Cultivation Begins with Three Years of Time Travel

It made me laugh, I subscribed just to comment. The writing is so good, I skipped a chapter and it didn't affect the plot at all. It just prevents theft.

The book is really good. I have ordered all of it. Before writing this review, I specially gave a reward of 500 starting coins. (I was afraid of being criticized by the masters and saying that I am too poor to read these words. To prove myself) I originally wanted to give a reward of 50,000 🙂. This book is really good, really good, and suits my taste. I just have some questions about this release and the author❓The author said there will be more updates, but I read it from the beginning. Counting the updates you mentioned before on the day of release, where are your updates? In fact, you didn't say much in Chapter 2, but if you promise, you have to keep it. I personally take my promises very seriously. I will order it all and read it again, it is a good book.

I specially recharged 100, just to say a punctuation sentence, Zhen Ji, the best water in the world 🤐🤐🤐

Objectively speaking, this book has both good and bad qualities. In the early stage, it can be called a niche masterpiece, but in the later stage, it is an ancient and refreshing novel. There are two highlights, concentrated in the early stage: The first is the protagonist's character, who is diligent and practical, flexible and progressive, and never gives up. In the current circle of Internet protagonists who are as wise as demons and mature too early; they are stupid and naive and slowly mature and mature, he is a middle-of-the-road and relatively likable character. The second is combat power. The sense of oppression in the Dongzhen realm is very strong, and the sense of expectation is far and wide, and the rhythm of the novel can also proceed in an orderly manner. ——After changing the map of the Promotion Cave—— However, I have to say no, As the saying goes, success is also a failure. The poisonous point of this book is also here, mainly in the later stage: First, the character design. Everyone knows that the higher the level of cultivators, the less humane they are (a general rule), but not everyone will be more indifferent as the higher the level, especially this person cannot be the protagonist. You see, whether it is Shi Hao or Han Li, the higher their cultivation level, the more obvious their own characteristics are, whether they are proud or humble. However, the protagonist of this book becomes more and more indifferent as he gets stronger, and is no longer as bright and likable as the previous one. In particular, the author dedicated a large paragraph to describe the change of mentality abruptly and abruptly, which is too deliberate and obvious. The second is the combat power. The collapse in the later stage is too ridiculous. No matter how strong Dongzhen is described in the early stage, he will be a fool in the later stage. I think this is a flaw in the author's setting and description of Dongzhen's combat power, because in the article Dongzhen's strength is aimed at low-level monks, but once the protagonist is promoted, Dongzhen immediately becomes the so-called Taoist realm, and the protagonist basically suppresses it with his backhand. Dongzhen has no majesty anymore! The author's problem is that the protagonist at this time is too strong and upgrades too quickly. Not to mention that after decades of walking the same path that others have taken hundreds of years, within a few dozen chapters you are already among the best in the world. It's really vain! That's why the novel's only bright spot has been eliminated, so it has turned from a masterpiece into a weed.

I really can't stand it, the progress is too much. We respect the author when reading the original version. Please respect us readers too! ! ! I really can't stand it anymore. Author, please continue and stop reading! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

If you do this every day, no matter how popular you are, you will lose it. If it doesn't work, just find a class!

The author opened a trumpet. I just read a book called "I Cultivation in a Taoist Temple and Become an Immortal" on Qidian. The main character is Zhang Qingyuan, with the same golden finger template. Also convinced

I think you, the author, should reorganize the realm issue, otherwise it always feels like the book is going to collapse! Now that the previous foundation has been exhausted, after the eighth level, the protagonist cannot rely on a solid foundation to cross the border and fight the enemy. When in the outer sect, the protagonist moves steadily, looking at the panel to find the way forward, and surpasses most of the outer sect disciples to enter the inner courtyard, which is very well written. But after entering the inner courtyard, these should not be advantages. After all, can someone without any ability or ambition be able to enter the inner courtyard? Besides, I still have family and seniors. The protagonist's understanding of reading hundreds of books cannot simply make up for his mediocre qualifications. It can only be used at a certain time. For example, when killing monkeys to practice swordsmanship in the early stage, it is not so awkward when he understands the artistic conception of water. It feels like the protagonist becomes a little restless after entering the inner door. Whether it is the eighth level or the ninth level, in the final analysis, they are only small realms in the early stage, not even the true essence realm, so the qualitative difference is not that big! Now there are so many differences in each small realm. How to write after the True Yuan realm! Another point is that the protagonist has been practicing. Why is he practicing? Leave the family? Survive in this chaotic world? Immortality? To achieve this goal, what is the minimum step? I hope the author can make it clear! Don't write down what is needed, and then spit out some settings. To be honest, I feel a little tired from reading the book now, and I can't stand it anymore! I hope the author will take a look at the dozen or so chapters he has written recently! The setting of this book is very good! At first glance, the protagonist looks like a late bloomer in the sect. What others notice about him now should be his character, and other things that are not too prominent. I really hope this book ends as a good book.

I've read dozens of chapters... Subjectively speaking, I won't criticize the plot of the novel. The routine is very old, but in fact it doesn't matter. Telling a good story these days is more important than new ideas. After all, the content of the novel is more important than anything else, and it is not about invention. It's a pity that the author's writing style and writing ability have some problems... I feel like a high school student? For example, in cultivation, I am an ordinary person with ordinary talents. I can only improve through hard work. If you work hard and have average talent, these labels will basically mean you can't say goodbye to farming... Just develop slowly with the help of small hooks and the like. But this protagonist, 1 has no farming, 2 has no talents (settings), and 3 cheats only show proficiency. Then you just need to keep working hard and keep working hard to improve your level. Then what kind of talent can you call ordinary? Who can't work hard? The key is how many years you have to work hard, just like the first few chapters, it is understandable. After all, if the talent is not good, the liver will rise slowly, which is in line with the setting. The result is that after going down the mountain to hunt mice for the first time, it was like riding a rocket There is no other way to say it, it is liver, it is inconsistent A child with autism with cognitive defects is not better than the protagonist? He can't do anything, liver is over What I said is mainly to express The author wants to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but he is not willing to slow down the progress. At the beginning, it looks like a mortal, with Han Li-style development After a few chapters, it starts to look like Fighting to Break the Sky... At the end, it looks a bit like Chen Dong What about "suppressing one's whole life, pushing down peers", "gathering the power of oneself" A fight "Ahhhhh! I don't accept it, God is unfair" "Why!" Then there are all kinds of exclamation points ... If you fight, just fight, if you kill people and sell goods, just kill people and sell goods. Don't act like a drama queen, whether it's a fairy tale or a fantasy. The character must be realistic, full of hostility and ruthless villain Who is really killing people, who will mate with you... It is recommended to use the third perspective, surrounding environment, and characters to highlight the details of the battle and give a sense of immersion. Instead of this "Ah, I don't accept it! Punch me xxxx!" "What, it's impossible! How could I lose!" Write less embarrassing stuff... If it doesn't work, just be clean and neat Only in the first realm, novices peck each other, start a fight, and write it in seconds like a nuclear bomb explodes. How to write the next realm? The Big Bang? How do readers experience the power of the new realm, and how do they read the sense of oppression? Xian Ni, a biography of mortals cultivating immortals, including the exaggerated Chen Dong. Fights in low realms would not be so exaggerated... "Space is distorted, time is suspended, and the air waves are overwhelming" What is this for?

I had saved about 40 chapters before and didn't read them. Now I came back and read these 40 chapters and it only took me less than half an hour. And the more I looked at it, the more I frowned. Not only was it as dull as before, but it also completely changed, and it was more boring than a running account. This kind of writing state can only make me think that you are "cheating money". This kind of writing will only make you lose your subscription and lose some readers... If you encounter a writing bottleneck, I suggest that if you can't write or write a plot that you are satisfied with, then don't write. First, it is a sign of respect for readers who have genuine subscriptions. Second, it is also a relief for yourself, so that you don't have to force yourself to code. If you can't write, you should either take a leave of absence and go out to collect ideas, or read some related novels to see if they can trigger inspiration. 😴

All monthly passes are given, can I add more? ?

The author has been drinking a lot lately, which is bland and tasteless. Like chicken ribs, they are tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away!

Is this a system flow? The level rises too slowly. Anyway, the plot is as light as water. I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters.

I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 207. During the draw for the group stage of the outer sect competition, where did the protagonist keep begging his grandpa, grandma, and Bodhisattva, the Jade King, to draw a weak opponent? Why the hell are you begging them in a world with Immortal Emperors, Sword Immortals, and Sword Emperors? In order to make up for the word count, forget it. A good object-controlling skill is like sword-controlling in the hands of others. In the hands of the protagonist, he has mastered the Eastern Invincible Needle-controlling Technique, and even made a special set. When you write in the later stage, other immortal emperors have the momentum of being invincible and conquering the eternal world. Only the protagonist has a wretched face and is practicing it. Hehe, can you understand the Needle-controlling Technique? The enemy Immortal Emperor's pupils shrank and he asked in confusion, where did the needle come from?

There are cases of large-scale copy-pasting that is blatant. Ah Shui's mother really opened the door for Ah Shui and the water came home. R NM's money back! ! ! Not suitable for paid viewing

I have been fully subscribed. I saw that you were a bit stuck in the past few weeks, so I kept it. Why, when I read it again, you can write three or four chapters for a short plot. You write back and forth, and you keep writing about the protagonist to lay a solid foundation. You can write three or four paragraphs in one sentence. There is really no need to write like this. Isn't it delicious if you have the time to think about the plot? It's so annoying to read, all the words are repeated.

Keep going, it's getting boring. I'm going to give up the book. Your novel is not the only one I can read.

This book has a first-rate setting, a third-rate plot, and a third-rate writing style. At the beginning, I thought it was good to read, but the more I read later, the more I felt like it was worthless, tasteless, and a pity to discard. Finally, I vomited after eating it for a long time, and I couldn't stand it anymore. What a shabby book this is! The plot has no plot, the characters are disgusting, the writing is slow and weak, and there are too many psychological descriptions. Oh, maybe this shouldn't be called psychological description, but a spiritual monologue. In a battle, half a chapter is said in the heart! It is also filled with all kinds of self-pleasure of the author, such as the recurring statement in the article: What would happen to the protagonist in a conventional novel, but this is not a novel, and I, Zhang Qingyuan, don't think I am the protagonist, so what the hell. It's okay to show up once or twice. Are you going against the routine for the sake of going against the routine? And at the end of the writing, you yourself are also a routine writer. What is a routine writer? The plot is old-fashioned. After reading about 200 chapters, I can really read ten lines at a glance. It is water anyway, and I can understand the plot behind it with my eyes closed. There are also some logical errors and weak reasoning in the book. How is the author's high school argumentative essay writing? Can you write a novel just like this?

😥😥 It's my first time to write a book review, so it's really a bit watery. . . There are three or four chapters of a battle, and the inner monologue starts from one page. I felt very uncomfortable watching it, but I obviously like the setting and it feels very good. I also keep emphasizing that I am not the protagonist, unlike others who do not have a family or a golden finger. . . I just feel like you talk so much, you have such a rich heart, and you are such a boring person. Alas (๑óò๑) it's so cool that I turned the pages very quickly and basically skipped through them all without missing anything 😅

The author is too dumb, which Kavin can understand, but after thinking about the outline, at least intersperse some small plots to enrich the plot. What you are lacking, in fact, more characters can make more plots, at least it looks better. The plot is not bad before leaving Yuzhou, but after leaving Yuzhou, it becomes flooded, like a sky demon In fact, the city dungeon can be written longer, but the reality is that one or two sentences can summarize the plot. This may be because the characters only talk about a few characters, and the plot may be abrupt if more characters are added. However, in fact, the three levels can be described, and the role of the hook can also be highlighted in the middle. In fact, if you don't want to be fooled, let the protagonist join a sect. There are many characters, and there can be more plots. Like other novels, basically changing sects every time a world is released, which can not only enrich the protagonist's character relationship, but also describe the protagonist's growth. Also, when we were in Yuzhou, the protagonist walked the path of the sword. Outside of the Yuzhou, he didn't feel like he was walking the path of the sword much anymore. There was very little description, and it felt like the back of the sword pill, the natal magic weapon, was just a launcher. In fact, this novel is quite a pity, but if you polish it slowly, it will be difficult to read later.

An orthodox novel about immortality, recommendation index: four and a half stars in the early stage, three and a half stars in the later stage, you can buy it. Overall, it's pretty good. The main character travels through time, but the later plot is a bit too slow. Goldfinger was mediocre in the early stage, but got bigger and bigger in the later stage. The golden finger is a setting of the Unreal Phone system. I felt like it stepped on my thunder in the later plot. I don't like to watch particularly big golden fingers. There is currently no female lead.

The early stages are okay, but it's a bit verbose. Many things are repeated many times and will be continued later. Personally, I don't really like such low-level novels. I gave up after reading almost 200 chapters. Just consider it as food.

Can't continue writing after 300 chapters? Is this the rhythm of infinite nesting dolls? After all these years, your book is the only cultivation novel that can make me vomit! Other authors write a few chapters, but you write hundreds of chapters. It couldn't have been written by two people! Halfway through the writing, I sacrificed my life and replaced it with a water doll?

Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, just get a perfect attendance award

From the first picture to the present, the writing is too detailed and verbose, just like running water. Although the content is good, it is really like tap water, too watery.

Disappointment! Disappointed, the author got stuck and was disappointed after reading this

The funniest thing about this book is that the author has been belittling the behavior of the protagonists of traditional fantasy novels in the early stage, and has always wanted to create new routines. As a result, from chapter 200 onwards, the protagonists in his novels behave the same as traditional fantasy novels. The biggest flaw of this book is that the author suddenly changed his style, from a plain and slow way of cultivating immortals to a stream of ordinary mortals cultivating immortals (killing people and seizing gold belts). He failed to please both sides and eliminated most people. The most taboo thing about online writing is that he suddenly changes his style and makes it so vulgar. However, the author made a statement saying that there are hundreds of different kinds of people with the same rice, and there are not many NT villains. After making this statement, it turns out that all the characters are NT villains, which is extremely funny.

An ordinary article about cultivating immortals and farming. There is no such thing as family nonsense. There is no scheming by fellow disciples, only disputes among cultivators. This is what I think after watching it. This book is very nice. The author should do more py! Maintain the rhythm and quality. Don't listen to others. Write according to your own outline, otherwise you will have to compete with others in the later stage (splendid writing)! Come on. Already collected and recommended 4 votes. Keep it up! Come back to vote every day

🐷 Author, (can't find the dog head), I'm really crazy. If it weren't for the lack of books to read, (similar works), I would be too lazy to read your book. Can you update it quickly? It's really not enough to see. After settling the bill, I won't cover it anymore, so I will keep it for now.

The realms are too finely divided, the small realms are one, two, and three... There are junior high schools and high schools under the small realms, and junior high schools and junior peaks, but are the differences between the realms explained? Then how can the characters in the plot distinguish each other's realms at a glance? Is it possible that there is a sign hanging above the head that says "the early stage peak of the seventh level of Lingyuan" Feng... Think of a joke that reflects reality. This person is so powerful that he is "close to the final exam level in the second half of the first semester of the fifth grade in elementary school." Your level in the "monthly exam in the first half of the second semester of the fourth grade in elementary school" is definitely not his opponent.