Planting the World Tree from Pirates

The protagonist can defeat Yamamoto Genryu Sai Shigekuni, but in the One Piece world and the Shichibukai fight back and forth, the combat power system collapsed.

I thought the best-seller selections were all high-quality products...

Drive high and walk low, I checked my eyes, this is a book I can't hold on to. Bye everyone!

The first three or four chapters were written in a protracted and tiring way, but when it came to the Pirates and Demon Slayer chapters, they seemed to be okay, but when it came to the Death chapter, it just fell apart. I wasn't even a great swordsman yet, but I could beat the bosses of the Death World. Finally, when I got back to Pirates, I couldn't even fight Hawkeye. It felt like I had changed authors. . .

Kirito couldn't help clenching his fists, and his nails even pierced into his flesh, and drops of bright red blood flowed out ??? Are you excited about writing, author?

I feel that the plot of rescuing Guyina gives people a strange feeling. In theory, rescuing people requires a race against time. But it feels like the protagonists are not nervous. Originally, it is normal to enter the dojo to save people and then obtain information and weapons, but then the instructor actually knelt down and argued with the protagonist for a long time. Brother, don't you want to save people? The same thing happened to the fishermen later on. After rescuing people, they would collect information and then leave, and then they would trade blows with each other in business. Your time is very valuable? This was a routine many years ago. It was necessary for the plot to waste so much time that Gu Yina would not die.

Author, I am a reader who has read your book, Marvel's Cute King. I hope you will sign the contract as soon as possible so that I can reward you. Your writing is really good. Although I am only 4 years old, I have read two of the best books, one of which is yours. Thank you for accompanying me for 4 years. ありがとう

All the bells and whistles are not so comfortable to watch 😅

The beginning is really good, but it starts to drag on a lot from Shihe. A small boss is so difficult to complete for so many chapters.

Too few, there are too few sentences describing Sugou's torture, I'm not satisfied

The overall evaluation can be said to be a good article, so if you don't have to read it, you can read it. Originally, looking at the performance of the system at the beginning, I thought that the author was well versed in poetry and literature, but looking back, I felt that this evaluation was really hasty. For an author who has written many novels, the character control and positioning of the characters in the book are quite poor. The advancement of the story and plot can only be said to be unsatisfactory, and the control of the text is not enough to pave the way reasonably. Instead, there are a lot of meaningless descriptions. The author tries to capture everything, but nothing is satisfactory. For me, the only advantage is the subject matter. After all, several of the works selected by the author are very popular. To sum up, the score can only range from 4 to 6 points.

I think the demon slayer chapter of this book is the best so far. I felt it burned me when I was fighting Muzan, but the pirate chapter is not satisfactory. I hope the author will continue to work hard! (The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.)

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It's good to watch, but I think it's better to continue writing One Piece

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Overall, it looks pretty good. I read a book review section and many people said that the Pirates section was not well written. I thought it was okay and had some internal flavor. The writing is quite good, at least it suits my taste. Good luck to the author.

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Reading the new chapter gave me a headache. Why do you want to deal with the navy? There are some corrupt people in the navy, but is this the reason why you want to deal with the navy? Without the navy, so many pirates wouldn't be able to make a world of difference. Don't talk about pirates for their ideals. Anyone with a correct outlook on life knows that a thief is a thief. If you want to be an idealist, why fly the pirate flag? The world government is corrupt and incompetent. How can you use the navy to attack it? The reason for dealing with the navy is not for your own code, and to put it bluntly, it is not for your own selfish desires. How many people have died in the navy protecting the order of the sea? How many people were killed in the pirate era started by Roger? Also revolutionary, don't insult this word. How can an adult author look at the world of pirates from a macro perspective? As a soldier, I am annoyed by people like you.

I feel like every Sword Art Online novel is a little intentional about pursuing Asuna (I think)

This book is very good, but I don't think the description of civilization is right. You said that in great civilizations there will also be infancy, youth, middle age, and old age, but they are just not great enough. The Zero Returners in the Three-Body Problem may no longer have this problem, and who is sure that there is no higher civilization?

Actually, the beginning of One Piece is more attractive, but the rest feels boring. . This is just my personal opinion, if anyone has the same opinion as me, please give it a thumbs up

Reporting, the previous one was very good.

The plot of the sword made me accumulate a lot of complaints. God, it takes three seconds to launch a sword skill. I don't say whether this setting is reasonable or not, and whether the game experience is good. But I don't feel that it takes three seconds to launch a sword skill in the combat description. It feels contradictory, so how is the three seconds calculated? Or is it that the combat looks smooth, but actually it means that you have to stop and take a few seconds to guide the sword skill 😅😅😅😅

One Piece hurts people a lot. After watching One Piece, I went shopping and saw a pair of handsome men and women walking in front of me. So I took off my coat, revealing Ivan's clothes, put on Kizaru's expression, imitated Smoker, lit two cigars, and walked Brother Ming's pace made a Pika laugh and he stretched out his hand to the boy and said, "Give me some face, be my son." Before he could react, he said to the girl next to him, "Miss, can you show me your vagina?" Everyone around was shocked and looked at me in surprise, so I put on the contemptuous posture of the empress and said that no matter what bad things I do, the whole world will forgive me because I am so handsome. Unexpectedly, in a few minutes, I would have the head of Green Pepper, the eyes of Fujitora, the teeth of Blackbeard, the hands of red hair, the legs of Aokiji and the fate of Whitebeard!

Hello everyone, I am a weak water, a weak water with weak feelings.

The author doesn't know a rule: those who watch Pirates don't watch Naruto, and those who watch Naruto don't watch Pirates

This one!

Why is it that when I read novels at Qidian, the chapter names always remind me of Station B?