The Hound-Headed Grand Strategist

The author, after reading more than ten chapters, I found that your description was too detailed. How to practice the exercises, explanation of terminology, mentioning a certain thing repeatedly, etc. A suggestion, the language needs to be concise. It is a metaphor for cultivation. Everyone only looks at the results and does not care about the cultivation method. There is no need to introduce everyone in detail (except plot characters).

In the first chapter, the protagonist poured a glass of wine, but in the tenth chapter, the glass of wine was still warm 🤓

The author has entered the palace? ?

Pig's Foot wants to escape and take Su Yushi's family to the capital? Do you want to repay the favor of saving his life? His wife and daughter committed themselves to thieves. How can people know about this shame and humiliation? It's too late to kill people and silence them. I don't know why Pig's Foot is so stupid.

Shui, you are quite skilled at this. How long does it take you to describe a scene? How many chapters have it been? Just this scene! It's like a shot (he stepped out of the door) to you. (He walked over slowly. The sound of his footsteps already revealed a bit of desolation. He frowned as if he was deep in thought. What was he thinking? Is there anything different about last night's scene from usual? Or was he thinking about the time when he just left? Are the words appropriate? I still think about how to go down the road. Should I turn left or right after exiting the gate? If I go left... If I go right... Maybe I shouldn't be so impulsive. As he got closer to the gate, he raised his head slightly and looked at the already stained door. He thought to himself: If it weren't for the word limit, I could still be good...

More than 500 chapters later, the protagonist is still wandering up and down that mountain.

This is my first book. I couldn't stand it and even abandoned it. It's so rubbish. It keeps repeating irrelevant words. It's very toxic. It's a waste of time to read it.

When I read Chapter 9, for the entire 9 chapters, the male protagonist didn't leave his room, and he was all writing about his inner drama.

This is really a bit confusing. One chapter is all about the difficulties of escaping, and I have said it several times before. The escape route needs another chapter 🙂🙂🙂🙂

This is one of the most verbose books I have ever seen. If you want to see it, be mentally prepared.