The Way of the Fighting General

This book would definitely be a masterpiece if it didn't collapse in the later stages. As a ten-year-old bookworm, it's the first time I read a novel with this theme. I hope to add more battles between the two armies in front of the city gate similar to the Three Kingdoms. In the later stage, if it is written as fantasy, the span of transformation is too big 🙂👍👍👍👍👍👍

I read it in one go and gave my opinion. There are too many complicated and complicated plots and the main line is unclear. Except for the exciting part of reversing the situation alone, there is basically no redeeming feature. Depending on the situation, I will travel around the mountains and rivers with 5 burdens and pretend to be bad, and then meet various people and write some various trivial matters. During this period, I will use my strength to solve the conspiracy that a certain person has been thinking about for 30 years, and then I will have a fight with a certain sword god, a certain world's number one, and then I will finish the book in a hurry. At first I thought it was a script about the God of War reincarnating to kill the Nine Heavens, but now it seems like a casual and entertaining novel about invincibility, which is a bit disappointing. It's not that the casual and refreshing content of Easy Invincible is not good, it's just that it's only 3% popular, and it's hard to keep up with it. This is one of the reasons, and the other is that the content level is a bit low-level, not rich enough and too monotonous. I understand everything. It doesn't mean that the author's writing is not good, but I don't think he will get good results if he keeps writing like this. Because at present, it is a typical story of starting high and going low. It was exciting at the beginning but the quality could not keep up and has been going downhill. If there is not a more exciting plot, I think a large number of readers will give up before Chapter 20. Of course, it is only a prototype and has not been released yet, so it is difficult to predict accurately. Furthermore, I feel that if I start so high at the beginning, there will be very little content to write later on. I will be able to write further, but I estimate that I will finish the book in less than 100 chapters. Otherwise, the quality of the entire book will be lowered, unless the outline is changed. This is because it is not a B-stream that has been accumulated for a long time, but a B-stream that is invincible as soon as it appears. But if the starting point is too high, the less content can be written. The less content, the less content. If you want to forcefully increase the content, it is like spreading poison, and the quality will be lowered. If you don't increase the content, you will soon run out of things to write and you can only finish the book in a hurry. There is a book called "Dazhao Zhutian", which is almost like the pretense of the world of the heavens. At the beginning, you pretend to be b and then travel through time and rebirth. The content of the first few chapters is a bit bad but not bad. The more you write, the better and more productive it becomes. Comparing the two books, the writing is better than this one. At least it still maintains high-quality content after it is put on the shelves. However, it has not been updated for more than ten days and it feels like it may have been cut off. The author can read that book and learn from it. If he feels that he cannot write the book, he can give up. Don't criticize me, tell the truth. If you say something wrong or offend someone, just treat it as a prank.

Fatty will release a new book on time. Please support me first.

New books will be released without any notice, come on!

After reading Chapter 40, I really couldn't read anymore. I started reading the book Tokyo Sword Master by the author, and read every subsequent book. The fighting scenes and training settings are really outstanding. I still remember the part about killing the gangsters in the early stage of Sword Master, but every book has the same problem. The protagonist has no big picture, no emotional intelligence, and always acts passively. No matter what realm, no matter how exciting the fight is, the words and deeds of the protagonist are written together. There is a sense of being submissive and a little family spirit. Some of my favorite authors are The Misguided, Cuttlefish, Diet Bread, Jing Keshou, etc. The protagonists in each of their works have an aura of magnificence, which makes people know that they are outstanding people at a glance. However, your protagonist always gives people a feeling of being lazy and drifting with the crowd. Your writing style is really about writing daily articles, stock trading is okay, a little personal opinion, call it a day, and go to bed.

Does anyone have the author's home address? I want to send the author a razor blade 😁🔪

Why didn't the author send a notice? Many "Urban Snake" book friends don't know that you have released a new book, otherwise there wouldn't be so few people supporting this book.

He actually came alive😰

Ah, this introduction really doesn't make a difference. I can't tell anything. New readers like me read the introduction first and then read the content. This introduction really makes people have no desire to go in. Take some time to write a good introduction.

If this book can continue to be written, it will definitely become a god! ! !