can only accumulate slowly. Friends who can't bear to leave, you can also leave paw prints below to see how many book friends I will lose, and by the way, encourage myself to try to bring you back one day (but don't criticize people~) (I've been a little heartbroken by all kinds of bad reviews recently, I hope everyone will be merciful, thank you all)

Recently, I have been seriously reading. Xianyu has received more than ten modified (deleted) website comments, but I don't have time to go back one by one and compare what is missing. I would like to ask all the book friends to leave a message after they find out, so that Xianyu can go back and modify it. Thank you all!

After reading half of it, I still want to read it, but I have to complain about it. Throughout the whole text, I feel that the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. Although the writing is okay, the handling of various details makes the protagonist feel a bit stupid. One of them is that the protagonist peeks from the side and keeps saying that he has been harmed by the fish pond. He feels very wronged, no! It's like you are watching from the sidelines when two groups of gangsters are fighting. At the very least, you need to be mentally prepared. If you don't have the absolute strength to peek from the sidelines, others will hit you if they don't. You have to be prepared for this when you are peeping, after all, the people inside are not ordinary people. This is written unreasonably. Moreover, the protagonist is not prepared enough. He clearly knows that the people inside can kill him at any time, and he does not even have the most basic plan. At the very least, he should have thought of an escape route first. I think this should be improved. The most important skill point is to ask whether the system can be used in a life-or-death situation. Isn't this something you should know when you first get the system? Just like a killer, you must prepare your own equipment before coming to kill someone. You must know what abilities you have, such as fighting, firearms, and assassination. If you forget your abilities, you will still be a killer with a hammer. In the same way, it feels like the protagonist doesn't care about his golden finger at all. This is your fault. If you don't care, who cares? You should always know the most basic abilities first, and then plan accordingly. If you say that you feel that the previous two skills are not suitable for adding points, so you save the skill points to add points to the powerful skills you will get later, I can understand it. But I feel a bit stupid if you ask the system if you can add more points in the final life-or-death crisis. I hope the author can improve it.

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Books with attribute flow are most afraid of the collapse of the power system. I hope the author can keep good records and never be inconsistent.

Alas, author, you are completely unable to control the family setting. There is a reason why there are so many orphans in the starting point. The biggest poisonous point in the early stage is the younger sister. I knew that my sister was in danger and that children were missing in the slums, but I didn't care. I knew that the enemy would attack my family, but I didn't take any precautions. If something happened, I would get angry and commit an act of rebellion. It's as if the author deliberately wanted to write off his family to death, but he also described the emotions between the protagonist and his sister in a superficial way. The sister is so cute and sensible. That's not how the plot is promoted. Let the author read this chapter and say, you were scolded miserably.

Xianyu is a new cute little girl. If there are any loopholes or mistakes, thank you for pointing them out. Some of the bugs in the previous article have been corrected. I hope you can continue to support Xianyu. Thank you for your support! ∩ _, ,_ ⊂⌒（`Д´)

Why does the protagonist have to let the enemy go every time, only to retaliate and block him again later? Does the protagonist have any attributes?