The Outer Sect's Eldest Senior Brother

Can I like it if I want?

It's getting boring, there's not even a female protagonist, a bachelor story? What's the use of the protagonist's training to become stronger? It makes no sense.

Most of the books written about Gou are written as cowards.

Anyone with a clone will basically die! There are also those that can deprive others of their attributes, whether they are immortal or fantasy. I'm also a little bit puzzled. You said it's obviously easier to write about having a younger brother or accepting a little boy as an apprentice, but most of the books are about a little girl with incredible talents. Is it because everyone likes to read this kind of setting?

I've ordered them all, and I'm just giving some opinions. The most important thing is that the author writes it himself, and there is no need to consider my opinions. I personally feel that the writing style and plot design of this article are quite poor, but the story is very innovative. At least I am willing to spend money to read it. However, the author cannot stop writing these things because of some of his own weaknesses. If you want to make money from this, you must strengthen this aspect, instead of writing about 3 chapters every day. So no matter what, I feel that the author still has to work hard to shape the world he writes. No matter whether it is good or bad, as long as there is progress, readers will be happy watching it, and the author will be motivated to continue writing, or simply let the protagonist pretend to be a big b, because I think it is developing in this direction. In this way, simply change to a show-off style, instead of the so-called self-deception of low-key, which honestly affects the viewing experience, and there is no need to bother using clones to suppress the increasingly powerful protagonist's influence and forcefully keep a low profile.

I really can't understand what you are writing. Many things appear suddenly and then disappear again! ! Just like when I wrote my primary school composition, I passed it like a running account. No excitement or excitement. . How about starting a new one?

Starting from the point where you can add any physical object, the whole system of the book collapses. If you think about it for a moment, there will be a lot of bugs.

Some people pretend to be pigs and dogs, and they become real pigs and dogs by pretending.

The Gou in my heart also needs to know what will happen with other people's attacks, how to defend myself, and try to raise my own level as high as possible. If I fight with others, my level will be crushed. My status in the sect should be high but unimportant. If the cultivation level and combat power of the people in the sect are raised to a higher level, there will be no need to take action yourself, etc.

I feel that the protagonist is too tolerant towards Yun Xin. Regardless of whether she has caused too much trouble for the protagonist before or after awakening her memories, the protagonist has not hung her up and whipped her.