Martial Arts Across the Heavens

Even if you wanted to write a large map, you shouldn't write it like this. A town with tens of millions of people, you're being too ruthless.

The main problem is that the world should have been set up exactly as it was originally, but they insisted on creating a hodgepodge of things.

It's so ugly, especially the martial arts realms. They've even shown the peak of the early stage of the Acquired Realm! It's so weird. Why not just divide it into a hundred levels directly? They could just state the exact number of levels in the Acquired Realm.

The writing is so awesome! The fight scenes are all happening in the city, so it doesn't feel out of place at all!

First of all, I've only read about 200 chapters so far, so this is just my current impression. The first point of contention is that at first, it seemed pretty good. The protagonist knew how to be patient, and there weren't many messy issues within the family. However, things got increasingly chaotic as the story progressed.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt like throwing up. It's utterly nonsensical. Just changing the name of *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer* and putting it in—don't you find that disgusting? The whole book is ruined.

Sigh! I really have so much to say. Whether you create your own story or not, the first step isn't a concise introduction to the world's background and cultural atmosphere, followed by a simple and clear outline of the main plot developments, and then the characterization of the protagonist and description of the antagonist.

Movies and TV shows are popular because they create a sense of immersion. But if you create a parallel world that's ambiguous and doesn't connect with the characters, people lose that immersion and can't watch it anymore. I hate drastic alterations. Either be original or respect the original work.

This is a very good novel. The fight scenes are well-described, the vocabulary is not dry, and it's very engaging—a very standard fantasy novel writing style. The author's writing is superb. Furthermore, the portrayal of the powerful characters is very appropriate; unlike some novels where top-tier powerhouses are depicted as petty thugs.

Having read over a hundred chapters, even with my years of reading experience, I found this book difficult to understand. The difficulty lies in the abrupt transitions between plot points and the lack of logical coherence. While other books flow smoothly like water, this one is like swallowing thorns. Simply put, the author lacks an outline and has poor writing skills. New readers don't need to try it.