The Spider Overlord of the Primordial World

To be honest, Da Luo's strength is indeed written too low. This is a poisonous point. Jin Xian is probably quite the immortal who covers the sky. They all have the symbol of immortality and can achieve immortality without relying on the world, let alone Da Luo. Luo Cai has a lifespan of more than 9,000 years. No matter how weakened it is, it is not like this. You can't write much, so you should change it as soon as possible, otherwise your novel will be defeated. The first part is considered a masterpiece, but here it is a poisonous one. It was originally well written, but it will slowly become popular over time. At this point, it has persuaded a large number of people. If you change it, you may get better. If you don't change it, you will die. I am just giving you a suggestion. The decision is in your hands.

No one has been there for so long, let me get a back door

I read that there is still some controversy in the book review section, so I will share my opinion. Why Honghuangliu is so popular is because its originators did not just write it out of their heads when they wrote the book. People checked a lot of information to draw a clearer line out of the messy traditional mythology, and made a clear logical summary of most of the mythological settings. After so many years of fermentation, the setting of Honghuangliu was recognized by most readers. Regardless of whether it was inspired by modern novels or not, in most modern novels In the impression of readers after reading so many books (the current generation of readers has not completely changed, more than half of them are old readers of about ten years), Daluo Jinxian is the apex of the immortal class, and above it is the saint (also known as Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian, also known as Daluo Jinxian who has attained Taoism). He is the top of the pyramid in novels set in the prehistoric times, so his power is destined not to be low. If it is low, readers will not be able to stand it. There is nothing to argue about. Of course you can innovate and incorporate your own ideas, but the basic framework must not be changed, that is, the plot can be changed, but the basic settings cannot be changed. You have the ability to add your own characters at will, but if you try to change the three-clear to four-clear, Da Luo is top-notch. How can readers who like the settings like the minions recognize what you write. The background of the story is the prehistoric period rather than traditional mythology. Since I borrowed other people's settings to save trouble, I have to abide by other people's rules. Since the word "prehistoric" is written, readers will naturally demand the author based on the "prehistoric" setting. There is nothing wrong with this. You slap your hands and say that this is my prehistoric life. Do you recognize it and readers don't recognize it? Is this author writing a book for self-pleasure or to support his family? Self-pleasure treats me as my fart and drives away those who don't want to read. The rest are your like-minded friends. If you want to break through and innovate on the original basis, it is not that easy to change the inherent impression. You must first have the qualifications, the ability, your own one-third of an acre of land, and a large number of people to follow you. Then you can try, and you may not necessarily succeed. There are a large number of people writing about the Great Desolation at Qidian, including some great masters, and they all contain private goods to some extent. But has the Great Desolate Current been shaken? Not clear enough? If you don't have the ability to go upstream, then go down the river and slowly approach the shore and finally turn out of a tributary to find a smooth path. Some people say that the birth of Honghuangliu did not cite the traditional mythological settings. People are asked to provide evidence at every turn. Those who refute with your mouth have to check the information. Once the evidence is conclusive, you have nothing to say. Why, you are the leader! Why don't you first come up with evidence that others don't cite tradition? (Dog head saves life) Another person believes that the starting point of the Honghuang style is almost immortality. The ones going down are either Taoist boys or little demons and have no qualifications to appear. Jindan and Yuanying are all settings of Xianxia. Strictly speaking, they are not a school (the goals of Xianxia are to become immortals, live forever and be free, while the goals of Honghuang are mostly detachment, luck and immortality). It is just that the two fit well and were written together.

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Blowing Da Luo all day long transcends all time and space. It is very cultural and does not allow modification. It has no spirit of verification? I don't know that Da Luo was started by modern Internet writers? Or should I just go to Baidu Encyclopedia and copy a few paragraphs and come back? Did you just start blowing? Or do you think that Taoist Daluo is the Daluo that is mentioned in the current Internet articles? What is the eternal freedom of all time and space, a proof of eternity, jumping out of the long river of destiny, eternity, and the only one in the world. If I can find these in Taoist classics, I will lose. The Taoist definition of Daluo Tianxian is very simple, it is a fairy who has ascended to Daluo Tian. By the way, the highest in Taoism is the immortal. Jinxian refers to heretics in Taoism. As for the word "Da Luo" encompassing all things, I want to say that the word "Da Luo" is so sacred? I thought that the literal meaning of the word "Da Luo" is just that. You all dismiss the concepts of "omniscient and omnipotent", "transcending everything" and "absolutely invincible" this time. Is the word "Da Luo" so special? Then you might as well go and brag about "Wuji"?

Emmmm, to be honest, are you traveling around the world in a world where saints are alive, Jun Hong is the Taoist, there are many Daluo, and the golden immortals are everywhere and the immortals are not as good as dogs? How awesome is your golden finger backstage to be able to walk in and out of the prehistoric world like a little girl? ┐（─__─）┌

Also, the heroine, the original character should be the Queen Mother of the West, right? , You changed the name of Taishang Laojun to Moral Immortal, you also changed the name of Queen Mother of the West to Xiyao, you just changed the names and surnames in the entire prehistoric period to Hongjun Patriarch, Yuanshi Tianzun to Yuanshi Laoer, Emperor Jun to Emperor Donghuang Taiyi to Donghuang Mrs. , When writing, you have to think about whether the names of the characters in Honghuangliu can be changed randomly. It doesn't matter those supporting characters, but it will not do you any good if you change the names of the main plot characters. Can you understand what I mean, author!

Zhe Tian is rubbish. The Great Emperor only has a lifespan of 20,000 years, not even a hair on the legs of the Prehistoric Immortal. The soul is still very weak. Not to mention comparing with Taoist Yuanshen. The emperor is dead, and even ghosts can't do anything. After the death of an immortal, the soul can still live on forever. Any immortal can cast a spell to curse the emperor to death. Zhetian is a world where one cultivates his nature but not his life.

The biggest poisonous point of this article is the comparison between the realms of Zhetian and Anhuang. In fact, I am not the author of the criticism. What is Taiyi? What is Da Luo? Let me put it bluntly, Daluo and Taiyi are in the same realm, but the Taoist is called Daluo, the casual cultivator is called Taiyi, and as for Buddhism, it is called Dajue. Speaking of Zhetian, Brother Dong said on WeChat that the Immortal Emperor is equivalent to the Great Luo, what are you talking about? In addition, these two are not the same world at all. If you really want to compare, it should be the Great Emperor corresponding to the Tribulation Period, then the Red Dust Immortal corresponds to the Earth Immortal, the Immortal King corresponds to the Celestial Immortal, the Quasi-Immortal Emperor corresponds to the Golden Immortal, and the Immortal Emperor corresponds to the Daluo, Taiyi, Dajue and other realms. Plus, isn't there a God above perfection? You have now brought the Immortal Emperor's combat power to the saint level. Then, when Brother Dong writes out the background of Heaven, what is the realm of the big boss in it? Is everyone a Daoist? Everyone said that Zhe Tian can reverse the course of time, and how powerful it is. But brothers, have you ever thought that there is no way of heaven to cover the sky? Why don't you go back to the ancient times and try to go back in time? Let's not talk about whether you can find it or not. Even if you find it, believe it or not, as soon as you touch it with your front foot, God will send down a world-destroying thunderstorm with your back foot and chop you into pieces! The intensity forms of the world are different. What are you talking about? In scientific terms, the two are not in the same dimension at all! If you are really brainless, then go to Fei Lu, I believe you, you will definitely find true love somewhere👍👍

Those who say that Da Luo was given a life span of 9,000 years by the Heaven-shading Heaven should not speak nonsense if you don't understand the myth. Do you think Da Luo can live forever only by forcibly confronting the way of heaven? Daluo changes with the changes in the outside world, but no matter how he changes, he is immortal. Let me use an analogy. Emperor Zhetianli lived for ten thousand years, but the Big Dipper existed for at least hundreds of thousands of years, and it could continue to exist without being destroyed. When Da Luo comes to Zhe Tian, ​​he changes according to his heart. The external manifestation is that although he practices and moves around, Heaven still thinks that he is as eternal as the stars. There is no way that the way of heaven can be strong and powerful.