The Outer Sect's Eldest Senior Brother
外门大师兄
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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It's getting more and more boring. There's not even a female lead. Is this a bachelor novel? What's the point of the protagonist being so powerful? It's meaningless.
Most books about being cautious and cunning end up being written as cowardly.
Those with clones are basically doomed! And those who can strip others of their attributes, whether it's a fantasy or a martial arts story. I'm also a little puzzled; having a younger brother or taking a young boy as a disciple would obviously be easier to write, but most books feature a girl with extraordinary talent. Is it because everyone likes this kind of setup?
A small suggestion
I've subscribed to the entire series, just offering some feedback. The author's writing is the most important thing; my opinion doesn't matter. Personally, I think the writing style and plot design are quite poor, but the story itself is very original, at least I'm willing to pay to read it. However, the author can't let their weaknesses prevent them from writing these things.
I honestly can't understand what this is about. A lot of things just pop up suddenly and then disappear! It's like my elementary school essay—just a stream of consciousness. No passion, no interesting points. Maybe I should start a new one.
The entire book's structure collapses the moment you start adding points to any physical object; a little thought reveals a ton of bugs.
Some people, pretending to be pigs or dogs, eventually become real pigs or dogs.
My sense of security also includes understanding how others' techniques will affect my defense, and trying to raise my own cultivation level as high as possible so that I can easily overwhelm others in battle. My goal is to have a high but unimportant position within the sect. Furthermore, by raising the cultivation levels and combat power of everyone in the sect, I can reduce the need for myself to intervene.
It feels like the protagonist is too lenient with Yun Xin. Whether before or after she awakens her memories, she causes the protagonist so much trouble, yet the protagonist never punishes her.