Cultivating Immortality Through Formations

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Is the subject matter good? It's just too little and too slow? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The idea is great, but it feels like the positioning is wrong. It was amazing to read the first part, but I had no idea of ​​reading the second part. I summarized it, probably the author initially created a story of grievances and hatreds like those in the Jianghu, that is, the traditional world of immortality, where people are killed and people are killed. As a result, the protagonist did not rely on the array patterns to cultivate immortality, and went to create a mobile phone greenhouse, which felt a bit unprofessional. The most important thing is that you have a mobile phone, you have to cooperate with others, and give others a share. The way you write in Shuangwen is to seek death. In addition to this, there is another person who studies formation patterns. Big brother, you are not the only one with this golden finger. Another one is committing a big death. If you write according to traditional immortality novels, even if it is not a big hit, it will not be bad, but if you write it this way, it feels too complicated and does not have a clear goal. For example, in the world of cultivating immortals, whether you want to cultivate immortality, immortality or transcendence, as long as you set a good goal, Golden Finger will only be used to achieve your own goals, whether it is planting space, system, or xxx with you. Don't suddenly start cultivating immortals, feel bored, and then suddenly say, I want to hold a show in the world of cultivating immortals. I am a singer, and I decided to use golden fingers to help achieve my goals. Do you think it's a show or not?

Bet, it's a cliched and childish plot. The problem is that I feel that the author didn't handle it well, and it makes people feel frustrated when watching it. … Not to mention pig's feet as time travellers. It doesn't mention how good the Formation Dao cultivation is, nor how good it is at the tenth level of Qi training. Since you don't believe it, why waste any more words? You've already disbelieved it several times, and you're still rushing to prove yourself? Bet, pig's feet are really bad for spiritual stones! ! If I had left in a hurry, why should I be discriminated against? He was the one looking for someone to break the formation, not me. Medicine cures diseases, and Buddha saves destined people. The two chapters I wrote are like urban novels asking people to cure their illnesses. The person who is sick is him, not me. If you don't believe me, I will go to whoever I want. Not a big shot! What a big tail! ! Besides, this is a novel about cultivating immortals. You are going to make this,,, old-fashioned urban slap-in-the-face plot. It's disgusting. They are not ordinary people. They are so ignorant and have so little practice. I thought it was okay at first. Although there were some minor flaws, the novel theme was still good. However, with the release of Chapter 80, I felt that my thousand-point investment was in vain. … Maybe my opinion is a bit harsh. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to do it. I just feel a little uncomfortable watching my favorite novels go into the abyss of cliché. ... The above represents my personal opinion. Don't ask where the flying flowers will go. They will be cold if they stay, and they will be hurt if they fall. Injured in the whereabouts.

After reading Chapter 26, I realized that this book is not a good book, but it is not poisonous either. It just has some flaws that I should complain about. I don't have any malicious intentions personally, nor am I a troll. The author may have less experience in writing books, so some places are not handled very well, and many things are not explained clearly. The social environment in which the protagonist lives is a developed industrial civilization of cultivation, a feudal society with many families and clans, or a social background of unified dynasties or war-torn countries. Is it a big force dominating the world, or many forces working independently. The protagonist in the first chapter is plowing the land, just plowing the land. There is no protagonist to emphasize whether it is physical time travel or soul time travel, whether there are relatives and friends of family members, etc. There is no introduction about where the land for farming comes from. It cannot be said that it appeared out of thin air. In the small valley of Wu Rong, there is just such a place. There is no clear scope of how big it is, nor when it began to exist. The valley has at least one or twenty people. Shouldn't there be a manager in this situation? Not Wu Rong, but a role like a housekeeper. Wu Rong said he was going out for three or four months, so he was really going out for three or four months. Aren't you afraid that people would forget something and come back to get it? And since the protagonist is still there for two and a half months, isn't he afraid of coming back early? If a gentleman doesn't stand behind a dangerous wall, why doesn't he run away as soon as he can get out? The protagonist also knows little about immortal cultivators and has no understanding of their methods. Why is he still stupidly staying there? Aren't he afraid that others will plant some tricks on him? Moreover, Liu Hong, who was in conflict with him, was taken with him when he ran. If this kind of person does not use it to establish his authority immediately, he is really a great saint, and saves it to cause trouble later. When he ran, he also took Liu Hong with him. Shouldn't he run separately to attract firepower for himself? For Li Jie, Wang Zun also feels that there is no beginning or end here. How was this place discovered and what its origins are. And if you catch someone randomly on the street, damn it ZZ! The protagonist is a newbie with no reputation. He just bought a few formation books and was caught. Aren't you afraid that he is a beginner who doesn't understand anything?

I always use the three views of my previous life as a shield to not kill people. If I were to travel through time, I wouldn't treat them as human beings if I were not from the same earth and China. How about the NPCs in the game? Would you treat them as human beings? ? ? The author is so funny! Mother's Heart

Welcome the author out of the palace [Spread flowers] [Spread flowers]

First of all, thank you very much for writing such a long paragraph to remind me. Thank you very much. However, due to limited space, I can only reply on another floor. I hope you can understand. Since the role of "programmer" has been chosen as the protagonist, it goes without saying that the protagonist's development of software and special magic weapons is definitely a matter of course. However, the current contradiction is mainly focused on the "practice". The protagonist has practiced the Hunyuan Immortal Technique, which makes his cultivation speed too slow, so now he is basically focused on finding the technique and trying to increase his cultivation speed. Let me reveal some more outlines. To be honest, in my setting, the Qi Refining Period is the period when the protagonist collects "puzzle pieces." That is to say, during this period, all the protagonist's encounters, things obtained, and people he meets are all preparations for the future. Therefore, during the Qi Refining Period, it may seem a bit low-key. After all, the protagonist has nothing now. Even the exercises are recognized as "junk exercises" in the world of immortality. His only formation talent has not yet gained a reputation. As for the risk of helping others crack the formation, there will definitely be this. Otherwise, I would not have designed such a plot to let him be tricked this time. Therefore, during the Qi refining period, it may not seem that exciting. This is where I didn't consider it well. I only wanted to let the protagonist collect the "puzzle pieces" needed in the later stage, but ignored some of the fun points during this period. Regarding your suggestions, I will consider them carefully and make modifications later. However, due to the limitations of the outline, the modifications during the Qi Refining Period may be relatively limited. Finally, I am very grateful to this book friend for his careful reminder, thank you very much!

After reading a few chapters, I decided it was a good book. I like this kind of fairy tale that combines the cultivation of immortality with modern industry, but it seems like a eunuch.

The author creates mortal skills that harm the world and is the creator of evil cultivators. If mortals can practice the world, the upper limit of the skills, the speed of cultivation, and the production of spiritual energy in the world will be messed up. The skills created by the protagonist are not merits but sins. If mortals can practice them, basically all people will be evil. 90% Of the evil cultivators will have a world war, or the world's spiritual energy will be exhausted. And the author Li Zhiyuan is funny.